I wonder the real reason she won't marry Riley is she in love with Spike.

I'd really like to know exactly what happened between them to make them fall out like they did, but I'm sure you'll tell us =D You handled the flashback very well. It's sooo cute how they both still love each other, although there's obviously some resentment on Spike's side. And don't pay any attention to that Sydney person--I haven't noticed any errors and anyway, she's not your beta, so the idea she has that you have to listen to her is absurd.

Author's Response: I'm going to give you a little heads up on the Spuffy past in this fic. Spoiler alert here!!! When Spike and Buffy met in San Diego on spring break, Buffy mislead Spike/William just a tad (yeah, just a tad, right!) In future chapters, we'll find out that our Buffy lied to William about her age, who she was, etc. William was pretty up front with her, but left out who his father really was. So, Buffy has no clue that William/or Spike now, is involved with the FBI. Anyway, Buffy had very good reasons for running away from William and they will be revealed, slowly, through the plotline. Thanks again, Luv, spuf

loved this update and cant wait for them to reunite

Author's Response: Thank you. Luv, spuf

Looking forward to find out Buffy's secret - why she sticks with Riley, and yet doesn'T want to marry him. :))

Author's Response: Thank you. Buffy's secret is a 'big' one. I am having hubby install and upgrade 2003 spell check into my computer. Keep your fingers crossed, please that it will help my fics be more enjoyable to read. Thanks again, Luv, Spuf

Ok so I love the plot line of the story and i really think that it has potential. Hey who cares about if you can't write summaries and have spelling errors, cuz everyone does. Even really good authors. Can't wait until the next chapter! And the rest of the story!

You want to know what I think? I think you keep mass producing these stories without any thought at all and even after it's been pointed out to you the most simple spelling errors that you could easily correct you don't have enough respect for your art or your reader to fix them. You have good ideas for plots, like this one, that are completely ruined by your refusable to either use a beta or at the very least properly use a spellcheck program. When I pointed out in another story that you had these kinds of errors you said you thought you had no spellling problems at all. So I gave you a list of dozens in that one story alone. You never responded and every story since then - and there are quite a few out there since - has the exact same errors and problems. I'm sorry this isn't abject praise and 'kewl! omigod it's so great! what happens next?!' like you are used to receiving but it just really bugs me that you keep mass producing all these stories without any thought to them at all in this area. I really can't respect that. So I'm putting this on the public reviews, as private assistance has been futile with you. So, no, I can't say I like your story at all, nor will I continue to attempt to read it.

Author's Response: You are entitled to your opinion. I am sincerely sorry if I'm so lousy at writing, truly, but I do respect this site, my 'art' as you call it and everyone elses fictions and opinions here. If other readers feel this way, as you do? Then I shall seriously consider deleting all of the fic's I've submitted here. I'm sorry, but I'm really bad at computers and never could 'get' the spell check thing. That is why I can't use it to aid me on this. I will consider, however, what you have suggested and take my fics off this site. If they are so awful, then it's best not to waste Pari's time, space or energy on them. Thank you. Spufette