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Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 04:31 am Title: Twenty seven

Hmmm not that I don't mind the angst but sometimes I think that given the background of some characters they are acting very strange. With his history with the married woman I find it hard to believe that William would not break up with her even if he loved her just because he's been here before, she doesn't love him and I don't think that he would want to put himself through that again.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 02:34 am Title: Twenty seven

Ooh, I love the way you blended that song into the chapter (excellent song choice, too, I love Alanis!) it worked so well! Thank god they talked about things, and she really doesn't want to leave him. that makes me feel a gazillion times better. plus they won't be dating other people--that's a BIG relief.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 05:42 am Title: Twenty seven

Fantastic chapter... finally some of that unresolved stuff is... resolved. ;D And William is so sweet too... all the love and fear of letting Buffy go.

More more more please!

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 04:13 am Title: Twenty seven

Wow - even though that wasn't exactly a break up... I still feel like something has been lost. It was very well written, enough so that it brought back memories of actual breakups - complete with the gripping feeling in the pit of the stomach! :) Maybe if I had been half as mature as this Buffy is being at age 20, I wouldn't have been the vicitm of said breakups! HA HA!!!

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Twenty seven

Love the song lyric you ended with -- that was great. Glad that everyone's on tthe same page now : )

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 02:41 am Title: Twenty seven

Well that wasn't the horrible blow up - Buffy screw up that I was expecting. Maybe there's hope for here yet....................?

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 01:55 am Title: Twenty seven

I LOVE this story! It's so good, and I'm so happy Buffy finally got her problems out in the open. Also, I'm guessing there won't be much, or any, smut for a while, huh? Not a bad thing, if I want some, I can just read an earlier chapter again! Haha. Well, anyway, keep writing, give your muse some chocolate or something. Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Twenty seven

that was really beautifully writen .... I just love this story!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: Twenty seven

Well, it's looks like our Buffy is growing up and learing a fine lesson in relationships......talk, be honest....it may hurt but the truth can sometimes set you free to stop back and reveal waht you really feel and what you might want.........great chapter

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Twenty seven

That was the best thing that could have happened..I'm glad you had them talking. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve for our favorite couple.

Great job!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:32 pm Title: Twenty seven

Great chapter! I'm glad Buffy went to talk to William. I feel so bad for William.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:00 pm Title: Twenty seven

That was an intense chapter. Whew! It made my stomach all tight when I was reading it. Poor William! My reaction would have been to run away and hide in my room if somebody told me I was too intense. Great Story!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:00 pm Title: Twenty seven

An almost break up... almost. Buffy is hard to get, huh? William still has some work to do to be with her.. or better: Buffy has some work to do to be with William. Because it's her that has the problem.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Twenty seven

im UBER glad they didnt break up. i was almost in tears when she was telling him how confused she was about things i dont know how blubbery id be if they actually broke up!!!!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: Twenty seven

great update

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Twenty seven

oooh lovely chapter!

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:08 pm Title: Twenty seven

In the many ways this could have gone, this was the most tame one. I'm glad your making Buffy mature about this and I'm glad your making William understanding.

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 06:35 pm Title: Twenty seven

You break my heart...

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