Date: 05/14/2005 - 02:59 pm Title: Free
Wow, after 5 years locked up, Buffy is really well-adjusted! That's awesome that her friends are picking up where they left off and I like the crossover with the movie. Looking forward to seeing Spike enter the picture!
Author's Response: OMG you're the first person to comment on that and im glad you noticed. I didnt want her all screwed up because she is such a strong person (in my eyes) and i wanted the fact that no one and nothing can bring her down to come across! :) Thanx for the review!
Date: 05/14/2005 - 04:46 am Title: I'm a woman, hear me roar!
I am woman, hear me roar!! Hehehe…now how awesome is that?! Lol…it would have been hilarious if she had gotten the vamp in a choke hold under her arm and he just happened to notice that even with all the fighting she was still sweat & smelly free. Buff recognizes the reaction and just goes…”that’s the power stripe, biatch!” and stakes his ass right then and there. Hehehe…and then there’s like a close up of her victorious face and in the background you hear…”strong and beautiful…just like you!” Omg! I think I’ve completely gone insane! Hehehe…I’m sure there must have been valid connection in the story which sprung this odd thought in my head. *grins shiftily away from her random thought processes* Lol…anyways, great chap and I can’t wait to read more!! Love it to bits! xxx
Author's Response: Wow lol, im so gonna have to use that power stripe thing in my "storyteller" chapter when i intro Andrew lol (if you'll let me, ill give you full credit :) )Ive never laughed that much reading a review so thanx ever so for that. It seems that you have indeed gone insane but it makes for great reviews so please dont seek help lol. Love ya, love the review. Thanx so much Shan.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 12:53 am Title: I'm a woman, hear me roar!
nooooo! i want more, love the story please update soon thanx.
Author's Response: lol thanx so much for the review. Ill post asap, probably tomorrow night. Thanx again :)
Date: 05/14/2005 - 12:17 am Title: I'm a woman, hear me roar!
Heh. Nice touch w/ Passions. It must rock to have a loaded dad...The whole First Slayer thing: so life is her gift??? Who is she gonna give life to??? Spike??? That'd be cool...*scratches head* see now you got me all confused =)...wait. is the rescuer Giles? I mean, duh, the guy at the end is Spike, but...ARG! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story, PLEASE update as much as possible! =) oh and BTW, I wrote this kinda while I was reading, 'cuz I wanted to get all the reactions and stuff in, hence the kinda schizo style of the review...hope it helps!
Author's Response: Well the loaded part must be wicked but the deadbeet not so much. Passions just pooped into my head as an afterthought so thanx :) She wont give life to spike though she does give him something in a way.....cant say more then that yet, dont wanna spoil any chaps lol. the schizo is actually a great style to read and always humorous lol, I'll give you this much :it is Giles at the end. Thanx for all the great reviews and i hope youll like the next chap!
Luv Linz xxx
Author's Response: HAHAHA i wrote pooped instead of popped, lol. My bad but at least it was a funny kind of bad!
Date: 05/14/2005 - 12:11 am Title: A/N
computers suck ass =)
Author's Response: Well, mine does at least lol :)
Date: 05/14/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Free
I like. Very much. Is Rayne part of the creepy plan stuff? 'Cuz I really don't like the guy... =) Gonna go read the other chaps now...
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes he is but i have plans for him, i hate him too lol so they wont be pretty! Thanx for the review, made me smile :)
Date: 05/13/2005 - 11:12 pm Title: I'm a woman, hear me roar!
good update
Author's Response: Thanx, nice to hear :)!!! (smiles)
Date: 05/13/2005 - 03:44 pm Title: Free
The start is good! love to read more (and therefore going to then next chapter)
Author's Response: Thanx CK, glad to see you enjoying this fic too. It's always nice to hear from you. I hope you like the 2nd chapter :) !
Date: 05/13/2005 - 05:32 am Title: Free
Ooh…you are developing quite a knack for this! I was enthralled right from the get go. Hehe…and the girl, interrupted theme is a nice touch along with Gilles the potential pedophile. I couldn’t stop laughing! Wow…it would be uber creepy though, coming across someone staring at you like that in a mall! Eeeeek, someone who also happens to know your name too! *distraught, eyes bulging, eeeked out look* Ya, that would seriously freak me right out! Oooh…and the way you described her creepy shrink will stay with me throughout the night! Lol…I have such a phobia about shifty looking doctors!!
Author's Response: Well Shan you've done it again lol, i dont really know how to respond to this except for thanx x 100 :). ALL doctors are creepy, lets not forget that even the semi cute ones (ahem BEN) are evil and want you dead in some way shape or form lol (teasing....kinda:)) I had fun making Giles creepy, i wanted it to be like Merrick in the movie kind of. Thanx again and i love you :)
Date: 05/13/2005 - 01:58 am Title: Free
i can tell i will love the story already. i hope spike comes soon. please update soon thanx
Author's Response: Awww thanx Melissa, Spike will be showing up in the next or third chapter for sure.
Linz :)
Date: 05/12/2005 - 09:15 am Title: Free
Great start cant wait to see how this go.
Author's Response: thanx for reviwing, I cant wait to see how it unfolds either, i always write day to day, whatever pops into my head so i dont even know lol
Date: 05/12/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Free
definitely good so far...but will spike come into the story?
Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Spike will be coming into it but things will be drastically different from the show......you'll see what i maean soon! Thanx again!
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