Date: 05/17/2005 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. I can't wait to read the next.
Date: 05/17/2005 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter 29
Loved the update. I hope Rack's bad photos are of the Angel bashing kind and not the Spike bashing kind. Nice plotlines for the whole day and chapter. Look forward to the next update. The character interactions are wonderful.
Date: 05/17/2005 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 28
HEY!!!!
what happen.....you just stopped the story!!!
not good at all i tell yea!!!!!!
Forever Luv
Author's Response: It's not stopped, just posted 29, LOL
Date: 05/17/2005 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 28
Faith's "no one ever tells me no" was a bit ominous, but I loved the way Buffy brushed her off. I like the asides about Buffy and Willow living within their means and not wanting to accept expensive presents from Wes and Spike. They really haven't known each other that long, and it's believeable for the characters. The noose seems to be tightening around Angel's neck, and he's too thick headed to notice!
Date: 05/14/2005 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 28
well you should know by now that i love this story so much!! so please update soon...thanx ;)
Date: 05/14/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 28
Loved the chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 28
darn Angel is one extremely psychotic idiot...waiting to see what the surprise is.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter 28
Good update. Good thing Buffy told Spike about Angel. Although it didn't exactly come out when she wanted it to, it was bet for it to be out in the open. Good update. Look forward to the next one.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 28
aww how sweat i cant wait to read wen he gives her the ring, it going tobe so cute. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i love how u brought in tara, i love her character and am happy that shes included. im so happy that colin interferred with him spying on spike andr buffy, also i hope he does something really bad to angel, i hate him. please update as soon as u can, i love this story and im dying to see wat happens next thanx
Date: 05/14/2005 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 28
I was so relieved when Colin stopped Angel. I can't wait until everyone kicks it to Angel. Will definitely be my favorite chapter.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter. *REALLY* looking forward to the next few. UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
Date: 05/13/2005 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 28
What a kickass chapter - it was awesome! Can't wait for more, so please update soon!
Date: 05/13/2005 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 28
i really like your story so far. i think Angel really needs to be punished. Serverly! I love how you have portrayed all the main characters and my main wonder is "what is this colin guy upto?" i cant wait for the next update! Alexiyanna...
Date: 05/13/2005 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 28
I love when couples have the relationship talk...I'm such a girl, lol. Very cute that you brought Tara into the story. And I'm glad people are starting to confront Angel!! =)
Date: 05/13/2005 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 28
*sigh* - Angel doesn't learn, huh? Glad there are so many people out there watching over Spike and Buffy. And the next day - I think Spike will give the rings to Buffy :) TNX for the update!
Date: 05/11/2005 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 27
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next.
Date: 05/11/2005 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter 27
LOL! Two new, or rather resurrected, plot bunnies? I think Harmony has Spike so mispegged. Can't wait for the proposal.
Date: 05/11/2005 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 27
omg i ccant believe ethan wants buffy thats so gross and i really hope that spike doesnt believe her and tells her he knows about her and angel. also i hope that somehting bad happens to bangel and that nothing happens to the relationship between buff and spike that would suck. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. please update as soon as u can, im dyinng to read more and find out wat happens next thanx
Date: 05/11/2005 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter 27
please don't let spike fall for that and please don't let buffy fall for that either. great job.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 27
Stupid Harmony, sometimes I wonder how somebody as dumb as her still manages to come up with this mean plans.
Great update!
Author's Response: yep, I agree.......I wonder sometimes what people are thinking when they plan to lie cheat and scam
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh my gosh ... Harmony is going to try and pin Angel's baby on Spike? That sucks. Stupid Ethan too. Rack sounds like he is going to be fabricating pictures which peeves me off too. I want to strangel so many people in this story. Just when I think that we are finally levelling out and Spike can end up on top, it gets all screwed up again. Look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for hanging in.....you know meal ticket Harm was not going to just quit. Ethan, what can I say, he's a maniac.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 27
I've enjoyed this story so far,....BUT 30 chapters just to get to this point? Honestly...I'm getting really bored..nothing is being resolved just more and more plotting.
Author's Response: I'm sorry that where I'm going is taking a long while to get there.....but for where the story is going, the foundation needed to be set...hope you stick with it.......There is a reason for everything that has transpired......
Date: 05/10/2005 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 27
Wow. Okay I knew that things were going too good for everybody, and that it was going to get bad soon. But that is a whole lot of bad! But I have faith that you will give all the nice people a happily ever after.
Author's Response: Thank you for the faith, it means alot.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 27
Hmmm, I think that the tape of Angel with Harmony will be useful after all...
Author's Response: Instead of hot potatoe, it will be hot tape, LOL
Date: 05/10/2005 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 27
The plot thickens delightfully. I had forgotten creepy Ethan was lusting after our heroine. Lindsey and Cordelia are a good new plot development. Harmony's scheme is sure to blow up in her face, and I hope it's in a publicly embarrassing way! All the intrigue and drama going on behind the happy couples keeps this very entertaining.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I'm not boring everyone, LOL! It is a long road to get where I want......everyone and everything must be in place......
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