Date: 04/13/2005 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 14
This story has me hooked, and I'm not usually a huge fan of Sweet 16 fics. I think its that the dialog and situations are so realistic, you've really made us feel that they belong together. I love the bits of humor, and the way they are determined to make it work all these years later. Kudos! Now, update! Please!
Date: 04/12/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Loved the update. Great story! More soon!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 14
Again more with the realistic sex. It's so cute. Although you ought to even it out with present day sex so that it's not so anticlimactic (funny... I know). They are so funny together. Are they going to get busted when they get back?
Date: 04/11/2005 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 14
good update
Date: 04/11/2005 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
that was so cute. i love dthat part were buffy told him to go pee in a cup and he actually took her seriously. keep up the great work . i loved this chappter. you are a great writer. i can't wait for more. please PLEASE post soon.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
It's good to know that even when he was gone, he still loved her and thought about her so much. Oh well for Dru LOL Such a sweet fic:)
Date: 04/11/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
Very sweet and tender at the end.....after getting the embarrising moments out of the way......I so pictured William with the pink flowery purse....I'm still cracking up about it.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
Aww! What a sweet chapter! P{lease update soon cause I can hardly wait for more!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
awesome chapter. soo glad you updated. cant wait for more. awesome job.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 14
TNX for the update! The flash to the past was fun; now I keep my fingers crossed that it'll work for them now.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:43 am Title: Chapter 13
This story is absolutely adorable.
Date: 04/08/2005 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
great update
Date: 04/08/2005 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
awesome chapter. love the story. cant wait for more. great job.
Date: 04/08/2005 - 06:08 am Title: Chapter 13
Totally love it!!! waiting for more!
Date: 04/07/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great! i love it! more more more!
Date: 04/07/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
I freaking love ur story!!!!!!!! i want a william too!!!!!!!!!! they are so cute together and ugh!!! i just love this story!!!!!!! plz update soon...plz...plz ...*gets on knees and begs* plz :D
Date: 04/07/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow! Great capter (and hot!) ; ) This fic is really incredible, so please update soon!
Date: 04/07/2005 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
This was great. It was all so realistic. I really liked this chapter.
Date: 04/07/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
Love this story!
Date: 04/07/2005 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
great chapter i cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 04/07/2005 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
great chapter i cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 04/07/2005 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm so happy they slept together in the normal time LOL And it's good that they seemed to be doing pretty well together in the flashbacks. It's too bad that things didn't go well in between then and now, though...but hey, they're together now, and that's all that counts:)
Date: 04/07/2005 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
What have I done to deserve this? I got to read two chapters almost in a row :) Now I'm keeping my fingers crossed for the "present" pair that all will go well. Because in the past, something happened (or someone?)
Date: 04/07/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
As always, fun to read :) And not only because of the hands *smile*
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