Date: 10/10/2012 - 04:52 pm Title: Fancy Free
Just a quick note... read "Innocence Found" just before this one, and though you said there would be no Dawn, you did use "Spike helped with Dawn while Buffy was dead" as a reason to see Spike as not as evil aas previously thought (might have been Giles spouting that reason, can't really remember). When I saw that comment, I thought maybe you were having Dawn exist, just that she wouldn't appear in the story, but in this chapter you have Buffy reminiscing about being an only child. Just need to clean up that little inconsistency!
Date: 07/12/2006 - 07:15 am Title: Fancy Free
i read the story that came before this one. and I think that it's all really good. I would review some more but I'm falling alseep. Update soon!
Author's Response: Hope you've managed to get some sleep, pet. I know what it's like to read until you can't keep your head up any more.
Date: 07/11/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Fancy Free
i like them smaller, there so cute. i really hope they remember all the good that spike has done when there big again. even if they dont i really love this story especially this chapter. i really want to be in an ice cream fight now...but the clean up...i'll just wait for another awesome update can't wait for more
Author's Response: They're all very sweet little kids. Before time and environment teach them to be otherwise. More coming, soon.
Date: 07/11/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: Fancy Free
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/11/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: Fancy Free
These kid Scoobies are cute. It figures Angel liked drawing since we've seen his real talent with it on the shows.
Author's Response: The talent had to come from somewhere. Better that than sucking on necks, eh? **giggles**
Date: 07/11/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Fancy Free
Awe, Angel was drawing before? Seems that living (re-living) the childhood will have some healing powers... I hope. Awe, Spike is Xander's hero :)) I really hope something from the childhood adventure will stay behind :) And the ice cream war was fun *smile*
Author's Response: Ice cream fights are always fun - when you don't have to clean up the mess. *grins*
Date: 07/11/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: Fancy Free
Xander wants to stay with Spike forever.... how sweet...*giggle...giggle..snicker...snicker*
Author's Response: Hey - Xander finally knows a good thing when he sees one. He was a smart little cookie.
Date: 07/11/2006 - 06:19 pm Title: Fancy Free
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!