Date: 10/04/2005 - 01:49 pm Title: Conversations kill
Hi, I just wanted you to know that I loved this chapter. It's not many fics that brings me tears, but this one has reallly caught me.
Date: 09/18/2005 - 02:42 am Title: Conversations kill
it was really sweet...i personally liked it
Date: 06/29/2005 - 12:17 am Title: Conversations kill
MORE PLZ I LOVE IT ITS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/27/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: Conversations kill
Hmm, well, I liked this chapter. Maybe there is one thing though... there is a lot of thinking going on (hold on, lemme finish, lol). Like, maybe there should be more interaction between Buffy and Will.. everytime they are in the same room, it's very brief or it's just thought about later (ex: Buffy thinking about how he'd held her for awhile then kissed her head and left), maybe have them actually there together. I dunno, I'm rambling I think. Then again, it just might be one of those things where the author is never quite satisfied with their work. *shrugs* My ramblings have progressed to babbling. I'm done now. =)
Date: 06/27/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Conversations kill
I don't know what you wanted the chapter to be, sorry. I loved reading it though. Wishiing Xander luck for his Cordelia. And glad that there's someone who cares for Buffy - even if she thinks she's alone with her baby - nobody loves herl I'm sure her mother must love her too - but she's not there. :))
Date: 06/27/2005 - 06:28 pm Title: Conversations kill
I love this story so far. Particularly since Spike has been there to support Buffy, but ***gasp, can't beleive i am saying this** the romantic interaction hasn't started yet; it brings more realism to it. The angst is laid within the baby situation, not between Buffy & Spike which is working quite nicely for me.
Date: 06/27/2005 - 04:44 pm Title: Conversations kill
oh wow...what a great chapter....i hope xander gets the answer hes looking for...*G* i can't believe that rileys mother has the nerve....well i can but still....bitch!!!! go will......to hell with it all.....go to her...be with her..you need her and she needs you....glad rupert found a good girl and hes happy....now we have to get buffy and will together....thats gonna be fun to read......i thought this was a great chapter and progressed the story very nicely...i loved it and can't wait for more
Date: 06/27/2005 - 02:39 pm Title: Conversations kill
That's so sad! Can't wait for more of this great fic, so please update soon!
Date: 06/27/2005 - 01:33 pm Title: Conversations kill
I liked it so that has to count for something right you should have them do sometalking or something love the story and spike!
Date: 06/27/2005 - 12:10 pm Title: Conversations kill
Great chapter can't wait for more
Date: 06/27/2005 - 11:37 am Title: Conversations kill
I see nothing wrong with the chapter.....but then I'm not the writter and have no clue where you are feeling the weakness is or where you want to go with it........hmmmmm.
Date: 06/27/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Conversations kill
I think the chapter's fine......I'm really enjoying this story and look forward to the next chapter
Date: 06/27/2005 - 07:18 am Title: Conversations kill
Maybe youa ren't happy with it because you halved the angst with the intro of Cordelia and Xander? But really, it didn't detract and I think you are telling an extremely touching story. I look forward to more.
Date: 06/27/2005 - 04:18 am Title: Conversations kill
i absolutely loved it and i thought that you did a terrific job on it and i am glad that he is there with her
Date: 06/27/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Conversations kill
Will loves you, Buffy. And baby, too, I'd wager. Icky Riley and Maggie. Trying to buy her off like that... Ugh. Just wrong. Very good emotional moments with Buffy thinking about the baby, and then with Buffy and Will. Liked the other little bits, too... Rupert being happy, Xander wondering about Cordy. Very good chapter whether you think so or not. ;)
Date: 06/27/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Conversations kill
LOVE this story I read all the way through and i'm so into this one can't wait ffor more!!
Date: 06/27/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Conversations kill
Aw Wlil held her while she cried and then kissed the top of her head...what a sweet moment! And then again at the end! I hope no one decides to stop by and catches them. That could potentially get bad. Heehee and Giles and Jenny. Aw but that was such a sweet chapter...except for that Maggie Walsh bit, ew. =)
Date: 06/27/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Conversations kill
Chapter was awesome so no need to wory about it. I thought it was great how you worked in the xander/cordy angle. Will setting up Giles/Jenny was sweet, and i still hate Maggie with a fiery passion lol outstanding update Nia!!
Date: 06/27/2005 - 02:13 am Title: Conversations kill
No, it's a good chapter. Leaves all kinds of windows open (maybe some smoochies? LOL) great job! I love this fic, please update soon! Kuddos!
Date: 06/27/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Conversations kill
maybe it was that horrible cliffhanger at the end? ;) j/k...OMG!! this chapter was really heartbreaking...but for totally the wrong reasons... for buffy being left alone, and spike just as alone...and they can't be together...i'm starting to sound like tarzan...but i can't articulate the feeling... anyhow...wonderful wonderful chapter...don't doubt yourself...you're doing a terrific job!!! thanx so muhc...hope you update soon
Date: 06/27/2005 - 01:40 am Title: Conversations kill
I thought that was a really good chapter it flowed and was really easy to read. The ending was cute and I cant wait for more!
Date: 06/27/2005 - 01:05 am Title: Conversations kill
Poor Buffy, I mean she needs her strength here and no one is giving her a chance. Ah but the knight in shining lovely icy blues eyes is coming to her rescue. Mrs. Finn should be smacked. It takes two to tango, ergo Riley is just as responisible for this. Grrrrrrrr people thinking their money is the object of everything. Good chapter, you are giving insight in what is to come. How Will is not wanting to give into his desires but yet he cares for her and wants her safe. buffy needs to know there is someone on her side. Yeah she has Willow and Xander,but it's not the same. You are leading up to something, just going up the preverable hill till the roller coaster goes racing down bringing new angst and maybe some smoochies *laughs*
Date: 06/27/2005 - 01:01 am Title: Conversations kill
You have no reason to worry about weather or not you're chapter's are good. cause let me tell you I think there fantastic I really wish you would stop saying that you're not happy with some of you're chapters, cause I rhink you're an awesome writer and this story is wonderful. So please please update soon I'am really enjoying this fic and I'm looking foward to more.
Date: 06/27/2005 - 12:40 am Title: Conversations kill
i love this story and cant wait to see where you go with it.. im sure whatever you do will be a good desicion. cant wait for spuffy goodness
Date: 06/27/2005 - 12:06 am Title: Conversations kill
Good chapter. I love what William is doing for Buffy. Its sweet! Continue please! ~Ashley~