Date: 02/21/2005 - 11:46 am Title: Rough Ride
OOOH! Love it! The name of the club and the band are awesome. It's good that she's making him work for her affections. Kind of like the cocky Spike though. Will is nice, but Spike is... hmmm.
Date: 02/21/2005 - 10:49 am Title: Rough Ride
more please i love it!
Date: 02/21/2005 - 10:29 am Title: Rough Ride
Ahhhhhh, such a lovely filler at that.....seeing the man inside the rock star was a nice touch.......more please....LOL
Date: 02/21/2005 - 10:26 am Title: Rough Ride
Definitely interested on my end.
Date: 02/21/2005 - 10:23 am Title: Rough Ride
Damn, I love William! Great chapter... Of course, we're all interested, silly. Luv, spuf
Date: 02/21/2005 - 10:17 am Title: Rough Ride
I love the atmosphere you created between those two. I love that by being herself , Buffy made instantaneously the other side of Spike emerge : the softer , genuine personality of Will. And of course I was delighted when she asked him who called him that , and he said : "My mum.." Can't wait for the next part !
Date: 02/21/2005 - 10:11 am Title: Rough Ride
Have to say, that you keep out doing yourself. I can't believe that you would think that no one would be as excited abou thtis story. it's amazing! Keep it up!!!
Date: 02/20/2005 - 01:29 am Title: Unattainable
Oh you've got to continue this one cause now I'm hooked with the sexy, singer Spike...he's a def. weakness for me. Yum! This is looking to be a great story, so you know I can't wait for more. (I know I'm gonna love it as much as 'Whispers' which is awesome) You're doing a great job already, so don't be shy posting more.
Date: 02/20/2005 - 12:42 am Title: Unattainable
Sweet -a limo ride, with Spike - me likey :) LOL But yeah can't wait to hear more - I think it'll be a great story cuz I'm already hooked and it's only the first chapter!
Date: 02/20/2005 - 12:29 am Title: Unattainable
love the attitude! Buffy's that is!
Date: 02/19/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: Unattainable
Fabulous start. You are a great writer. I look forward to seeing more of this story and others of yours.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 07:54 pm Title: Unattainable
ashlee, dont ever be nervous about posting a story. every single one of the stories you have written are absolutly amazing, and i know this one is going to be no different. you are a very talented writter. dont ever feel insecure about your stories because they are always awesome. keep up the great work.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: Unattainable
Awesome start! I'm looking forward to more! You really shouldn't be nervous about posting your stuff, you are really talented!
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:56 pm Title: Unattainable
Interesting so far. Can't wait to see where you go from here. I can't believe I just said that. :::snerk:::: Buffy really does invade my every day speech and thought patterns.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:47 pm Title: Unattainable
Great start - I always love it when the plot has Spike "in lust at first sight" with Buffy trying so hard to resist the temptation that is Sexy-yummy Spike! I think you should continue - don't be shy - you've proven yourself a gifted story teller and I'll be following this one just as closely as I followed Whispers! Thanks for sharing your imagination and talent.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Unattainable
I was hoping and wishing you'd post it......yummy...treat.....
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Unattainable
I don't think you should be hesitant. Whatever you do turns out to be super interesting and c'mon, look at what you've pulled off so far - a story about jockeys? that was great! lol. I know that the plot seems a little common and overdone, but I know you can give it your own twist and make it happen. Plus, you already reached a level of 20+ reviews for any chapter you write, so what's to worry about? People love you :) I encourage you to keep going and also to expand your skills even more by make it angsty + spuffy. Your 'whispers' fic was a huge step in getting in that element of gradual development. Keep up the great work! Leave the nervous worrying over fic writing to me ;)
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:34 pm Title: Unattainable
Please continue
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:29 pm Title: Unattainable
Awesome chapter! Loved it! Interesting plot...looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:15 pm Title: Unattainable
This chapter already left me mouth watering. The confrontation between Buffy and Spike was full of fire , and I loved the sensual , seductive mood you pictured Spike , yet his charm didn't seem to work on stubborn Buffy! I liked this line : "being safe in the backseat with a very hot guy was up for debate." I'm sure it will be a wonderful ride.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:12 pm Title: Unattainable
i'm really likeing the first chappie here. great start. i really like how buffy isn't a groupie-type person, and giving him a hard time and all that. patiently awaiting more
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:01 pm Title: Unattainable
please keep up the good work
Date: 02/19/2005 - 03:47 pm Title: Unattainable
great story so far, please continue. i love all of your storys. canīt wait for more.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 03:25 pm Title: Unattainable
you're an awesome writer you shouldn't be hesitant in posting any of your stories... they're all awesome.... you're one of my favorite authors... btw the story is really great so far... has a really good begining and can't wait for more
Date: 02/19/2005 - 01:19 pm Title: Unattainable
Great start - go for it! I read more if you write it.
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