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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2022 - 10:22 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

Please finish

Reviewer: Stan R Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2012 - 05:12 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

Love this story. I was wondering how work was coming along on finishing it. Again great story.

Reviewer: BT_ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 06:42 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

I Googled this story in hopes that I'd find a completed version out somewhere in the web, adn you just weren't posting on Bloodshedverse anymore. No such luck. I am well and truly bummed.
But I reread the last chapter again, just because it's so fun, even with the cliffie ending.
So Please - could you go back to writing this? PLEASE?

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2008 - 11:40 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

I've just popped in to re-read for about the tenth time, and that scene with Xander and the window still cracks me up. I got to that 'laughing silently 'cos I didn't have enough breath to make a noise and tears streaming down my face' stage. Brilliant.
What's not brilliant is that it's been nearly 18 months since an update. Pleeeease don't tell me you've abandoned this fic? It really is one of my favouritest 'Buffy comes back from the dead' plots. Besides, we're about to get some Angelbashing... aren't we?

Author's Response: I promise, I've not given up, it's just been a CRAZY year, you have no idea. In addition to real world drama upon drama, I ran into the most severe case of writer's block I've EVER experienced. I hope to remedy your problem soon though, trying to get back in the flow of things. THANK YOU for sticking with me though, you have no idea what it does to me to see that someone out there loves my story enough to re-read it and be sad that there isn't more! I think I kinda love you! lol

Reviewer: spike4buffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 - 06:01 am Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

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Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2007 - 11:02 am Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

awsome story so far:):) i love it


cant wait for you to update again soon:)

keep up the awesome work

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 - 12:29 am Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

I've got a serious stitch in my side and tears running down my face from laughing so hard from reading the Xander meets window scene. Absolutely hilarious!
I'm loving this story. I love Buffy being all avoidy but good moody, and the fact that Spike has been integrated into the group. Now I'm dying for the revelations... and for Angel punchage if possible... pleease?

Reviewer: infinitecrisis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 05:34 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

To go down to the nearest beach from downtown, it is easier to use I-10 West to Santa Monica. At least 10-15 minutes if no traffic from I-110 and if you drive fast. Using small routes might take longer time because of ever chaos traffic unless you hit on the right one (the less popular route)
By the way, downtown on the east side looks like where Hyperion should have supposedly located .. coz' there's where many big hotels located, beside offices, corporate buildings, lots of parking lots and bazaar, (however, streets are very dirty ... that's dowtown LA, yew). .

It would be right if Spike and the scoobies, are staying on an expensive hotel along the coast of Santa Monica beach a bit far from Hyperion on the east.

Anyway, this chapter is very funny and i was even laughing hard trying to imagine the scene in my head.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 05:10 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

Awesome update! Got behind, but all caught up now and WOW was it worth it! I can't wait to see what all Buffy will confess to the gang! And the mini-kissage was just perfect. Just enough spice to give hope to our twitterpated vamp! More please!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it Crystal, thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 - 02:49 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

great chapter

Author's Response: thanks golddrake

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 - 06:05 am Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

I don't think it was insensitive, did the same thing on a train when I was 13. Great update.

Author's Response: thanks jane, i'm glad to know that the scene was accepted the way I wanted it to be. and thank you for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 - 10:05 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

Had to read today; good to see an update :)
Buffy convince indeed everybody to come with her. But I bet this is the last time Giles was driving them all (with them all).
I found the scene with Xander (including the bunny nose fun) :)
And Buffy got a lesson in grey. Things getting interesting indeed!
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thanks cordykitten, you're always so faithful with your reviews.... and yes, things are about to get very interesting... just wait. thanks again!

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 - 08:31 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

I serously did not find Xander's hitting his nose on the patio door offensive. In fact, I found that entire scene absolutely hilarious. I had tears rolling down my cheeks and soon found myself in all out laughter (where wheezing was heard) because it's one of those things that would happen to anyone (most probably me) and I could picture anyone of my friends and family laughing their butts off because of it.

Anyway, great chapter. Keep it up and hope you update soon!!!

Author's Response: thank goodness, you took the scene the exact way i wanted it taken. the same thing happened to my nephew one year at a hotel in florida, so that's where the inspiration comes from. and your reaction was the perfect, and intended, one. thank you so much for the review. i hope to update again soon

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN

Oh that scene was to good, I was trying not to laugh.

When they were talking about grey I was expecting her to say something about whislter and his grey speaking talk.

More please love it.

