Oh boy -- that's just wrong -- other people telling you what to do and how to do it. Its your writing and we are just th readers and unless this is a poll or something, we fon't get any say in what you write. whew.

giles did a good thing there. And finally that bitch is gone. Maybe now they'll tak?

Okay I just have to say this, YOU KICK ASS!!!!!! I have major respect for you standing up to the readers like that. As a fellow writer I totally understand where you are coming from. You know where you are taking this story and if you have to angst it up then so be it. Me personally I love a bit of angst to get me on the edge of my seat. Please continue as you are because it is freakin' amazing! Kuddos on a job well done kiddo and I can't wait to see where you take us next!

keep going you are doing great. who cares what other people think. Cant wait to see how it ends!!!

i have read a ton of buffy fan fic on many sites. if i did not care for a fic i would not read it anymore. i would never criticize an author b/c i did not like it or thought the story should go differently. it is shameful for a reviewer to do that!!! as a reader of fan fics it is not our story, it is the writers. if a person whats a story to go a certain way then write your own damn story. i am getting tired of this crap. it is behond rediculous and my heart goes out to you Addie. that you have to waste your breath on this is wrong.
to all readers everywhere.............if you do not have something nice to say, don't say anything at all. do not criticize someone else. who do you think you are anyway? you are not in a position to make criticisms against any writer of fan fic. remember, you are NOT a publisher or a critic by profession, youa re jsut a reader like me. start showing other people some respect.
this may come off to some as harsh. i do not care. this is how i feel and will not apologize for that. plus, i know i'm right and judging my the other reviews alot of other people agree!!!!
now, lets stop this bullcrap and let Addie writer her story, HER WAY!!!!
remeber........if you don't like it then don't read it. don't go an write a flaming review b/c none of us care to read your dribble

wow, great update, keep it up. i can't wait to see more.

Great chapter. LOVED seeing Cecily get kicked out. That was very cool. And I'm not going anywhere. I will absolutely continue to read this high-quality story. You are the author. You can do whatever the hell you like. End of story. Anyone who doesn't like it should let the door hit them in the arse on the way out.

keep doing what you're doing. don't let those few bad reviews get in the way of your story. I love it and I have always believe that a little agnst always makes a better Spufy story. it just makes it more believable. don't worry. as far as i'm concerned you are doing great. post soon. loved it.

I'm sorry to hear that you have had some negative critisism about your fic...I'm enjoying the story and I think your doing a great job with it

Keep it up. I like this story. Can't wait to see how'll you'll get them back together. :)

Love the fic! Looking forward to the next update!

wooaah! i thinked of what you just said
that you fell kinda offended
well i just wanna tell you that i think your fic its
GReat the way it is, i mean...there was passion, love, smutt, and a lot of stuffs
so i dont complained
you are right about the "resolution part"
it makes the final more cool
more unespected
so thats what i said
i like the way your fic has turn out
and im waiting for your update

kisses :**

and thanks because its been a while since i read a good fic

So, Giles will probably bring them back together huh? I like it. Can't wait to see how it all turns out.
Don't let those 'verbally repetitive' people get you down, you have a great story and I'm always happy to find a new chapter. The longer it is, the longer I can enjoy reading it :-)