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Reviewer: JenxGeR Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

Hmm, I've always quite enjoyed your fics, spufette, but I think you need 1 more beta for your stories.

It's always the slight grammatical errors that kinda spoils your stories... Like the excess question marks, paraphrasings, etc... And telly is actually television, not telephone, anyway.

Also, there's also the thing about another fic I've read quite long ago, where Buffy was also a torcher and with Angel in the story... I'm not saying you're plagurising since you're basing it off a oldie, but I couldn't help but compare the 2. I can't name the fic to save my life tho...

Anyways, it's still a pleasure to read your enthusiatic fics. Thanks for sharing :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

Buffy said she left Spike because he was to weak? Hmmm. – Dawn is sweet! Mr. Holden? I wonder what he wants from Buffy.

Reviewer: Heaven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2005 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

Oh, I love camping.......great chapter and at least now I know why they started piss testing horses. Ever stand in a test barn whistling like a jackass, waiting for a horse to pee? Love the story :)

Author's Response: Thanks. We didn't go camping so i posted some more chapters. No, actually, I've never stood in a barn and waited for a horse to pee, but it sounds interesting enough! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2005 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

When you first wrote and posted the first chapter I wrote a review, then came the big moving to a new server. I really like this story, doesn't matter if it came from an old movie. When I originally saw the name of the piece I thought you were going to use "Little Myth Marker" by Robert Aspin and his Myth series, they are basic on magic. Please continue with this story you are going a wonder job on it.

Author's Response: Yeah, I just love the oldies! Thanks for reading, and please be assured, happy things will be coming! spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

yay u updated, im so happy. i love thi story and cant wiat to read more. i really hope that buffy doesnt do anything stupid and gets with spike soon, i cant wiat to see them together. also i think its so mean that merrick just left dawn for spike. i think its sweet though because i think that he should start to fall in love with her ( not romantic). also i think angel should rot in hell for first killing a horse just to make money and second that hes cheating on buffy, he doesnt deserve her. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more and see wat happens next with spike and dawn and holden and buffy. thanx

Author's Response: Thank you. Don't worry about Buffy and Holden. Poor Holden is just a means for me to push Buffy back into Spike's world. Which is going to happen in the next chapter. Fixed horse racing was rampant at this time. The concoction was actually a speedball and would kill the poor horse immediately. This becomes very important in the plot as Dawn becomes enamored of the Charger! Buffy isn't naive, she knows that Angel has a 'tootsie' in Chicago. This just might be Spike's ace up his sleeve to woo his Buffy back!!! Especially when he points out that he, Spike, was always faithful to Buffy. This is going to be important in the end! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2005 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

I'm very intrigued by this story. It's fun! Love the songs too :) Can't wait to see what'll happen with Dawn and Spike etc. More please!

Author's Response: Thanks. It is fun! I'm trying to write it as funny in places. spuf

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2005 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

Not usually a fan of "everybody's human" AUs, but this story is really cute. And I'm such a sucker for Dawn & Spike....

Author's Response: Thanks, I like AU's (all human) stories. I like vamp/slayer stories too, of course. I like writing Dawn as Buffy and Spike's daughter (I've got reasons, I heard this was supposed to be a plot line in the show if it had continued). I know Dawn isn't their child in this, but let's just say she'll come to mean alot to both of them. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2005 - 08:59 am Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

Spike babysitting Dawn? This is turning out to be fun...

Author's Response: Dawn will have a way of getting under everyone's skin and into their hearts. Especially Buffy and Spike! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2005 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

good update

Author's Response: thanks, spuf

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