Date: 08/02/2006 - 10:20 am Title: I Guess That Works
Hee hee- I love this. Simply adorable. I love this shy William as well- cute as you like!
Date: 01/22/2006 - 07:52 am Title: I Guess That Works
great chapter
Date: 01/22/2006 - 04:19 am Title: I Guess That Works
This sounds like that movie... what's it called? Where the guy is bet that he can't make the nerdy chick Prom Queen? Dammit I can't remember!
Date: 01/22/2006 - 04:13 am Title: I Guess That Works
like it so far!! keep it up, you're doing great!
Date: 01/22/2006 - 04:10 am Title: I Guess That Works
gah! why did you have to stop there!!! pleaseee update soon! cant wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 01/22/2006 - 02:39 am Title: I Guess That Works
OK.Cordelia is a bitch as always.But at this point in time I feel that Buffy is no better than Cordelia.Buffy is treating William in the same way as the Vamps are treating her and her friends ,which IMO makes Buffy as big of a bitch as Cordelia.
I won't pass anymore judgement untill i've read a few more chapters.
Date: 01/22/2006 - 12:21 am Title: I Guess That Works
uh, okay, this doesn't make a whole lot of sense. it's obvious that buffy and her friends aren't all that popular if they keep getting picked on, so why do they treat william like he's nothing? that would make them just as bad. and frankly, they both think way too much. i think this may be the first time that i've actually stopped reading a story after just two chapters, but i'm seriously bored out of my mind and doubt the rest will be any better. the whole bet is stupid and i don't see how that would make much of a difference. sorry, gonna find something to read that's a bit more interesting.
Date: 01/21/2006 - 10:08 pm Title: I Guess That Works
Cute start and it has good flow I hope you add more cause I like your writing style. :D
Date: 01/21/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: I Guess That Works
MORE PLEASE!