

Date: 01/22/2006 - 06:24 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
Super chapter, that I'm very thankful you've posted. Please continue to post to this story. Thank you.

Date: 01/22/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
i'm glad to see you're back... i missed this story. spike and buffy's first official date was very tender... he is so cute with his insecurity... and seeing buffy so caring about it is great. and carlita and the witch... uhmm...

Date: 01/22/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Hawaiian magic
I love the fact you did research- that shows dedication to a fic and accuracy. Very sweet chapter for Buffy and Spike- it's nice to see them have fun and be relaxed with each other. The Samara thing reminds me of "The Ring", so imagine my scary visual as I read the last part LOL Excellent update!
Author's Response: ROTFL You kick ass, Allison. I was wondering if people would get where I got the name from. Kind of the ring girl, with the cryptic child-like way River has of saying random stuff that actually makes send. Glad you got it. And research is important to me. Spuffy fanfic readers pay attention to details. They're smart cookies. So I try to do as much research for Aloha and PMJ as I can. I'm actually going to visit a prison next week for PMJ. My friend Shawn's mother is a warden! I just found out. Isn't it awesome?

Date: 01/04/2006 - 11:38 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
I can only imagine what Xander's reaction to those pictures would be, and I imagine it would actually involve his eyes bugging out of his head. They are quite the dear couple when they are being playful. And that darn Carlita, I can only imagine what kind of an accident she's planning. Now, it will of course backfire... Can't wait to see what happens next. Wonderful!

Date: 12/01/2005 - 01:15 am Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
good update but i wasnt expecting travers to be in here

Date: 12/01/2005 - 01:10 am Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
Excellent story so far. I love that Buffy and Spike are together. They are so cute together. The camera scene especially. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Date: 11/30/2005 - 11:36 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
I've been meaning to read this fic, and I'm glad I finally did! Such an original plot line. I love the initial interaction between Spike and Buffy and especially now that they've moved past their insecurities ;) Carlita's a bitch though and I hope Buffy kicks her ass! I knew Quentin was the unlce they referred to! Great story, please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Noelle. Glad you decided to read it. Yes, Carlita is a bitch. But I have one word for you: karma lol The bitch doesn't know who she's up against. The blonde duo isn't gonna go down that easily.

Date: 11/30/2005 - 08:44 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
fabulous chapter. its so great. i hope that buffy and spike kill her. i love the story , please update when you can thanx.

Date: 11/30/2005 - 07:49 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
Good chapter. Thought you gave up hope. Yay, you didn't.
~Ashley~

Date: 11/30/2005 - 07:02 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
Ii am really enjoying this story!

Date: 11/30/2005 - 06:25 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
aww spike an dbuffy are soo cute together!! I can't wait to see them kick that Carlita chick's ass!

Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:45 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
And Buffy and Spike were having such a good time.
Couldn't just have a nice relaxing vacation.
Waiting for the next chapter.

Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:27 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
Awe - Buffy speaking with Xander was fun - but the camera even more! Well the next evening will get interesting - deadly interesting as it seems :)

Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
Ick, stupid Quentin, thinking he has the power to rule over anyone and everyone somehow associated with the Council. I hope Carlita has a truly vile, vicious demise. Otherwise, very cute Spike and Buffy interactions in this chapter, and having Xander call to check in was a nice detail. It's nice to see them be happy... and hopefully Carlita will die:)

Date: 11/30/2005 - 08:45 am Title: Phone calls and photo shoot
Wow I 'm glad they bugged you into writing this chapter, it was great. I like the spuffiness mixed with evil Travers. Makes me want to read more. Hopefully soon?
Author's Response: Soon. This story just writes itself and I have many ideas for the next couple of chapters so it really shouldn't be too long.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 05:09 pm Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
I looked at the picture *gg* No wonder Spike spit the coffee out. But he made his point clear - following Buffy into the sun! Awe - smut.. yeah, I love it too. Looking forward to the next one :)

Date: 10/26/2005 - 08:05 am Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
Awesome!! loved this chapter

Date: 10/26/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Welcome to paradise
I love this story!! Hey, the BSV is open to non-bitey fics now also if you want to post there also. I know it gets to be a pain when you have to post too many places, but just thought I'd throw it out there! *hugs Isabel*
Author's Response: That's great! I keep trying to think of a bitey fic idea so I could post on your site. Actually, I do have one, I just have to finish PMJ first before I start it. And it's not excluded that Aloha could be bitey eventually, but I haven't decided yet. Thanks for your review, it means a lot.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
Great Smut! (No shame here!) More please! .
Author's Response: You're absolutely right. There is no shame in enjoying good smut lol. Glad you liked it.

Date: 10/25/2005 - 10:47 pm Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
Wow that was hot! I'm incredibly happy I got a chance to look at this tonight because it gave me a pick-me-up LOL I love the fact Buffy was messing with him about her bikini and made a rash decision, which turned out very well for them both;) Loved it!

Date: 10/25/2005 - 06:42 pm Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
Lol!! I loved it!! Cant wait for the next chapter.
~Ashley~

Date: 10/25/2005 - 06:15 pm Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
Loved it, loved it, loved it ... you re such a great writer!! Yeay Spuffy lovin' he he. more soonxxx
Author's Response: Thanks!

Date: 10/25/2005 - 05:45 pm Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
Oh yes smut is good *grins* great story,loking forward to the next chapter (and more smut...Lol )

Date: 10/25/2005 - 05:20 pm Title: Playing games never ends well... or does it?
wasn't expecting them to sleep together but i loved it. great job. post soon. wonder what the evil dorks are up to. they better not ruin buffy and spike's vacation. great job