[Report This]Date: 09/29/2005 - 03:56 am Title: Some comfort here
I love your unorthodox portrayal of Joyce. It's ruining me for all of the St. Joyce stories. This is a good thing since it means my expectations have been raised. There needs to be more explanation for William's feelings than that she's vulnerable, attractive and jailbait. If that's all there is to it, then that makes him a sexual predator. The reviewers who say that William should just give into his feelings or whatever just aren't thinking.
Date: 05/23/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Some comfort here
Loved it! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 05/22/2005 - 02:24 pm Title: Some comfort here
I like how the story is going so far. I kinda wish that Spike would give in to reality and finally admit his feelings to himself. I am also hoping for BUffy to get a bit stronger because this is only the beginning of the things she has to get through. Anyway I'm always looking forward to updates. You've got a great plot going.
Date: 05/21/2005 - 05:49 pm Title: Some comfort here
Aw I love how you write these two characters. I feel like most of the time student/teachers fics start with sex and the relationship comes later, but I love the way things are going here. It was sweet that William told Buffy about his mother. Can't wait for the next chapter. And the song is Angel...I think... =)
Date: 05/21/2005 - 04:21 am Title: Some comfort here
That was a really sweet chapter! I like this Buffy and 'Will'. They are so sweet to one another, I grt tired of all the angst and fighting some tiimes and just want sweet stuff some times. Post aguan soon! Kuddos!
Date: 05/21/2005 - 02:29 am Title: Some comfort here
Lovin the story. Buffy and Will are so cute together. Please update soon. :)
Date: 05/20/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Some comfort here
more plz its great!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 01:52 pm Title: Some comfort here
Wow, my heart was in my throat alittle on this one. The bonding between Buffy and Will was magnificent. He is so gentle to her and the only one really willing to give her support. sharing his personal life with her and her with him. there are no coincidences in life, her middle name is Anne, his mother's name was Anne. Hey now that is a good sign if you ask me. Even with this fic being human you giving the characters depth and they even retain alittle of thier alter egos. Excellent update Nia...keep them coming
Date: 05/20/2005 - 12:58 pm Title: Some comfort here
Oh, they were cute! Buffy really doesn't have it easy when her mother is drinking.. It will be hard for her when she wants to keep the baby... But I think at the end she'll get some help! At last I hope.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 12:55 pm Title: Some comfort here
wow... wow... wow.. okay, so my wish was granted! I came on today hoping for an update, and tada, update Very good chapter, and please keep 'em coming=P
Date: 05/20/2005 - 12:43 pm Title: Some comfort here
Love it, love it, love it. Will is so sweet, wanting to help, but trying to fight the attraction. Keep going. I am just in love with both of them in this.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 11:43 am Title: Some comfort here
Its fantastic:)
Date: 05/20/2005 - 10:37 am Title: Some comfort here
great chapter as always. the interaction between them is really convincing and all of Spikes internal musings are really insightful.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 05:38 am Title: Some comfort here
i really like this story. the characters are well written. keep up the good work
Date: 05/20/2005 - 05:25 am Title: Some comfort here
definitely liking it still but i can tell it wont be long until they get even closer and eventually kiss one another
Date: 05/20/2005 - 03:13 am Title: Some comfort here
i love this so far. Stupid age laws, love shouldnt be illegal if two people are lucky enough to find it (well to a certain degree at least, no 12 year olds with 30 year olds and stuff like that) I love the part where he catches her saying hes lickable and i love that he carried her home. It was very knight in shining armor, very Spike. Please update soon i cant wait for more amazing chapters!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 02:49 am Title: Some comfort here
I really liked this chapter. The give and take between the two works very well as does Will's struggle to keep his feelings for her reigned in. I love the end when she looks confused about his gruff tone of voice. I love that she notices and it sets up the next step in their relationship perfectly. Poor Buffy--I feel so bad for her and what's going on with Joyce and the drinking. I hope she comes around before the baby's born.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 02:16 am Title: Some comfort here
awesome awesome chapter!! love the inner struggle william is having...and i'm looking forward for more of it and more of buffy's pov...though i know some hint of spuffy wouldn't hurt...you're doing a fantastic job...keep it up..thanx...hope you update soon cos i'm really in love with this story
Date: 05/20/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Some comfort here
you made my night with this update! so thank you! glad to see her worming her way further into his heart. and him into hers. she is (hopefully) seeing just how nice a guy can be (die!Riley!die)
Date: 05/20/2005 - 02:01 am Title: Some comfort here
Oh Nia, this chapter was just so sweet and so achingly beautiful. My heart just breaks for both of them. I loved the scene in the cemetary with Spike holding and comforting Buffy. The poor girl. You've really captured Buffy's teenage voice perfectly. I could hear myself saying some of the very same things at her age. Really brilliant work, sweetie. You make it so obvious how drawn they are to each other, without making it seem cheesy like other fics. There is concrete evidence why they would be good together, if only... *sigh* Amazing chapter honey. So sorry I missed reviewing the last one. I promise I won't make a habit of it. I hope all is going well for you and your shoulder. Here's some healing hugs in case they aren't. *big hugs*
Date: 05/20/2005 - 01:31 am Title: Some comfort here
that "worked" perfectly. poor buffy and soooo funny with will thinking about her all night and seeing her talk about him. i love this story.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 01:29 am Title: Some comfort here
Very very sweet. I like how she was talking to her grandmother's grave, that was a nice touch. Good chapter!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Some comfort here
Aww! They're just too darn cute. I like the bonding in this chapter, how they're both opening up to each other. And it was so sweet how he carried her home. So loving this story. Thanks for posting. :)
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