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Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 - 11:47 am Title: Secrets & Lies

Oh, that was good =D Absolutely loved the byplay between the two of them, and now I'm dying to know what's in that folder...off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2005 - 12:03 am Title: Secrets & Lies

Eeek things are getting really tense! I'm getting worried for both of them -- Spike seems really dangerous.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 05:35 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

Great tease at the end. If I would Spike, I'd be a bit suspicious about her trying to grab the file (once would be playful any more than that is suspicious). Can't wait to find our what's in the file mysefl now - you do know how to tease your readers aswell! thanks for the udpate. more please.

Reviewer: Charlene Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 01:02 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

You know, in REAL life I too am a detective. One thing that I would never, EVER do is leave any incriminating information in my home, 'cause well, that is what my office is for. But, then again, I've never investigated anyone as fine as Spike before either! Buffy is thinking with her heart and not her head, and that is going to spell TROUBLE for our little slueth. I personally think Giles should pull her off the case and put me on it! LOL As always, I am amazed at your ability to make me feel like I'm right there in the story. Great chapter!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Secrets & Lies

Ooo! Folder! Is that the folder about Buffy? Really good chapter! I'm glad Buffy and Riley decided to just be friends! Phew!! Update soon!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 05:00 am Title: Secrets & Lies

i'm sooo liking buffy's attitude!! loved it!! please update soon!! thanx!!

Reviewer: baby spikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 04:10 am Title: Secrets & Lies

btw sry my reviews aren't as thorough but i've been busy... hardly have anytime to even read hence the midnight reading...

Reviewer: baby spikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Secrets & Lies

cute.. love it... update soon!!!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Secrets & Lies

Love the sexy spark between them. Very classy and noirish.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 02:43 am Title: Secrets & Lies

good update i loved it keep up the good work

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Secrets & Lies

Please update soon, it's really great

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Secrets & Lies

I bet her house is bugged! I love this fic, i cant work out whats going to happen next & I love that!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

Oooh... dangerous games. You've really built the tension here whilst emphasising the growing manetism between the two of them. It'll be interesting to see how the big reveal happens, because someone has to lose face here and I don't really want either of them to. *gulps*

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

WOW she really believes in moving fast.......and not thinking on her feet. But then she doesn't know he has reason to be suspcious of her.....and bad move on her part to have the files in her safe at home and reading them there, and his people would have already checked the safe if its in few for the to have seen....he could have her place bugged, with video camera....and I think Ethan of all people would've had that done already....given the fact he saw her snooping at the pool house......how long has she been doing this undercover stuff.....cause for as big a criminal that Spike is she should have known or suspected video survelince both at the pool house and at her home. I'm worried that Buffy is so going to trip herself here, if she hasn't already......me worried now....very worried.....more about what Ethan will do then anything Spike might....yet.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 06:34 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

Mmmm - keeping that folder in her house can be dangerous - a safe doesn't help when a thieve tries to get what is into it. I wonder it it was said folder Spike got from Ethan - was there enough time for it...?

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 06:25 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

OK... that chapter was anticlimactic. It was good, but I think I'm getting a little impatient. What the hell does he want from her? And what exactly is she doing anyway? I'm not blaming you, I think your characters just like to iritate me a little bit. I love how you draw the plot out, but you've been very good at building the UST. And in case you're not sure, I vote for smut in the next chapter.. if the plot permits of course. :)

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:55 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

Good chapter, keep Spike on his toes.

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:46 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

I think whatever was in that folder had to do with Buffy. Something tells me Spike knows she is not who she portrays. I think he really wants her despite it and wants to see if he can get her...a challenge and maybe a dangerous one. I love how they interact but I get disappointed when the chapters end when I really start to get into it. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:44 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

Great chapter - everything in this fic is progressing interestingly, for lack of another word ; ) Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C : o )

Reviewer: PK_ Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:35 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

awesome-ers. Though, makes me wonder if there she's being watched when she opened her safe and Ethan saw it and the dude came rushin in cause...well, it's important. I patiently await for more.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:27 pm Title: Secrets & Lies

i just LOVE them together!!!!!! GREAT UPDATE!

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