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Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'A Friend In Need'

I can’t understand Buffy’s reasons completely – especially because she went to Parker Abrams soon after she left Spike… And even worse – after staying a year with him she’s with Angel now. *sigh* Silly Buffy.. I wonder what her reasons were.

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Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:36 pm Title: Prologue & Summary

Had to giggle over this line: why did Buffy run off from Spike, nearly four years before? (Silly Buffy!) - especially the last part! I don’t know if I know the film with Shirley Temple – I don’t recognize the English title. But it sounds like a lot of fun with Dawn as a pawn! Buffy was a fool to let William go (run away from him)… wonder what the reason was.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2005 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 6: 'Girls Just Wanna Shop; Til They Drop!'

WTF why did she push him away and get all emotional over it, also she slapped wat the hell she responded to the kiss, she didnt need to slap him. i really want them to get together i think that the belong together and that buffy should get over wat ever shes still holding on to and give spike antoher chance. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that they work throught this and get together and dawn and them become a family that would be so sweet. please update as soon as u cam, i cant wait to read tha next chapter and see wat happens between buffy and spike next thanx

Author's Response: Buffy's a bit confused (what's new eh?) and she never 'gets' that all's she has to do is ask Spike to change for her. A little anyway. Spike is Buffy idea of an ideal, but the problem is that she doesn't like what he does. Angel is a meal ticket for Buffy, kind of, not much more. She knows that Angel is what he is and will never attain any higher calling in life. Spike isn't just a street hood, he's better then that and Buffy knows it. I'm trying to convey in the story that although Buffy loves Spike, to see him not live up to his potential breaks her heart. I wonder, will Spike finally realize his own potential and what Buffy sees in him? How does the little orphan fit in? Spoiler: Dawn is an orphan at this point and I'll explain that, probably in the next chapter. Thank you fro reading and reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2005 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'Girls Just Wanna Shop; Til They Drop!'

They are both so stubborn!! Makes it fun ...and irritating to read. :) More please! :)

Author's Response: Yes, stubborn they are! Thanks for reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: Heaven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2005 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

Oh, I love camping.......great chapter and at least now I know why they started piss testing horses. Ever stand in a test barn whistling like a jackass, waiting for a horse to pee? Love the story :)

Author's Response: Thanks. We didn't go camping so i posted some more chapters. No, actually, I've never stood in a barn and waited for a horse to pee, but it sounds interesting enough! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: vanessow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2005 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 6: 'Girls Just Wanna Shop; Til They Drop!'

I really love this story. It's so. . . I dunno. You really captured the feeling of the period for me. I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I captured the period. I just am obsessed with the Roaring 20's! More on the way. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2005 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter 6: 'Girls Just Wanna Shop; Til They Drop!'

good update more please

Author's Response: Thanks. More soon. spuf

Reviewer: Pauly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2005 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 6: 'Girls Just Wanna Shop; Til They Drop!'

I liked the chapter even though I couldn't detect much Spuffy vibes going on yet. The Buffy and William interaction is very intense, i enjoy reading it so much.. Please update!

Author's Response: Thanks. I always worry that I either put Spuffy in too soon, or not soon enough! spuf

Reviewer: Pauly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2005 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Lady In Red'

Do we get to see spuffy in the next chapter? I'm looking forward to it. Great update!

Author's Response: Yes. There will be Spuffy in the next chapter maybe in flashback, but.... Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2005 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'The Lady In Red'

Sounds like bloody fun, the 3 of them going shopping and all, although poor Spike for that matter. Well, let the games begin!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I am going to put some Spuffy in the next chapter, nothing graphic yet, but some tenderness? spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Lady In Red'

good update

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll update as soon as possible. spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 5: 'The Lady In Red'

aww that so cute, i thought it was so funny that dawn said that spike should come with them, i think shes trying to get them together. i LOVE this story and am SO happy that u updated. i think its so sweet wat she told giles and i really wish that she would get over wat evers making her stay away from him and get with him already. also i thought it was wonderful that both giles and johnathan want her to come back. i really hope that they get together soon and become a family. please update as soon as u can, im dyng read more and see wat happens wen they go shoping thanx

Author's Response: Thank you. There's some angst coming, but more so for Dawn, not our Spuffy couple. I've decided to write Spuffy in as soon as possible. It might take a few days, but there will be some mutual Spuffy affection! spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2005 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'The Lady In Red'

cute chapter! :) I love the idea of them shopping together with Dawn. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I've decided, due to the fact that I'm depressed by alot of things, to write Spuffy into the next chapters. It might not be total hot Spuffy, but it will be Spuffy! spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2005 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 4: 'An Offer He Can't Refuse'

Gotta love protective Spike. So, looks their building a family here...but not entirely aware of it yet ...more please!

