Ah, Slayer blood is what did the trick, I see. You had me fooled there for a bit. Poor Buffy, I really feel for her but you did a wonderful job at creating equally sympathy for Spike’s case as well. Way to go Spike for cornering her in the kitchen and, ahem, proving his point she can’t deny she likes him. That was hot when he was begging her to say she still wanted him, I could feel the waves of insecurity rolling off him. Of course all with the grrr, want, take, have Spike carrying her downstairs, oh yeah, it’s getting a bit hot in here. Awwww, Spike/William is trying so hard for Buffy with his present and good on Joyce for helping. A claim? Wow, didn’t see that cumming, er, did I just type that? LOL. This line was awesome: “Lady’s choice,” he purred. “How do you want it an’ where?” NICE!!! The sex and claim was hot but you went and broke MY heart this time, you evil author you. This is truly a wonderful plot and very brilliantly planned out. Remind me to consult you when I go to write my vamp fic, I mean seriously.

*sigh* Spike is back.. but he was able to make an ass of him again, hurting Buffy. Always talking without thinking. *reading on* Oh my.. now he claimed her (promising before he wouldn't leave her an now he is running away. I hope Buffy will catch him.

Author's Response: thank you!

so lovin it and waiting for the next one!!!!

Author's Response: thank you!

ok, so i'm not a big fan of the claim storylines, but i do want to know what's going on with spike. i hope that next chapter appears soon!

Author's Response: i hope so too :P

Yay I get to review this chapter first! Loved it. I think it was great how you got him to progress from William to Spike plus cool claiming session. And I don't think Spike was a jerk for doing that in the end. It makes sense to me. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: but he promised *shakes a finger* lol