Date: 07/11/2005 - 05:56 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between
This is really a very interesting, and different story and I am enjoying it more and more each chapter. Trust certainly isn't in the cards yet, but hopefully her self preservation will kick in. Please, update soon as you can/
Author's Response: thanks for following!
Date: 07/11/2005 - 04:50 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between
SO LOVING THIS STORY CAN T HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT NICE LONG CHAPTER....THANK YOU FOR THE GOOD READ...MAGGZ314@YAHOO.COMPLEASE LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE
Author's Response: I don't have an updates list, but I'll consider making one - thanks for the support!
Date: 07/10/2005 - 05:45 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between
Please update soon it's really great
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 07/10/2005 - 12:15 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between
great update and cant wait for more spuffyness to come
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 07/09/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
Great chap. I wonder if Buffy will ever tell Spike about what Riley and Lindsay are up to? It might actually help her out in the long run. She could use it to gain his trust but I'm not sure she'd even want it. I like how you got Buffy fighting herself with her feelings for Spike. I also like how Spike's true feelings for Buffy are coming through his brutal treatment of her. She means more to him than what he lets on. I can't wait to see how Buffy's hate will eventually grow into love. Plz update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the insightfulness - makes me feel like i wasnt crazy in being subtle at times :)
Date: 07/09/2005 - 07:46 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
Love it - update son?
Author's Response: thanks, and sure, go check now :)
Date: 07/09/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
Quite interesting. At first I thought it was gonna be a story where Buffy puts up token resistence and after little coercion she gives in to Spike and they magically realize they are meant to be. But you fooled me. It's not your run of the mill, poorly thought out tale. Thank you for that. You've maintained my interest and I'm glad that Buffy, and Spike for that matter, are struggling internally and for completely plausible reasons. I'm also enjoying the training room sequences and supporting characters. I'm excitied to read more.
Author's Response: I'm glad I fooled you, lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/09/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
Great chapter.
I really wish Buffy would rat out Riley and Lindsey though.
Can't stand either one of them and now that they've made it clear they are out to rape and kill Buffy?
Buffy needs to make a decision as to where her loyalty lies (even if it's not her fault she's in this mess!)
Anyway, I'm one of the readers that look for this story everyday for updates!
spuf
Author's Response: Thanks spuf!
Date: 07/09/2005 - 04:06 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
YAY! the plot thickens
Author's Response: :D thanks!
Date: 07/09/2005 - 04:06 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
I definitely needed this chapter today :-) Riley and Lindsey were beyond creepy and I'm glad she was able to get away from them. And the Spuffyness at the end was perfect. I love how they are both subtly changing and they seem to be on a level playing field right now. Of course, I have a feeling the playing field is going to be reversed sometime soon ;-) Excellent chapter- can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Stop spoiling my secrets, lol. Just kidding, it should be pretty obvious by now. I think there will be like 5 people who actually like ch 10 though, you and alli included...
Date: 07/09/2005 - 03:59 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
I hope he gives her a gun, I really do. She needs to be able to protect herself as much as possible, and she would've been able to pop off Riley and Lindsey when she overheard them talking. Clever plan, by the way, for them to have, but I sincerely hope it won't go through. Plus, the middle-of-the-night sexy romp was nice! Great update, PJ!:)
Author's Response: lol, thanks! And I'll consider the gun :)
Date: 07/09/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
Love the story! - hope nothing happens to buffy with riley or anything... and spike's still a jerk but it's nice to see he at least seems to be developing a semi-conscience.... Cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Date: 07/09/2005 - 03:46 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
That had almost gone wrong - Buffy could be glad that Spike came in time. And I wonder too if these kept secrets will work for Biuffy or against Buffy in the end.
Author's Response: we'll see ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/09/2005 - 03:01 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
Stupid Lindsay and Riley, I'm glad Spike got there in time to save her! The whole sleep thing was actually pretty cool! And sweet when you think about what he was dreaming... anyway... Great chapter! I'm looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 07/09/2005 - 02:48 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between
yay! Spikes starting to like her, soon she will like him! and the sooner the better so hat means update soon please? PS I hope you are having fun in Germany/ Thailand, or where you are now :o)
Author's Response: lol, i hate to ruin your party, but ch 10 is up and it's not going toward happy land just yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing!