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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2013 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 33

Despite quite a number of grammar/spelling errors and typos, this is a well-written story. Though I have to say Spike turned his hatred of Buffy into love so quickly it was a bit unbelievable. I think Buffy would have had to do quite few more selfless things for Spike to trust her enough to fall in love with him. And while I get the appeal of Spike-Slayer and Buffy-Vampire, in this case, when vamp falls for Slayer, it's the stereotypical mooning girl, pining for the hot, desirable guy, instead of how it was on the show, with charming role reversal of the badass hot guy totally gone over the sweet, strong heroine. Like the dialogue; each character sounded like him/herself.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 33

Hey this was brilliant! I loved this story. Slayer Spike and Vamp Buffy are one of my favorite type of stories. I am on to read the sequel now, but I thought the last part was just perfect ending, no more needed...At least for this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Brett! I'm happy you enjoyed it! I originally hadn't planned on doing a sequel, but the lovely Sotia convinced me otherwise. LOL Apparently I make her sad alot with my stories. Thanks for the review, hun, hope you like the sequel, too!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 33

Well Sotia and Cordykitten are very wise, as this story just beggs for a sequel. Yes, I know you're altready writing it, just wanted to stress that point.

It's a great fic, with an interesting take on things and I've always loved Spike as the Slayer... and Vamp Buffy (except for a couple of fics that shall not be mentioned).

Loved it (well... the angst not that much, but hey... maybe just maybe the sequel will be lighter?)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Andrei! I'm uber-excited that you made good on your promise to read! :) The idea of the story actually came from a very intriguing dream I had and after a long chat with a good friend from the Realm, I was convinced to write and post it. I was shocked, to say the least, that it received such high marks!
I am hard at work on the sequel, just so you know. While I have promised the requested "happy ending" for our lovely blonde couple, I will tell you like I told Sotia.....I never promised to make the road wouldn't be filled with potholes and speedbumps up to the fairytale ending. LOL Thank you so much for the wonderful review and I hope you stick around for the completion of the sequel.

Reviewer: Kelli Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 33

So...when is the sequel going to be up? hehe!! Excellent writing! Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Hey Kelli! Thanks for the review, I am already working on the sequel and hope to have the first chapter up soon. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter 33

oooooh you evil bint! i was crying right along with Fred and Spike (love their moments!) and then u bring in Halfrek!!! sooo write a sequel! i'm taking up the petition too!!!! WRITE! A! SEQUEL!!

loved this story! lol so glad i finally got to sit down and read it!

Author's Response: Hmmm...to give you a clue about the vengeance demon or not? Tricky. Let's just say that Halfrek doesn't make an appearance in my story and leave it at that! Oh and don't worry, I will write a sequel. Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad that you liked it so much. I knew you would, but someone kept distracting you, right? ")

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 33

Oh please please bring Buffy back.

Author's Response: I will....otherwise several of you might hunt me down and do harm! LoL! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter 33

Love that even more. Gotta give them some kind of second chance. And Fred and Giles coming round to seeing that Buffy had some good in her. Liked that too. It was a fun story and I reallly did enjoy Spike as a Slayer for a change. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks, BuffyRat! I am so glad to have picked up a new reader who not only loved my story, but was very generous with the reviews! I loved reading each and every one and I hope that you stick around for the sequel which will start being posted within the next 2 weeks!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 33

ooooo i liked the ending to that:) i hope you update again soon

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 33

*nods* I'm one of them, I need the 'Happy End' for 'my' stories. Looking forward to the sequel!
It's sad to think that Buffy will be tortured now for eternity *sigh* She doesn't deserve this.
*phew* Reading this end here I'm glad you'll write a sequel. Sad to think it would have ended with Buffy in hell and Spike a bitter alcoholic.
So thanks for doing this sequel!

Author's Response: I know, dear, I am well aware of your need for a happy ending. I promise a nice, pleasing and happy ending for you soon! Thank you so much for all of the wonderful reviews you have left during the course of this story. Each and every one meant the world to me and brightened my day!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 33

Loved it so much! :) The scene with Fred and Spike was so sweet. And that end was just wonderful or will be even more wonderful ;) Looking forward to the second part, honey! / Ariadne

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Ariadne! I'm pleased as punch that you enjoyed my story!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 33

What a great way to close out this installment of series, I'll definitely keep a look out for the next part. :D Loved the story!

Author's Response: Oh, yay! Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story, plus stick with me through my creative dry spell! It means the world to me that you liked it and will be waiting for the sequel! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 33

Aw, Fred is great.

Author's Response: I had to redeem her after the tantrum about finding out about Buffy, couldn't let Fred be mean. I loved her character too much to do that! Thanks so much for the reviews!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 33

I knew it was a vengeance demon. But now I wanna know what happens for the reunion. Pwetty pwease!!!

Author's Response: For a while I didn't know how I was going to end the story and then POW it just came to me to add a vengeance demon. Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the review! I will be posting the sequel soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 33

Alive alive or undead alive? Loved this and cannot wait to love the next one.

Author's Response: All questions will be answered soon, I promise! Thank you so much for sticking with me on this story and always taking the time to leave a comment. I truly appreciate it! I have already started working on the sequel and plan to start posting after I return from my vacation in two weeks. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter 33

I'm gonna find you woman!!!! LOL!

OK, by asking for her to be alive your evilness can torment me in sooooo many more ways!

She can come back to life and be at the other end of the world (as a human, not vampire) and/or not even know him... she can be un-dead again (naaah) or she can be a 100 yr old lady withering away...

I need more pronto, and since you will have your laptop with you on vacation I can send you pleading/threatening e-mails all the time, so YAYYYYYYY!!!!

Well, I trust you, you left us with some hope and I know there's a sequel, so all in all GREAT STORY (and chocolate covered Spikes for ya!)

*hugs*

Author's Response: Ah, yes...many of ways for me to torture you in the sequel. But, I wouldn't do that...or would I? It's not like I'm evil or anything. LoL! Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews, and constant pestering (er, encouragement) that you sent my way. I graciously accept all chocolate covered Spikes! Thanks, babe!

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