Oooh! Good cliffhanger! I just got caught up on chapters seventeen through twenty-four just wanted to say what an amazing job you have done with this fic and I can't wait for the next chapter!

*smack* That's for the cliffhanger! I know how much authors love to leave us poor readers in (insert Spike's favorite curse word here) suspense. Great chapter! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN VERY, VERY, VERY SOON!!!

William's reaction to Buffy's "You don't love me. You only think you do..." was great - no snivelling attempts to convince her, just pure fury. It was an excellent rant, giving the character a chance to get a lot off his chest. Thanks for having Buffy think things through rather than lay about weeping. I hope she spells out why she has trust issues. I'm interested in her past.

That was great! Love the cliffhanger. Can't wait for more.

Typical Buffy and Spike angst...only proves how right they are for each other.

Fantastic chapter! I love cliffhangers! I liked the way Spike was able to vent his feelings to Buffy after she told him he didn't love her. Please update soon!

oh what a relief. i am sooo glad buffy went over to talk to him. can't wait for more as always.
great cliffhanger you evil woman!!!!

So glad Buffy finally realized the truth and took a step toward correcting it (at least I hope that's the purpose of her being in William's room). Great chapter and I love the little tantrum Spike threw in his room (very Spike-like). Thanks so much. More please.

i hope they get back together

You are a sick, sick woman... that is an absolutely evil place to leave that.

Lol! Well at least you are honest about not being sorry about the cliffhanger. That's something atleast. And I loved the chapter. It was very emotional and intense and just lovely. You nearly gave me a heart attack when they started fighting again. I'm so glad that Buffy came to find him. Can't wait for the next chapter.

What an ending! Seems like Buffy may have finally come to her senses. I hope William will be receptive. But I follow your muse anywhere. And you devilishly choose to leave me at a cliffhanger when I finally catch up with the rest of your loyal followers. And I can finally say... Please, update soon, but it's always worth the wait. Great chapter.

(I do have a personal affinity for this chapter, because I also told a boyfriend "no you don't" right after he told me he loved me for the first time. I guess I should have taken how well he handled it as a bad sign, cause that didn't end too well two years later... but I digress...)