Date: 11/05/2013 - 06:15 am Title: 7:37 pm
Good start. There are a few typos; for example, a few times it says "where" and it should be "were."
Date: 08/13/2007 - 01:32 am Title: 7:37 pm
My gut reaction to the first chap? Bloody brilliant luv.
Date: 08/29/2005 - 06:39 am Title: 7:37 pm
Wow. This is an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it and the poem was awesome. I read your other poems, which were great also. But this is one of the best fics I've read in a while. I hope you write something else soon!
Date: 07/18/2005 - 11:16 pm Title: 7:37 pm
PERFECT START. I'M ALREADY HOOKED. KUDDOS!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad to know you like it so far, xxx
Date: 07/16/2005 - 11:50 am Title: 7:37 pm
Oh - this is a good one. I like the plot, they way Buffy works :)
Author's Response: Thanx so much, glad to know you like it, it means a lot! xxx
Date: 07/13/2005 - 06:52 pm Title: 7:37 pm
Wonderful start. Looking forward to more.
Date: 07/13/2005 - 05:59 am Title: 7:37 pm
omg lovin it already. i can tell this ones goin to be great. please update soon thanx.
Date: 07/12/2005 - 10:44 pm Title: 7:37 pm
i really like it more plz!
Date: 07/12/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: 7:37 pm
great start, cant wait fore more!!
Date: 07/12/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: 7:37 pm
Nice interesting storyline, it will be nice to see how it progresses
Date: 07/12/2005 - 09:56 am Title: 7:37 pm
You have me intreged (sp?). I can't really say anything else at the moment. Heck, I can't even really type too well at the moment. I just woke up. I will be sure to keep up with this story. Keep up the great work.
Date: 07/12/2005 - 06:45 am Title: 7:37 pm
OH more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/12/2005 - 05:33 am Title: 7:37 pm
I read the summary and thought oh great another coma story, but after I read the chapter I was surprised; this story is excellent. I loved it. Update soon.
Date: 07/12/2005 - 04:56 am Title: 7:37 pm
This is a really interesting concept and I'm looking forward to seeing how you play this out. I hope you update soon.
Date: 07/12/2005 - 03:53 am Title: 7:37 pm
Great start. This story looks very promising.
Date: 07/12/2005 - 03:19 am Title: 7:37 pm
Great beginning for a fic - I'm very interested to see where you're going to take this fic! Can't wait for more, as soon as you're able to update! Take care, C ; )
Date: 07/12/2005 - 02:39 am Title: 7:37 pm
love it so far cant wait for more
Date: 07/12/2005 - 02:37 am Title: 7:37 pm
definitely loving it so far
Date: 07/12/2005 - 02:07 am Title: 7:37 pm
You've sparked my interest. I don't have a rounded/honest opinion of the story, yet. But take that as a request for more chapters. All in the name of an research for an honest opinion, mind you.
Date: 07/12/2005 - 01:58 am Title: 7:37 pm
Cool start, looking forward to seeing where you go with this!
Date: 07/12/2005 - 01:37 am Title: 7:37 pm
love the premise!! can't wait for more!! great start!! thanx! hope you update soon ;)
Date: 07/12/2005 - 01:35 am Title: 7:37 pm
I like the start of this story. Please continue. I would love to read more of it. Please update soon and often.
Date: 07/12/2005 - 01:33 am Title: 7:37 pm
this is really good, please keep going with it
Date: 07/12/2005 - 01:16 am Title: 7:37 pm
Awwww, I'm lovin it!!!!!...can't wait for the next update