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Reviewer: Abbie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 - 09:15 pm Title: Epilogue

Well you just ruined the whole story with this chapter. I saw you wrote a sequel that you never finished. So I won't even bother with it. You could have at least went back and wrote a better ending here. Spuffy don't even have to be a couple. It would have been nice to see Spike give her the pendent and maybe show they could be friends at least. I don't think after this story that would be OOC and still an open ending.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2012 - 04:48 am Title: Epilogue

So sweet, but it does need a sequel!

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 01:29 pm Title: Epilogue

The characters were very humorously in character and it was an interesting story until the end. But the ending was really a disappointment and ruined the story. It just seemed lazy. I don't think even a sequel would fix it for me.

Reviewer: mscotstar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2009 - 02:08 am Title: Epilogue

I loved the storyline. Poor Spike though. But I'm glad his going to go back. Thanks for sharing. Another great story from you. Stacey x

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2009 - 12:25 am Title: Epilogue

Spike kicks ass for loving Buffy.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 01:27 pm Title: Epilogue

Oh I loved it, so glad he is going back.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Epilogue

This was a delightful take on the aftermath of "Something Blue." Spike being bullied into going along with Buffy's insane plan was hilarious, especially in light of all her barfing. Their growing attraction happened organically, and the reality of their breakup in light of these emotions was heartfelt and sad.

Thanks for thevery entertaining tale.

Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 07:53 pm Title: Epilogue

I am glad that you ended it with him going back, but it would have been nice to see if anything came of it.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 02:09 am Title: Epilogue

Oh I am so glad he is going back to Buffy, is there a sequeal

Reviewer: Taylor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2007 - 10:32 pm Title: Epilogue

NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO don't end hear that's just wrong:( Loved it!!!!! Sequel please o(*_*)o

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2006 - 05:45 am Title: Epilogue

Great story, is there a followup

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 12:44 pm Title: Epilogue

Despite what a few people have said, I think this is a very fitting ending [or... beginng? Tee hee]

I like the way it promises more, but doesn't break either Spike or Buffy's characters. They're both stubborn as you like, and I can completely understand Spike leaving in the harrump that he did =]

I sure hope there will be more of this, I know that Buffy'll just love her gift.


Do I hear *real* wedding bells?? xx Excellent story xx

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 11:30 pm Title: Epilogue

Oh very nice. I love how the repulsive practice kissing managed to become 3 hours of hot sex LOL I'll be looking forward to teh sequel and the result of Buffy having the anti magic amulet... could be a problem in 'primeval' though...

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 11:56 am Title: Epilogue

Loved it, thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:38 am Title: Epilogue

Great story! Sequel please? (^_^)

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 12:54 pm Title: Epilogue

Ok-that just screams SEQUEL!!!!!!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Epilogue

The idea that Spike would send months searching for something to protect Buffy is charming, and I like that you left her reaction to the imagination. I was a bit worried by the melancholy tone in the beginning of the chapter, but you ended it on a hopeful note.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 05:01 am Title: Epilogue

Very nice note of hopefullness at the end-- I'm glad you didn't end it on the glowery note of Spike's own personal brood-a-thon. A very sweet, wonderful gift to give the Slayer. I hope you consider writing a sequel to this that picks up when she lays eyes on him again-- that could be smokin' hot!

Reviewer: Cece Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 02:23 am Title: Epilogue

I hope this is seen as constructive criticism:

I don't know, even with the positive spin that my mind could come up with, it seemed a little rushed to me.

I know people have said sequel, but really it could be continued without a sequel. It just feels like there was so much more that could have happened, and things could have felt more complete.

Even with a "sequel" it would feel more like making another posting with the rest of the chapters.

I like the story, the end just didn't do it for me.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Epilogue

i smell a sequel :D

Reviewer: zoegrace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Epilogue

very nice story, but i really would have liked for there to be some closure between these two. This story doesn't feel finished.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 08:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Spike has gone for four month now ... and got Buffy a pendant that will protect her against magic. Nice gift.
But that is it, the end?
*sigh* It is too open for me to like it much. Like what about Buffy: Even if she dated an endless line of wankers, he found it unbearable to be apart from her Whom is Buffy dating if she is? What thinks Buffy of Spike leaving, what did she do in these month, does she miss him?

Even if the end is slightly hopeful regarding the Spuffy, it's is more open than I like it. I need my happy end you know? I've read in the comments that you will maybe write a sequel. When you do I reread this one again. Maybe I'll like the end better when you finished the sequel. That depends on how the sequel is ending. ;-)

Reviewer: Hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 03:34 pm Title: Epilogue

Nice story! I liked it a lot :)

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 01:12 pm Title: Epilogue

a wonderful story.... PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE do a sequel..... please..... hope to see the sequel soon.... love the story totally!!!

Reviewer: marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 12:52 pm Title: Epilogue

loved the story thanks for sharing :)

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