Date: 10/22/2006 - 04:31 am Title: Twenty seven
Hmmm not that I don't mind the angst but sometimes I think that given the background of some characters they are acting very strange. With his history with the married woman I find it hard to believe that William would not break up with her even if he loved her just because he's been here before, she doesn't love him and I don't think that he would want to put himself through that again.
Date: 10/11/2006 - 02:34 am Title: Twenty seven
Ooh, I love the way you blended that song into the chapter (excellent song choice, too, I love Alanis!) it worked so well! Thank god they talked about things, and she really doesn't want to leave him. that makes me feel a gazillion times better. plus they won't be dating other people--that's a BIG relief.
Date: 12/20/2005 - 05:42 am Title: Twenty seven
Fantastic chapter... finally some of that unresolved stuff is... resolved. ;D And William is so sweet too... all the love and fear of letting Buffy go.
More more more please!
Date: 12/20/2005 - 04:13 am Title: Twenty seven
Wow - even though that wasn't exactly a break up... I still feel like something has been lost. It was very well written, enough so that it brought back memories of actual breakups - complete with the gripping feeling in the pit of the stomach! :) Maybe if I had been half as mature as this Buffy is being at age 20, I wouldn't have been the vicitm of said breakups! HA HA!!!
Date: 12/20/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Twenty seven
Love the song lyric you ended with -- that was great. Glad that everyone's on tthe same page now : )
Date: 12/20/2005 - 02:41 am Title: Twenty seven
Well that wasn't the horrible blow up - Buffy screw up that I was expecting. Maybe there's hope for here yet....................?
Date: 12/20/2005 - 01:55 am Title: Twenty seven
I LOVE this story! It's so good, and I'm so happy Buffy finally got her problems out in the open. Also, I'm guessing there won't be much, or any, smut for a while, huh? Not a bad thing, if I want some, I can just read an earlier chapter again! Haha. Well, anyway, keep writing, give your muse some chocolate or something. Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Twenty seven
that was really beautifully writen .... I just love this story!
Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: Twenty seven
Well, it's looks like our Buffy is growing up and learing a fine lesson in relationships......talk, be honest....it may hurt but the truth can sometimes set you free to stop back and reveal waht you really feel and what you might want.........great chapter
Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Twenty seven
That was the best thing that could have happened..I'm glad you had them talking. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve for our favorite couple.
Great job!
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:32 pm Title: Twenty seven
Great chapter! I'm glad Buffy went to talk to William. I feel so bad for William.
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:00 pm Title: Twenty seven
That was an intense chapter. Whew! It made my stomach all tight when I was reading it. Poor William! My reaction would have been to run away and hide in my room if somebody told me I was too intense. Great Story!
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:00 pm Title: Twenty seven
An almost break up... almost. Buffy is hard to get, huh? William still has some work to do to be with her.. or better: Buffy has some work to do to be with William. Because it's her that has the problem.
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Twenty seven
im UBER glad they didnt break up. i was almost in tears when she was telling him how confused she was about things i dont know how blubbery id be if they actually broke up!!!!!!
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: Twenty seven
great update
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Twenty seven
oooh lovely chapter!
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:08 pm Title: Twenty seven
In the many ways this could have gone, this was the most tame one. I'm glad your making Buffy mature about this and I'm glad your making William understanding.
Date: 12/19/2005 - 06:35 pm Title: Twenty seven
You break my heart...
Author's Response: In a good way or a bad way?