Date: 09/20/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
oh what a way to end a fight
Date: 09/30/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
Aww what a good story, oh no not too corny,yummy Spuffy
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad it wasn't too corny.
I wasn't sure how to write it.
Now, a little spoiler for the next chapter:
Spike and Buffy are going to make some plans for their future and their daughter.
spuf
Date: 07/22/2005 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
No, wasn't at all too corny...fighting and then making love, completely Spuffy, lol. Glad they made up (sort of), and that Spike knows that Dawn is his daughter. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks.
I wanted to kind of base the Spuffy sex on the show in Smashed.
Spike and Buffy are still a little put off by each other and all the lies.
I think in the next chapter, I'm going to concentrate on our couple rebuilding their relationship.
I have to find a way for Buffy to stay away from Riley, though.
I've come up with something, but I want it believable.
thanks again,
spuf
Date: 07/21/2005 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
I'm glad Spike finally knows about Dawn. I don't blame Spike for being tore up over Buffy. She had to get the hell out of dodge when Faith called her. Buffy parents and Riley suck. I'm loving Andrew in this. Revenge is so sweet. Now the sex scene...personally I thought it could have been hotter so I don't know why you toned it down...go for it next time...if there is going to be a next time...hoping so. Now don't get me wrong, I did enjoy it especially the urgency. It made perfect sense. I don't why you thought it was corny maybe because you knew it should have been hotter...lol I know you can do better than that I've read some of your other stories. Write this damn fic the way you want it to happen. Looking forward to an update soon as well as the take down of Riley Finn.
Author's Response: I loved Andrew in Season 7. He was such a silly contradiction of himself!
I wanted his part in the whole thing to be 'big' and based on revenge against Riley.
Andrew just seemed to worship Spike at times so I thought his allegiance to our blond hero would be appropriate.
There will be more Spuffy sex 'coming' tee hee, in the next chapter. Our couple needs to bond alot more, physically.
Thanks,
spuf
Date: 07/19/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
Hey!
I love your story!
The suspense is really good and the twists of the plot just makes us want more!
Please update soon!
Mave
Author's Response: Thanks!
I try, really I do.
I hope I haven't hit a block wall into 'anti-climax' in the plot line!
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
I loved the chapter. I 'm glad to truth is now told. And I hope Riley will be go down soon :)) I'm not sure what will happen now - if Buffy has to go back to Riley for now .. or not. Well, we'll see :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm trying to come up with an idea to keep Buffy away from Riley. Think I've got it!
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
You knew it couldn't last much longer, right? The UST between them. I'm glad that all the ugly truths are finally out. Riley is about to go down - I can just feel it in my bones! YIPPEE! I also wanted to say that I thoroughly enjoy all your fics and I am a faithful "fan." I know that you have had some hard times as of late. Keep writing. More people than you know enjoy what you do! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
The truth is out, yes, but Riley Finn is still in the way of our Spuffy...big time.
He so needs to be taken out. I'm just having a hard time deciding 'who' should do it! LOL
Thank you for your support on my fics.
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
Very passionate chapter. From anger to love..It was intense and I liked it a lot! :) So glad they might now be on the same page.
Author's Response: Thanks.
I wanted the anger first, like in the show in Season 6.
I am glad you enjoyed it.
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
so loving it! can't wait to hear the fully story behind Buffy's secrets... and her loser parents and Finn. Someone so needs to smack her Dad around for everything.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Buffy's parents are weak (that's the monster in them).
Finn is just plain evil (that's the monster in him).
Hank is an ass too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
Love the spuffy scene but where were they? Also love the description of Dawn. Just noticed you did a new period piece and I can't wait to start it. Love your period pieces.
Author's Response: Oh, they were at a deserted rest area/picnic area outside of Sunnydale.
(Those crazy kids!)
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
Love the spuffy scene but where were they? Also love the description of Dawn. Just noticed you did a new period piece and I can't wait to start it. Love your period pieces.
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope the sex scene was okay!
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
It's So Wondereful. Please Update Soon
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try.
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
I loved it! Spike's reaction Dawn was beautifully sweet, and I'm happy he talked things out with Buffy- that was very imperative. Plus, them hooking up at the end was hot- I love sexy Spuffyness:) She knows he's in the FBI now, so maybe she'll really let him help her and Dawn whilst locking up Riley
Author's Response: Thanks.
I was afraid I got a little sappy with the Dawn thing?
I wanted Spike and Buffy to have rough reunion sex because they are both very 'perturbed' at each other at this time.
spuf
Date: 07/18/2005 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter 12: 'Devil's Own/An Angel's Child'
i absolutely loved it and i thought that you did a fantastic job on it
Author's Response: Thank you.
I get all wiggy when I write sex scenes!
spuf