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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2013 - 03:29 pm Title: The Plan

Cute story, but so many errors. Grammar needs a lot of work, and after 2.5 hours of driving, they'd be well outside of Sunnydale, not on the outskirts. And 143 would be on the 1st floor, unless this is some crazy hotel (the "hundreds" of a room number tell you which floor - 243 would be 2nd floor 1443 would be 14th floor, etc.). And dawn is sun up, dusk is sundown.

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 04:23 pm Title: The Plan

Awesome. I can't wait to see if they catch up with Buffy and Spike.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2005 - 04:18 am Title: The Plan

good updates

Author's Response: Thanks I try! lol.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2005 - 04:44 pm Title: The Plan

This is so darn cute of a story. Good chapter.

Author's Response: lol. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2005 - 12:12 pm Title: The Plan

I just hope Buffy realizes how good it could be between her and Spike "really" before the Scoobies show back up. Love their interactions with each other.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments, I'll try to make a good chapter for you. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2005 - 10:39 am Title: The Plan

I hope you feel better now. Love the teasing between Buffy and Spike. I hope Spike won't get hungry soon :) I'm glad they did make it in time to get out there - before the Scoobies came. Oh - and isn't it too long instead of to long? Looking forward to Las Vegas :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing...again. I am feeling a little better, but if I have to delay a chapter or two, don't be mad! ;)

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