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Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Thirty four

WHAT?!?!?! WHAT????? but that was such a good talk!!! why in HELL does he want them to stay broken up?? he loves her, right? is he just worried he'll keep her from living, or succeeding, or something like that? NOT FAIR!!!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 05:45 am Title: Thirty four

I'm so glad that I found this story here, since Buffy-Spike Central seems defunct. I'm a complete addict to this story! I totally love the dialogue; it's too bad they couldn't have expressed what they were feeling while they were feeling it, but I get that she had to process everything. I have to say that the final line in this chapter had me shaking my head, doing a double-take, and saying, "huh?" I can't wait to see what's next!

Reviewer: thia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 07:11 am Title: Thirty four

Finally William stands up for his own good in this mess.. I'm glad he said that. Really I do. Because after what buffy put him through, he should realize that buffy is not ready for his passion or his love for her. Clearly obvious. So.. she needs space to figure out what she really wants and to get it on her own. In her own pace. And because William loves her so, he;s given that chance to her. I'm happy with how you're going with this. Excellent! Just bloody excellen! :D:D:D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 01:35 am Title: Thirty four

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH HIM???!!!!!! okay, okay...breath..just breath. okay... i'm fine now. great chapter. glad they got all that mess out in the open. loved it. great job. can't wait for you to fix this. post soon....now would be greatly appreciated. lol.

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Thirty four

.......well that was unexpected.... : )

Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 09:35 pm Title: Thirty four

Right decision for William to make. Buffy is too immature and into herself at this stage of her life to love anybody (not saying it's a bad thing - just that's how she is) William would only set himself up for heartache being with her now. She also doesn't seem very trusting of William, even given all of her lip service. I mean trust as in she certainly doesn't trust him with her heart or that he won't try to push her, etc.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Thirty four

i cant believe that he didnt get back together with her....kinda stupid of him

Reviewer: Joy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Thirty four

So glad Wiliam didn't try to get back with Buffy. She obviously doesn't love him, why would he want to be with her when he loves her so much?

Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Thirty four

Very glad with William's decision. Buffy feels numb. Who in the world would want that to be the response of their girlfriend when you tell them you love them? Finally Buffy allows William to make a decision in the relationship. Glad he made the right one.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: Thirty four

I was NOT expecting that! I so thought he would jump back into her arms ... mmmm, nice cliffhanger :)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Thirty four

Smart boy........for why should you continue to give your heart and soul to a woman who still has yet to firgure out whats in hers. Can't wait to see Buffy's reaction to his decision, LOL. But it serves her right in a way to have a decsion that she might have been hoping to go in her favor, not. More please.........and who knows, she might start living and stop feeling numb........

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Thirty four

Wow, William finally gets to make a decision in the relationship. Good for him.

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 05:29 pm Title: Thirty four

stay broken up ?! oh no.

Reviewer: ? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 05:07 pm Title: Thirty four

what? come on, you can't do that. ugh, this is so frustrating. they were finally having a somewhat good conversation and then you had to go and make him say that. please tell me he wasn't serious. i want them together.

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 04:37 pm Title: Thirty four

Cile's not really reviewing now because she might say something mean to you...something she wouldn't really mean at all, but somethign that wouldn't sound nice and would make it sound like she didn't like this chapter as much as she did and didn't thinkt hat it was all completely necessary, which she does. But see, Cile's not too fond of that ending there, so that's why she's not really reviewing....so, yeah, no review from Cile, but Suzee says, good chapter... ;) (I am crazy, I do know that)........but you're doing this story very well...don't go changing stuff (not like you would) and no trying to make stupid people mad, k?

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 04:32 pm Title: Thirty four

Good chapter! But you're killing me here!!!! I never expected him to say that! Please update soon! Very sad Spuffy!!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 04:16 pm Title: Thirty four

WHAT!?!?!?

Reviewer: sonia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:49 pm Title: Thirty four

You're definitely evil ;)
I loved the chapter, but please you have to fix the end, because otherwise it'll be too sad.
Happy new year and good job!!!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: Thirty four

WHAT?!!!! You're evil!!!

*LOL* Please tell me that was some typo! hehehee....

That was great... such a curveball. I was thinking towards the end of the chapter, "Oh good, they're talking... the conversation looks good... then... WHAT?!"

;) More please!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Thirty four

Both are hurt... Oh my: I so hoped it would be better and then this end here! William thinks they need to stay broken up? *deep sigh* Happy New Year... I wonder if Buffy will say anything to change is mind? He seemed to be pretty sure about the break up... it's so very sad at the moment.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:02 pm Title: Thirty four

hello?? i think you added this part by mistake

"He studied her for a long time before speaking. 'Then I think we should stay broken up.'”

come back and fix it please, otherwise you are the meanest meanie in all fanfic land. :p

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:55 pm Title: Thirty four

What a heart stopping last line.

Excellent job with the dialogue and emotional impact of this entire chapter. Buffy's finally opening up about her fears and her fears are valid. Having a talk won't put her mind to rest, so William's right to stay apart so they can get sorted. It's harsh, but necessary..

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:51 pm Title: Thirty four

That sucks.

Good chapter..heart wrentching even..cause you've done a good job with these characters, so I care about them...but I so did not want to see them stay broke up. A part of me wishes something drastic like Buffy being pregnant or something so that Buffy and Will would be forced to get past all this crap and work things out...I know..I know..Not the way to go..but ... oh maaaan. : (
Again..Happy New Years~

Reviewer: Wrestkelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:20 pm Title: Thirty four

I just absolutely love this story! And I look forward to updates everytime there is one. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:01 pm Title: Thirty four

Good for him! He sees that she's not there with him still, and that's an awful way to live in a relationship, with her pretending to be okay when she just wants to be a kid still when it comes to boys.

Meet up after law school and see what's up.

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