Author's Response: Yeah, he's a sweety when he wants to be! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'An Offer He Can't Refuse'

awww how cute, think its so nice that she is going to take care of dawn. errr im getting really mad that buffy keeps pushing her feelings away for spike. also i feel bad for spike becuz he loves her so much but shes with angel who he hates and she wont get with him. i really hope that they start getting closer to ach toher and get into a relationship again. i really hope taht dawn rings them together and fast and that they become a family. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next between buffy and spike. thanx

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with the story. I've decided to continue it. I'm going to give you a little heads up: Spoiler? Buffy is well aware that Spike adores her, no question. Her heart belongs to Spike (alot of the characters 'see' that in this story). However, she expects better of Spike then what he does, yet she doesn't have the guts to just say "get out of the business and I'll come back to you". Buffy's is insecure and she knows just exactly what Angel is. It doesn't break Buffy's heart that Angel is on the wrong side of the law. However, it devestates her that Spike is. Now why would that be... Thanks again, spuf (Oh and Dawn is very wise for a little girl, believe me. She knows that Sir Spike and Princess Buffy belong together!)

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2005 - 08:57 am Title: Chapter 4: 'An Offer He Can't Refuse'

I don't get Buffy, on the one hand she wants her distance from Spike and on the other hand she's plottting with him and consciously tempting him. I'm curious to find out what she is up to. Well done!

Author's Response: I'm going to give a little background history on our couple in this story. This could be considered a spoiler? Spike worships Buffy, that's obvious and she knows it. The problem with Buffy is that she hides her true feelings. The reason Buffy left Spike in the first place is because she realized that he was better then what he was doing as a career. It's not that Buffy thinks 'she's' better then Spike; she feels that Spike is better then what he does for a living. HOwever, Buffy is a bit of a coward when it comes to love and she's afraid to make Spike 'make' the choice of her or his life style. I know it doesn't seem to make sense right now, but I promise it will. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2005 - 08:04 am Title: Chapter 4: 'An Offer He Can't Refuse'

Enjoying this one! Why do i suspect there's trouble on the horizon for our heroes??

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, there's trouble a brewin' however not so much what you might suspect. One thing about Spike and Buffy (even in the show and yes, even in 7) they were a team. A great team and nobody could beat them when they worked together! spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2005 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 4: 'An Offer He Can't Refuse'

good update but i cant wait for them to get back together

Author's Response: Thanks. I will probably put Spuffy into this fic, sooner then I normally do. spuf

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2005 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

Nice work =0)

Author's Response: Thanks. spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2005 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

Cute chap, with Spike and Dawn. I just can't get over Dawn's blue eyes. Are they a hidden message of some kind? Don't feel forced to give a spoiler, I'm just wondering....

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll give you a spoiler: No, Dawn is not Buffy or Spike's child, through blood. There are some surprises in store however. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Frozen_Forever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2005 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

This really is a great story, don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. I think you are oding a wonderful job on this fic. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your reviews. spuf

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2005 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

This story continues to be deeply cute! I'm loving the Dawn/Spike interactions; but then I'm a sucker for Dawn and Spike as a general rule. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks. It's supposed to be fluffy, a little angst, later. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2005 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

excellent update and cant wait to see what the offer is

Author's Response: Thank you! spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2005 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

aww thats so cute, im so happy that spikes starting to like dawn and that buffy came, even though he was being kind of mean but i hope taht it gets better. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that spike and buffy start to get together and they fall in love again. also i hope that she breaks up with angel soon he dosnt deserve her even wen shes a bitch. please updaate as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx

Author's Response: Thanks. The fact of the matter is that Spike and Buffy still do love each other. They're just too damn stubborn to admit it! No, Angel does not deserve Buffy, however, Buffy needs to be a little more honest with her feelings for Spike! Along the way, we'll meet a cast of colorful characters: Xander, who've we met. Rupert Giles, the wise sage of the group; Riley and Jesse, the thugs who are loyal to Spike; Ethan 'Doc' Rayne who might just have a soul after all and alot of others. Buffy has her reasons for what she did and the anvil in this chapter was when she told Spike he was the better man. In the next chapter, Buffy will make Spike an offer he cannot refuse. However, his acceptance of Buffy's offer just might come with a price! Tee hee! Angel won't be making an appearance again, until close to the end of the story. Even he has a place in this! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2005 - 12:43 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

Loved the whole 'dark prince' 'princess' and 'court jester' analogies there lol. Made me chuckle. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm hoping to hold onto the sarcastic one-liners from the old movies. These guys were the best at this kind of thing! spuf

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