Date: 04/12/2010 - 12:50 pm Title: Free
Good story overall. I think you did a great job, but really bad on the spelling and grammar and way to much txt talk. Made it very hard to read at times
Date: 11/06/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Free
Ooh, this is excellent! I love the premise--time for Buffy to get into the slaying life she missed out on! Right? Love this!!!
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:01 am Title: Free
Hey i really like your work and this story is fab but i thought this is something you should look out for, when your writing you should always try and write in full words, instead of msn speech. A particular word which you miss spell in the word 'thanks" you always write 'thanx' this is not very good grammer!
SORRY to be such a nag
Date: 06/30/2005 - 02:44 pm Title: Free
Really good start! That must have been so horrible, locked up in that asylum for 5 years!! Poor Buffy!
Date: 05/25/2005 - 02:37 am Title: Free
Glad to see that Giles waited for her, but I must wonder, what is the crisis. Love the beginning. Buffy's adjusting to the real world quite well.
Author's Response: Wow thanx. The crisis will be coming up soon and she did adjust very well. I wanted her too because shes so strong on the inside.......thanx again i hope you like the other chaps too!
Linz
Date: 05/14/2005 - 02:59 pm Title: Free
Wow, after 5 years locked up, Buffy is really well-adjusted! That's awesome that her friends are picking up where they left off and I like the crossover with the movie. Looking forward to seeing Spike enter the picture!
Author's Response: OMG you're the first person to comment on that and im glad you noticed. I didnt want her all screwed up because she is such a strong person (in my eyes) and i wanted the fact that no one and nothing can bring her down to come across! :) Thanx for the review!
Date: 05/14/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Free
I like. Very much. Is Rayne part of the creepy plan stuff? 'Cuz I really don't like the guy... =) Gonna go read the other chaps now...
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes he is but i have plans for him, i hate him too lol so they wont be pretty! Thanx for the review, made me smile :)
Date: 05/13/2005 - 03:44 pm Title: Free
The start is good! love to read more (and therefore going to then next chapter)
Author's Response: Thanx CK, glad to see you enjoying this fic too. It's always nice to hear from you. I hope you like the 2nd chapter :) !
Date: 05/13/2005 - 05:32 am Title: Free
Ooh…you are developing quite a knack for this! I was enthralled right from the get go. Hehe…and the girl, interrupted theme is a nice touch along with Gilles the potential pedophile. I couldn’t stop laughing! Wow…it would be uber creepy though, coming across someone staring at you like that in a mall! Eeeeek, someone who also happens to know your name too! *distraught, eyes bulging, eeeked out look* Ya, that would seriously freak me right out! Oooh…and the way you described her creepy shrink will stay with me throughout the night! Lol…I have such a phobia about shifty looking doctors!!
Author's Response: Well Shan you've done it again lol, i dont really know how to respond to this except for thanx x 100 :). ALL doctors are creepy, lets not forget that even the semi cute ones (ahem BEN) are evil and want you dead in some way shape or form lol (teasing....kinda:)) I had fun making Giles creepy, i wanted it to be like Merrick in the movie kind of. Thanx again and i love you :)
Date: 05/13/2005 - 01:58 am Title: Free
i can tell i will love the story already. i hope spike comes soon. please update soon thanx
Author's Response: Awww thanx Melissa, Spike will be showing up in the next or third chapter for sure.
Linz :)
Date: 05/12/2005 - 09:15 am Title: Free
Great start cant wait to see how this go.
Author's Response: thanx for reviwing, I cant wait to see how it unfolds either, i always write day to day, whatever pops into my head so i dont even know lol
Date: 05/12/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Free
definitely good so far...but will spike come into the story?
Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Spike will be coming into it but things will be drastically different from the show......you'll see what i maean soon! Thanx again!