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Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Thirty four

i cant believe that he didnt get back together with her....kinda stupid of him

Reviewer: Joy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Thirty four

So glad Wiliam didn't try to get back with Buffy. She obviously doesn't love him, why would he want to be with her when he loves her so much?

Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Thirty four

Very glad with William's decision. Buffy feels numb. Who in the world would want that to be the response of their girlfriend when you tell them you love them? Finally Buffy allows William to make a decision in the relationship. Glad he made the right one.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: Thirty four

I was NOT expecting that! I so thought he would jump back into her arms ... mmmm, nice cliffhanger :)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Thirty four

Smart boy........for why should you continue to give your heart and soul to a woman who still has yet to firgure out whats in hers. Can't wait to see Buffy's reaction to his decision, LOL. But it serves her right in a way to have a decsion that she might have been hoping to go in her favor, not. More please.........and who knows, she might start living and stop feeling numb........

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Thirty four

Wow, William finally gets to make a decision in the relationship. Good for him.

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 05:29 pm Title: Thirty four

stay broken up ?! oh no.

Reviewer: ? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 05:07 pm Title: Thirty four

what? come on, you can't do that. ugh, this is so frustrating. they were finally having a somewhat good conversation and then you had to go and make him say that. please tell me he wasn't serious. i want them together.

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 04:37 pm Title: Thirty four

Cile's not really reviewing now because she might say something mean to you...something she wouldn't really mean at all, but somethign that wouldn't sound nice and would make it sound like she didn't like this chapter as much as she did and didn't thinkt hat it was all completely necessary, which she does. But see, Cile's not too fond of that ending there, so that's why she's not really reviewing....so, yeah, no review from Cile, but Suzee says, good chapter... ;) (I am crazy, I do know that)........but you're doing this story very well...don't go changing stuff (not like you would) and no trying to make stupid people mad, k?

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 04:32 pm Title: Thirty four

Good chapter! But you're killing me here!!!! I never expected him to say that! Please update soon! Very sad Spuffy!!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 04:16 pm Title: Thirty four

WHAT!?!?!?

Reviewer: sonia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:49 pm Title: Thirty four

You're definitely evil ;)
I loved the chapter, but please you have to fix the end, because otherwise it'll be too sad.
Happy new year and good job!!!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: Thirty four

WHAT?!!!! You're evil!!!

*LOL* Please tell me that was some typo! hehehee....

That was great... such a curveball. I was thinking towards the end of the chapter, "Oh good, they're talking... the conversation looks good... then... WHAT?!"

;) More please!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Thirty four

Both are hurt... Oh my: I so hoped it would be better and then this end here! William thinks they need to stay broken up? *deep sigh* Happy New Year... I wonder if Buffy will say anything to change is mind? He seemed to be pretty sure about the break up... it's so very sad at the moment.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 03:02 pm Title: Thirty four

hello?? i think you added this part by mistake

"He studied her for a long time before speaking. 'Then I think we should stay broken up.'”

come back and fix it please, otherwise you are the meanest meanie in all fanfic land. :p

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:55 pm Title: Thirty four

What a heart stopping last line.

Excellent job with the dialogue and emotional impact of this entire chapter. Buffy's finally opening up about her fears and her fears are valid. Having a talk won't put her mind to rest, so William's right to stay apart so they can get sorted. It's harsh, but necessary..

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:51 pm Title: Thirty four

That sucks.

Good chapter..heart wrentching even..cause you've done a good job with these characters, so I care about them...but I so did not want to see them stay broke up. A part of me wishes something drastic like Buffy being pregnant or something so that Buffy and Will would be forced to get past all this crap and work things out...I know..I know..Not the way to go..but ... oh maaaan. : (
Again..Happy New Years~

Reviewer: Wrestkelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:20 pm Title: Thirty four

I just absolutely love this story! And I look forward to updates everytime there is one. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:09 pm Title: One

Breaking up with Buffy was the smartest thing he could have done. Even after their little psuedo-breakup, she is still not with him emotionally...her feelings for him at this point are ones your have for a close friend...not a lover and defintly not a mate.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:01 pm Title: Thirty four

Good for him! He sees that she's not there with him still, and that's an awful way to live in a relationship, with her pretending to be okay when she just wants to be a kid still when it comes to boys.

Meet up after law school and see what's up.

Reviewer: Tracy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 01:55 pm Title: One

Oh thank god he wants them to stay broken up. I love this story, but it's getting really hard to keep reading Spike reacting emotionally and Buffy giving him lectures on life and love. There's such a misbalance between them, and I kind of wish he would just leave her alone for awhile. I think it'd do them both good. I'd like to see him get his head more together so he's not on edge everytime he speaks with her, and so she doesn't keep having to give him reassuring speeches to placate him or talk him down. I think he needs to let her actually start missing him.

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 01:54 pm Title: Thirty four

WHAT! HUH! Oookay, soooooo didn't see that coming. I mean I know he wants her, all of her & he wants her to come to him. BUt him leting her go completely, wasnt expecting THAT.

Can't wait to see how this wors itself out;)

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 01:46 pm Title: Thirty four

Gosh NO!!! It's so sad to see them bor\roken up but also brings out a lot of passion. Please update again soon!

Reviewer: braat44 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 06:47 am Title: Thirty three

Oh! I hope they get back together soon. Can't wait for more. :D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 02:21 am Title: Thirty three

wow. i was so not expecting that. great job. i was actually proud of the little speech faith gave buffy about love and life being hard. great job. can't wait for more. posst soon. i'm dying to find out what's going to happen next. loved it. have a happy new year.

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