Date: 10/10/2006 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter 18b
teehee...quite the night on the town! and on the sofa...or over the sofa...loved this chapter! they're so perfect together!
Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:54 am Title: Chapter 18b
Gulp! Very hot! if Buffy doesn't fall soon she's nuts! more please.
Date: 12/06/2005 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 18b
Loved every word of it! Great chapter *goes off to take cold shower*
Date: 12/06/2005 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 18b
Loved it :) The Club, Buffy feeling as is she don't fit; Spike helping her :) And now I must go - sorry I'm too late for more today *yawn*
Date: 12/06/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 18b
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Date: 12/06/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 18b
Suiting up for the punk club, I liked William's absolute need for Buffy to be his forever. You're doing a good job conveying their conflicting emotions. William's vision of a future with Buffy is overwhelming, and he's right to keep it to himself.
The club was fun, especially Buffy's wariness. Her comment that she should have researched more made me smile, and highlighted her youth. The punk personas led to very steamy sex, and I loved that William insisted she call him Spike throughout.
Date: 12/06/2005 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 18b
i love the way you described spike's thoughts about buffy. beautiful
Date: 12/06/2005 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 18b
i love the way you described spike's thoughts about buffy. beautiful
Date: 12/06/2005 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 18b
That was hot and tender at the same time. Great chapter.
Date: 12/06/2005 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter 18b
I like the way they just glided over the fact that he told her he loves her
Date: 12/06/2005 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter 18b
absolutely loved this chapter
Date: 12/06/2005 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter 18b
yay, your updates bring a shiver of delight to me every time i see them!
Date: 12/06/2005 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter 18b
Damn sexy! This chapter was hot. Great plot and writing. Keep up the good work.
Date: 12/06/2005 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter 18b
Man, the weather here is so goddamn hot, and that chapter did nothing to help. Keep up the good work :D.
Date: 12/06/2005 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 18b
I really look forward to your updates for this story! I just loved reading Spike's feelings for Buffy..sure hope Buffy comes around to his way of thinking soon. : -) Thanks for the update!
Date: 12/06/2005 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 18b
Sigh, it's great, the Spuffy that is.
I just wonder about the getting lost in their sensuality.
(don't mind me, I'm totally doped up on cold medicine!)
Anyway, I'm hoping that no one, and I mean, no one messes this up for them!
spuf
Date: 12/06/2005 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter 18b
Nice update!
Date: 12/06/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 18b
Who the hell would want a sonnet about their rump? Something just seems wrong about that...lol! This was a fun chapter. Poor Buffy has so much to learn. Thinking Green Day is punk, I had to laugh at that. She really didn't fit in that place, but I'm glad Spike made everything all better. More please=)
Author's Response: i based her reactions on what mine would be ...lol I'm just as clueless about stuff like that. .. Thankfully, I had some help with it.