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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

I get the feeling that Dawn is not Joyce and Hanks but Buffy and Williams

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

I don't think it's insignificant at all...kinda like what you told me about a chapter of CK awhile back =D I like the idea of using Dawn as Riley's leverage...I'd wondered how Riley was coercing Buffy. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, I've been really sick and haven't been able to respond. So, thank you. A little late. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

safe, happy habitat mmmm How old is Dawn now when she came to the schol being five? I think I have an inkling why Dawn is a pawn. I'll did the math so to say.... Am I right?

Author's Response: You probably guessed it! Thanks, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

great update

Author's Response: Thanks. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

I'm sorry but I can't take Riley anymore. Please kill him. He makes me sick. I can't believe Dawn is in a bording school at the age of six. Boy that sucks. I feel so sorry for Buffy and her family situation and on top of that she's with a man she can't stand. I so pissed off right now...lol This story has to have a happy ending. Thanks for the quick update Spuf. Keep it coming

Author's Response: He is a prick, isn't he??? Thank you, it should go okay, soon. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: inquisitive1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

Hmm... I have an idea why Finn is bitter and why Dawn isn't with her family... am I right? I guess I'll have to wait to find out.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Spoiler/hint alert!!! I do believe you have probably deciphered my anvils!!! Thank you! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

Hmmm...Interesting!! More please! :)

Author's Response: Thank you and I sent you an E. Okay, I see you got the E! I won't spoil you any more! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Key'

ahah.. i see.. its a little clearer in this chapter. riley needs to be kicked in the junk. jerk.. thinkin dawn's a brat. bah.

Author's Response: I love to drop hints in my stories, throughout them. Thank you. Luv, Spuf

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