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Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Well that was so sweet.So spike and Buffy became one,as the saying gos!"Im sorry I didnt review until now,But once I start a fic,I like to keep on going untill I reach the last chapter.I know this is not the last,but it is for now.Cant wait untill you post the next chapter,got to find out what happens to the gang,Spike and Buffy??Also Buffys mom,dad,dawn,and little hank.Not to mention that rotton Caileb.next chapter please.

Author's Response: That's okay. I kind of do the same thing sometimes. In the next few chapters, Spike and Buffy will bond even more. Unfortunately, the posse is closing in and Graham is going to pose an even bigger problem to our couple. Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Mean cliffhanger!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm a stinker, huh? Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

You definitely captured the sweet and sexy first time vibe, but I can't wait for more passion. This is an awesome fic and I'm really enjoying it.

Author's Response: Passion shall happen. Spike and Buffy are getting to know each other, sexually, as well as spiritually! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: greyangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2005 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Well you were aiming for nice and sweet and as far as I'm concerned you achieved it...coz it was all kinds of sweet...though I should complain that we didn't get to read the whole thing...and I sure hope they got their climax coz we didn't...lol. Now, will they be making a mad dash to the nearest priest to marry and put the cherry (no pun intended...lol) on the cake in this sweet tale...I sure hope so, it would seem fitting for these two...Spike being all chivalrous is bound to want to claim her properly...more soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, like I told Franchesca, I'm not a big fan of virgin Buffy in my stories. I like the passion that Spuffy burned the screen up with, but the problem is that she would be a virgin in this story. Most likely that is. I'm not so sure that all the brides back then could officially wear white (if you know what I mean.) However, I have to assume that if single girls lost their virginity, it was probably to their future spouses? Anyway, now that the initial deed is done, the passion can begin! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

absolutely loved it more please

Author's Response: Thank you. More soon, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Awe, that was so sweet! Thanks for some spuffy lovin'. BTW - are you the spuf on LJ? Because when you comment you're not logged in. :) Thanks tor the update!

Author's Response: Thank you . Yes I believe it's me on the lj. I'm under anon and need to really log in from now on. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 11:38 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

I liked the chapter, but I think I would have rather seen Spike more sure of himself. I'm not a big fan of making Buffy a virgin in fanfic, but I know that it was completely necessary in this fic. I've never really thought of losing your virginity as romantic, so it's probably just me. But it definitiely was sweet and sexy and it sounds like that was exactly what you were going for.

Author's Response: Thank you. And I'm glad you picked up on Spike's insecurities. I have a feeling men back then were confused when it came to dealing with the women they truly loved and sex. Considering most single men probably had to pay for sex, routinely, they were probably completely stumped when it came to the women they eventually loved and ended up with. Or so I think, anyway. As to Buffy being a virgin? Yeah, I am not comfortable with it either.That's why in SYC, I made her a widow so Spike and her wouldn't have to go through all the drama of her first time. Anyway thank you for sticking with the story! spuf

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

Aw, that was sweet. I'm glad Buffy went through with it and that she plans on staying with him on her own free will. Great update, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, that Spike. He just holds sway over Buffy. Well, just holds sway over him too so I guess it's a match made in well...Paradise? Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

That was beautiful. A gentleman he is. Thank you for a wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to make Spike a bit insecure about this. He's used to jaded women and Buffy is a really quite innocent. (Well, she was anyway...tee hee) spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

I love how Buffy just blurted out she 'touched herself down there' while they were in the middle of foreplay lol. Sounds like something I would have done lol. It was so cute and sweet! It was like she was saying "I love you and trust you enough now to tell you my deepest secrets and here you go. .. " So great. I know, such a small thing to pick out, but that's what struck me. Great job!

Author's Response: I thought that would be a Buffy thing to do. She always tried so hard to cover her emotions that when they boiled to the surface, they usually really boiled! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter 16: 'Paradise'

I loved it! I think it was sweet and sexy and pretty realistic for the time period, especially for both of them to act the way they did and say what they said. Excellent sex scene!:)

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I caught some of Spike's insecurities and explained them a little. spuf

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