Date: 09/12/2005 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 12
HI,JUST FINISHED READING THIS STORY ALL I CAN SAY IS PLEASE ADD ANOTHER LONG CHAPTER LOVED IT .GREAT READ MORE SOON PLEASE..MAGGIE
Date: 08/04/2005 - 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
Absolutely fabulous. I love your way of writing and all the ideas... one of the best fics out there - keep it comin'!
Date: 08/03/2005 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow it's great.
Date: 08/03/2005 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 12
Cute chapter!!! Loved Buffy's explanation about being immortal and WIllow's, “You have to kill one another during…you know?” That was hilarious!! And then Xander goes and gets her pissed....only for him to be 'claimed' as her cub...that scene about did me in with the giggles....so glad that Spike wasn't upset with that. Oh, and the mate part? YUMMY!!! This is a great fic, and I'm highly anticipating the next chapter!!
Date: 08/03/2005 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 12
great update keep up the good work
Date: 08/03/2005 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 12
i knew angel would react that way. typical. loved it. great job. can't wait for more. post soon?
Date: 07/29/2005 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh mama, I see major trouble brewing with Angel and Spuffy....I know he's gonna try something to mess it up...the jerk....great chapter!! The background info was fab, I love it when we get the little details in order to fully understand the story...right on!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!
Date: 07/29/2005 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 11
loved it. great cliffhanger. post soon. hope there's some spuffyness in the next chapter. loved it.
Date: 07/28/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
To Giles decided to stay by Buffy - but Angel is still thinking to break Buffy's claim. Stupid Angel I dare to say. Lol - you did indeed Buffy let drop a bomb there at the end of the chater ... cliffhanger! I hope you can update soon *smile*
Date: 07/28/2005 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
Nice way to drop the bomb Buffy!
Date: 07/28/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Very interesting chapter!!! I love how you've crossed over Highlander with these and made it believable...was wondering who Buffy was talking to there, so I was surprised to see it was Whistler...don't know...was expecting someone else....my bad. Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait for her to wake up!!!
Date: 07/27/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
Well, you confused me a bit because I was looking for that fic and didn't remember to read it. Thank god for reviews - I found it again :)
You must embrace the darkness to fight it ... like you must love the girl to kill it :) Love the line. OH! by the line of Immortals so the same wasn't a coincidence! Immortals! Well - good to be immortal if you has a vampire husband, huh? Oh, I love the new twist! TNX for updating :))
Date: 07/27/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 10
I missed a few chapters back apparently, so I went and read them, the Duncan Mcleaod(sp?) stood out to me then, but I thought it was just put in for fun. Now with this chapter I see it was not. I think it would be a lot easier to understand if you put in the summary that it is a crossover fic with highlander. I know if I had not seen the tv show or movies I would be totally confused. Now that Buffy knows she is immortal is Duncan going to help her train?
Author's Response: I deliberately wanted to wait on revealing the Highlander aspect because I was afraid everyone would instantly figure I was going to have Buffy be immortal. I did post a disclaimer for Highlander on chapter 4 because I was using Duncan and it was also a tiny hint about what was to come. Buffy's collapse and battle would have seemed less powerful if everyone knew she'd either a) Wake up as an immortal or B) Spike possibly even Angel in their desperation could turn her at the last possible second. Plus since Buffy didn't know about immortals, I wanted to revel it to her at the same time I sprung it on you guys! Put you all in the same boat so to speak :) As for Duncan, Buffy doesn't know he's an immortal yet and he doesn't know she is either.Their relationship as well as the one Duncan will have with Joyce will be secondary plots, twisted around Buffy's relationship with Spike. As for the Highlander cross, I'll be sure that even non-watchers can understand the story. It's like Angel the series, you could watch that show never knowing it was a BTVS spinoff because it wasn't dependant on the parent show Or atleast that's what I'm hoping for :) Thanks for the review ;)
Date: 07/27/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the tie-in to the pre-sunnydale past. I always thought it helped explain her behaviour, and it's nice to see it dealt with here. This is a very interesting satrt; looking forward to more!
Date: 07/25/2005 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
okay, this cannot be happenning. i mean, their journey together just started. how can it be ending so soon and what the heck is going on with buffy???? loved it. post soon. great job
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
Huh? What's happening with Buffy? It's only Buffy so it can't be Spike's demon.. Slayer demon? *reading and guessing on* Buffy is right to call for Giles - good that Spike was able to bring her there.. Mmh - Angel oh my - I hope he won't do nothing bad - he didn't knew of the claim. Oh my... I'm guessing on here but I don't know anything. You wrote it yourself: Intensity. Yeah, the chapter was very intense! I hope you can update soon - the story has me hooked.
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh Holy Crap what the hell is going on? Poor Buffy :(
Date: 07/25/2005 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
I knew about the Penn thing, but thanks for explaining James and Elizabeth. I'm not a big Angel fan so I've only seen a few episodes other than the entire of season 5 (coz there was Spike, ya know? LOL) I'm really enjoying this fic and plan to recommend it to everyone I know :D Keep up the awesome work and update soon please!