Date: 09/08/2007 - 07:49 pm Title: Interlude: Time
Oh I love it, I hope she makes it in time, just to spite William.
Date: 03/09/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: Interlude: Time
Interludes always seem useless. Why can't people just add them onto a chapter?
Date: 02/23/2006 - 12:25 pm Title: Interlude: Time
You might want to look into paragraphing, and your speeches(yes, they sound more like speeches than dialogues sometimes) and thoughts are slightly too long... Made it a little boring and tedious to read though.
The plot is interesting, a nice try at their characterisations, but that's about all the merits of your story. It's not a bad read, and if the paragraphing and grammer weren't so bad, I would most definitely enjoy the story.
Date: 06/23/2005 - 08:43 am Title: Interlude: Time
Hopefully they'll get there in time .. but I think they will. Or the Spuffyness would be over before it begun ;-)
Author's Response: And we can't end the Spuffy already, now can we? Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/25/2005 - 06:09 pm Title: Interlude: Time
I'm really really hoping she gets there on time =) Sam seems like a cute kid, stupid stubborn William =) The prick part and the imagery parts both made me crack up, awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks...and thanks for the review.
Date: 05/01/2005 - 03:04 am Title: Interlude: Time
i liked it...it has prospects...really want to know what happens next...so please please update soon...thanx...you're doing a terrific job so far
Author's Response: Monday, Monday, it's coming on Monday--hope you like the next chapter as well. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/25/2005 - 09:26 pm Title: Interlude: Time
Aww! What a sweet chapter, what with Buffy's determination and the like! Can't wait for more, so please update soon! Take care, ; )
Author's Response: I't almost time--and just a quick side not for everyone, remember I update a day earlier on my LJ for my f-list :D
Date: 04/25/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Interlude: Time
great update cant wait for the next one
Author's Response: It's coming soon and It'll be up on my LJ on Sunday, htanks for the review :-)
Date: 04/25/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Interlude: Time
Still liking the story very much, can't wait to read what Buffy is trying to prove to Spike by bringing Sam over. :D
Hope you're already feeling better.
Author's Response: Do you know how awesome you are for reviewing all of my chapters? Thank you.
And as to feeling better, I'm getting there. The reviews are definitely helping, though.
Date: 04/25/2005 - 03:56 pm Title: Interlude: Time
I so love them! They're just so full of fire. It's awesome! more!
Author's Response: Thank you SO mcuh for your reviews, i's really making my day to get reviews. And I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story.. :D