Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:05 am Title: Twenty - nine
well, that didn't go terribly...i'm still substantially worried for their relationship, and for the fact that Buffy's all "I had fun, maybe I'll do it again!" I understand where she's coming from with the need to act her age and live a little, but then I also understand how William feels. which means, all in all, that you're a really good writer to have me all torn up about this :-)
Date: 12/25/2005 - 10:25 pm Title: Twenty - nine
Great chapter! I love it when they communicate. Looking forward to the next update!
Date: 12/24/2005 - 01:49 pm Title: Twenty - nine
Awe that was cute :) It seems that Buffy is slowly acquiring adulthood. If she don't take too long for it she won't loose William. Because a person can only take a certain amount of burden - if Buffy overdoes it, she'll loose him .. maybe.
Date: 12/24/2005 - 06:10 am Title: Twenty - nine
My heart just about broke for William. He is trying so hard. I can understand where Buffy is coming from, but to be so in love and not know whether she really wants him back is so sad. Maybe he should just break it off. You got me hooked to this story.
Date: 12/24/2005 - 04:53 am Title: Twenty - nine
Awesome chapter! I'm so happy they're not breaking up. :) Can't wait for more.
Date: 12/24/2005 - 03:39 am Title: Twenty - nine
keep up the good work
Date: 12/23/2005 - 10:15 pm Title: Twenty - nine
sweet!
Date: 12/23/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: Twenty - nine
I am just glad that Buffy is starting to see that she might actually love Spike..*though we know she does* lol..
Looking forward to seeing how you choose to work things out between these two!
Date: 12/23/2005 - 06:23 pm Title: Twenty - nine
Excellent communication between them, finally. William has concerns about Buffy's behavior, and Buffy has concerns about his attitude toward her. William is forgetting that Buffy has some growing up to do, some mistakes of her own to make, before she can truly commit to their relationship. He may want to keep her safe, but Buffy has to be ready. This was a well written chapter, the dialogue did a good job clarifying their feelings.
Date: 12/23/2005 - 02:23 pm Title: Twenty - nine
Oh dear... I know how Buffy feels - confused about her feelings, unsure how to define them, just plain DON'T KNOW.
Excellent chapter as always! Cheers!
Date: 12/23/2005 - 02:07 pm Title: Twenty - nine
Aw, nice update.
Date: 12/23/2005 - 01:46 pm Title: Twenty - nine
Poor Spike, love's bitch, LOL......I hope the heartache he is going through will pay off in the end.......WE all need...money to pay for food, gas, rent, etc.......what is it that she needs Spike for is the question they both should be asking.......need him to fall back on when she finds herself in trouble.....or need him like he needs her....the way a loved one needs the others trust, arms, body, heart, and soul to feel loved cherished, a part of something more then just being yourself....but a couple....hmmmmm. What does Buffy need.......can Spike wait that long to find out before he feels used and abused......hmmmmm. Great chapter of taking them closer to some kind of decsion to be made.........