Date: 01/17/2013 - 08:14 am Title: Epilogue
A good little story. I think it moved a bit too fast in the beginning, I would have found it a bit more believable if they'd courted a bit longer before William decided he was in love with her, but overall it was a sweet Christmas fantasy, and I enjoyed it quite a lot.
Author's Response: Yeah, definitely not my most realistic portrayal. At the time, I really wanted something fluffy to keep my mind of the angst-ridden fics that were getting increasingly more difficult to write. I also wanted to keep it short, which is why things moved SO quickly. But I'm glad you did enjoy it and glad you shared your thoughts. Thank you.
Date: 01/15/2013 - 05:52 am Title: Epilogue
Lovely, Thanks for finishing this.
Author's Response: No, thank you for reading and reviewing. :-)
Date: 08/01/2012 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 6
Hope you write the Epilogue soon!!! I love it!! Can't wait!!! (:
Date: 03/25/2008 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 6
this was lovely and cute and definitely grin inducing! thanks!
Date: 03/18/2008 - 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay :) Good to see an update :))
Enjoyed the hotness :)
Even the angst too. Loved the reaction of the children. And I really hope Angel gets in trouble / loose the rights to visit his children because that would be better for his children anyway.
Date: 03/17/2008 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow Jae, of your 3 wips and your 3 Williams i think i'm adorin' this one the most. He is too precious for words. I just know that as time goes on there is a tiger waiting to emerge. They complete each other and you do such a great job of showing that.
Thanks for such a great, awesome, wonderful story. I'm hoping that the Epilogue isn't a year or so off, but if that is the case then i know it will rock!
Love ya, love your stories.
Date: 03/16/2008 - 07:13 am Title: Chapter 6
SOOOOOOOOOOO excited to see an update on this story! Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the epilogue!
Date: 03/16/2008 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter 6
This chapter had so many interesting scenes in it, and they were all very entertaining. The interaction between William and Buffy and the kids was wonderful. Good update!
Date: 03/16/2008 - 05:35 am Title: Chapter 6
And OMG, Angel and that bitch!!! Buffy should take a picture of Dawn's face, as there's no way in hell Angel's keeping his visitation rights....
So cool that the kids like William right away.
Date: 03/16/2008 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter 6
I still love Connor's reaction!
Date: 03/16/2008 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 6
LOL THEY ARE SOOO CUTE!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that bitch hit dawn and i hope that angel doesnt get to see them again until he can actually take care of them. im so happy that theyre all happy and that they can finally be a family. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to see how it ends. THANX
Date: 03/16/2008 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter 6
Okay, first of all, Buffy had me cheering very loudly when she ripped into that skank, bitch had it coming for daring to touch her child. And then William got more cheers when he socked Angel, that was just excellent. Bastard doesn't know anything about being a father, but I have a feeling William would make a great one. I was glad to see an update, can't wait for the epilogue=)
Date: 01/15/2008 - 09:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter :)
Date: 01/15/2008 - 08:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Date: 01/15/2008 - 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 12/26/2007 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter 5
I started reading this one last year. So happy to see an update & to read that it's going to be finished soon. Great little story! I like it a lot!
Date: 12/25/2007 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh update! Just in time for Christmas :)
*rereads last chapter*
Ah now I know what's the what about the question. No wonder things got so wrong first. I'm glad that they solved the misunderstanding.
Otherwise? Very hot :)
Date: 12/25/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
THAT was worth the wait!! Merry HoHoHos!!!