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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2009 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Hmmm... don't quite know how Buffy will react to all that. Very interesting flashback.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

No, no, no!! He knew and he isn't telling her! You said it would be angsy. You warned me. But everything seemed to be going so well. But, you did warn me.

Great story.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2005 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Wow. Now that was some revelation to wrap the brain around. Definitely makes things that much more interesting. I think he made the right choice though. Update again soon please.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2005 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

i don't think he is evil. I mean he has suffered alot to make them happy and the perfect family. I don't think it was his fault that Angel abandoned his family.

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2005 - 11:32 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I have a pretty good idea that Fred knew what she was doing. She should know right from wrong. Idiot...now that I'm through with my little anger concerning Fred...I would love to say that you did an excellent job on this chapter. *both thumbs up*

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

That's not making Spike evil, that's just soulmates trying to connect and as usual Buffy is too stuborn to get with the program. Nice chap - really sheds some light on things. Thanks for an informative update. More please (still looking forward to that first date).

Reviewer: jennybean Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2005 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Nice twist. I don't think William is evil. It was a difficult decision and in the end it was Angel's decision to leave. And the marriage was already doomed - they both cheated on each other, it was bound to happen again. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Well, that was a shock. Fred and Angel's reunion wasn't a chance encounter, and William knew in advance...how is he going to come clean to Buffy? Just when things seem to be settling down, there's another quirky plot twist.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Well thank you for the link.I started at the beginning and now I'm back at chapter 16.This has been a heart wrinching story,and it looks like Spike and buiffy are coming to the end of thier jurney.I can't wait for the next update Brat,Please let it be soon!"

Reviewer: spufette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Well, Spike, you've done it again!
So, did our boy set up the ultimate 'runaway' lovers scenario?
Hmmm,
great chapter and nice twist.
spuf

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Oh boy. Spike could be in big trouble if this comes out. Please update soon!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 01:41 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

No he is not evil but that was an interesting flashback for sure.

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

That sneaky, conniving, SOB...I love it...more please

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I'm confused - Spike KNEW Lindsey was his??? I'll just have to reread. I love this story, though, and Spike choosing to bring Fred anyway was a real surprise.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

So that's the reason Spike kept quiet - to make Buffy happy (and him unhappy). I didn't think that Spike would hire a PI to check Angel out ... everything to keep Buffy happy. Ooops! I'm putting the choice in your hands." If Buffy gets to know this - I hope she'll take it well! Maybe when all went well in the hindsight. The decision what to do or not was Angel's and Fred's. Spike did only get the ball in motion. They were the one playing. I still hope Buffy won't be too mad about it.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

well now isnt that interesting?

Reviewer: Joan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Boo flash backs :( Its nice to get a little insite but the whole chapter as a flashback? I want to know what happens next.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Wow! I was definitely not expecting that! What an awesome surprise that chapter was. I loved it! It was interesting to see how Spike did have a role in the turn of events. I hope that Buffy will be able to let go of Angel soon though, it will be nice to see them really moving forward.

Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

uh oh I hope he never tells Buffy about that
Great chapter

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

So I'm not a member of the Psychic Friends Network or anything but do you really have to be gifted to suspect this little factoid is going to come back to bite Spike in the ass? Oh yeah, you're evil. *In a Doctor Evil from Austin Powers accent* Eeeevvvvvvuuuuurrrrrrrlllllll I say!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Oh my god, what a twist. Is he going to spill to Buffy? I am really loving this story. Great chapter, update soon.

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