Author's Response: but you were supposed to laugh silly! and she's coming clean soon, promise.. i'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Constance Truggle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 - 12:39 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

Wonderful story so far. I like your characterization well enough, and Spike's especially. Love-sick and confused as hell. ^.~ Perfect. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to L.A. Will they get their own place? Will they stay with Angel? (I'm not too awfully familiar with Angel yet, so I'm not sure if they're at the Hyperion or W & H right now.) What will Tall, Dark and Forehead's response be when he sees Spike? Will Buffy stick up for the blond sexmuffin? And... will she resort to using some of Spike's and Xander's names for Angel against him? THAT would be hilarious! Anyhow, waiting, desperately, for more.
CT.

Author's Response: i'm so glad you're enjoying my story Constance. thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Kim63 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 - 12:05 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

I just started reading this story today (I just finished reading chapter 3). I have a long way to catch up with you, but I wanted to tell you how much I'm loving it. Chapter 3 was awesome, I had tears in my eyes finishing it. OK, enough said, I'm going back to read the rest , hopefully by the time I get to Chapter 15, you will have posted more. Great Job!!!

Author's Response: thanks Kim, I'm glad you're enjoying my piddly little story. Seems to me you had the intended reaction at the end of chapter three... I hope you'll continue to enjoy it just as much... thanks again!

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 - 08:34 am Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

I just started reading this and what can I say? Great story! Update soon please.

Oh, and if I can make a request...can you please let Buffy out of the Nile sometime soon? so her and Spike can make on with the Spuffy goodness.

Oh and if you can do some Angel bashing while they're in L.A. - that'd just be awesome! Thanks!!!

Muchos cookies for you and your muse. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: thank you so much for your review V. I'll see what I can do about your requests... lol

Reviewer: jj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 - 01:26 am Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

This story has me riveted. Please, please continue.

Author's Response: why thank you JJ, I plan on continuing for a while, hopefully the next update won't be too long... thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anon462 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 - 06:40 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

I first read this story long long ago. ;) Really happy you started it up again!!!

I love everything that's happened so far, but I really do agree with Whistler, Buffy has got to be the most frustrating person in the world. :)

Looking forward to more, soon???

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 - 08:30 am Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

Love the story thus far. I just started reading it. I have been into so many stories lately that I only read a few at a time. Your summary caught my eye and I absolutely love it. More please. You are a great writer.

Author's Response: Thank yo sooo much spuffygurl! It's no nice to hear someone say that! I'm so glad that you're enjoying my story, hopefully the next update will follow shortly! thanks again!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 - 01:31 am Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

OH I finally managed to reread and read the chapters I missed love the story, wonder when someone will tell her they think it is about Angel and if she would ever talk to Giles he would realize it is Spike.

Author's Response: Sorry it's been so long that you had to reread, hopefully that won't happen again! Things'll start coming out in L.A., trust me. Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

great chapter

Author's Response: thanks golddrake, glad I haven't lost you!

Reviewer: caegey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 10:05 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

Please continue writing this. I read the entire thing today and I absolutely love it !

Author's Response: I most definitely plan on continuing with this story... next chappie shouldn't be too long in following. Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 12:04 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN

The slayer's dream... Blue and yellow (gold) become green. Coincidence? I don't think so. So whatever is coming, it's coming soon. Through the seal.. I wonder what's behind the whole dream. Hopefully Buffy will figure it out. Balance is coming... very cryptic, that dream.
And there I thought for a moment Willow and Tara could convince Buffy to talk to Giles. Maybe later after the phone call to Angel.
Spike had the same dream but they didn't tell him more either what it means, balancing is coming.
Oh Buffy calling Angel leading to a trip to L.A.? Buffy really wants Spike to come with them. Should be fun, right? Looking forward to more! Hopefully, if your muse behaves :)

Author's Response: Cordykitten! I'm so glad I haven't lost you! sorry the update took so long, hopefully the next one won't be like that! And trust me, things'll start coming out in L.A., just wait....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 11:37 am Title: CHAPTER FOURTEEN

*waves* Hello! Good to see you back :) And congratulations. No wonder you were busy. Sorry about the trouble you went through.
*sigh* Naw, I didn't really think it would be easy for Buffy to come clean. She is still avoidy (denial) girl, torn about talking about her feelings.
And if I think about the banter before the patrol, it (patrol) must be fun *g*
Oh but that didn't go too well; besides Buffy being quiet she managed to hurt Spike again, making him feeling worthless (for Buffy). But she noticed and tried to make it better. Cute how Spike cheered Buffy up when she got sad.

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