Date: 04/10/2005 - 06:59 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
great chapter. I love it. Update soon.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 06:59 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
great chapter. I love it. Update soon.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
get a beta. the story could be good, but your grammar and syntax is off... alot.
Author's Response: I've been trying to! Sorry, I'll try to improve my writing, and I'll keep loking for a beta. Sorry again!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
*giggles* That last part was so funny. Awesome kiss and I'm still loving the story! ;) More please!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 04:58 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
Oh, Lordy...it was great.....and the making out spider comment made me almost choke I laughed so hard....imagining Spike's face when she said that..........LOL
Date: 04/10/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
I really like this chapter. I thought that it was funny what Buffy said in the end.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 04:27 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
LOL great ending! don't worry, it was a good chapter, the writing was very assured. you did a good job :) and of course i'm dancing in front of the computer, going 'yay! spuffy at last!' this is one of my favorite fics cuz it's so cute and funny and romantic. keep it up!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 04:19 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
absolutely perfect!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:43 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
That was really great and cute1 I loved the Spuffyness! Please update soon cause I can hardly wait for more!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:28 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
loved it cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:27 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
Funny when Spike felt accidently in the water; and now they are kissing... wonder what will happen now (if they realize what they have done)
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:26 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
Making out scene was cute and funny. Looking forward to what happens next.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:21 pm Title: Fluffy Monsters.
lol - what a birthday! I hoped we would to get to know the tatoo - so hopping to the next chapter.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: Tattoo it on my heart.
Poor Buffy - and she has to sit the whole time on the trip ;-)
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:08 pm Title: Two Disasters In One.
Poor Buffy! Bad first date, and than the almost kiss from Spike and his rejection - that sucks.
Author's Response: Yep, that sucks big time... anyway thanx for reviewing!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:05 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
I thought it was perfect! I just love funny Spuffy sex (or in this case, Spuffy make out stuff!)! It's like everything's right with the world!
Nothing sexier then a couple who can have a good laugh (among other things!) in bed!
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Hihi, thank you! =)
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:01 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
that scene was great it was funny and passionate at the same time I love this fic please update soon!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I'll do that!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 02:56 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
you were great and i loved this chapter....great job
Date: 04/10/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: Surprising Behaviour.
Yep, I liked it ... and missed some chapters. *readng on*
Author's Response: Don't let me stop you... :p
Date: 04/10/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: Wet Surprises.
I think it was great! Very cute and a sudden switch in events:) Loved Buffy's last line, too, by the way LOL
Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked that line. =P
Date: 04/05/2005 - 11:01 am Title: Fluffy Monsters.
Come on! Write more...
Author's Response: I will! =)
Date: 04/05/2005 - 01:10 am Title: Fluffy Monsters.
lol, funny chapter! Can't wait to see the tattoo revealed!! And how the morning goes! Update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad that you think so. =P Yep, I'll update a.s.a.p!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 12:40 am Title: Fluffy Monsters.
Oh great chapter......I suspect it's a tattoo that the one person who'd understand it the most should be the first person to see it, LOL!
I don't blame Buffy, I'd hate to spend my 16th birthday in a dirty old cabin........and I would not sleep in the bed with smushed spider in it either......
Next please
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! =D I'll try to post as soon as possible!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Fluffy Monsters.
love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you do! =) Keep that up!
Date: 04/04/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: Fluffy Monsters.
loved it. please post soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll do that. =)
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