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Date: 07/22/2015 - 05:33 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

God, I love this fic more every time I read it.



Author's Response: :) Hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: AgentKalGibbs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2015 - 06:44 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

God, I love this story, it's going in my 'all time faves' folder! Also quite happy Xander was dusted, I really don't like him.



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: nmcil Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2012 - 08:04 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

I'm sorry that Xander had to be killed off at the end - but it fits as a proper ending to his part of the story.

Great reading this one again. I am enjoying a slaymesoftly reading session that started out with Christmas stories.

Author's Response: I didn't really want to kill off Xander - but he was being a major butthead in this fic. Glay you enjoyed the reread. :)

Reviewer: Arina Summer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2012 - 06:44 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

I must admit that I've been reading much longer than I've been writing yet never much reviewed. That said, I must say that this has always been one of my absolute favorite fics. I've always favored early season spuffy and this reminds me almost of one of those "what if Buffy went back and fixed things" stories if only in reverse. I truly cannot praise it enough. 

AS

Author's Response: Thank you very much. How nice of you to say so. (It's one of my favorites too) :)

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2012 - 02:30 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Sander was really sad ( in all respects ), but other than that, this story was really lovely. Especially loved the letter from William to Buffy. So sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2010 - 11:39 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Wow! What a story, I loved reading it to the point of not wanting to stop. Thanks so much for the wonderful entertainment.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for telling me so.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2009 - 02:12 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

A very good story I like how the relationship evolved.

Author's Response: Thank you. I"m glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: yubi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 08:00 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

luved this story! including the whole xander thing. its so sweet that spike could remember her even after all those years.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's one of my favorites and was great fun to write. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 09:05 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Nice twist how you ended it, Buffy dusting Xander only because he threatened Spike.
The story was longer than I expected, 24 chapters instead of 10. *gg* Enjoyed the read.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2007 - 06:24 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

I loved this! I've never seen a fic where she goes back in time and meets *young* William.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. It was great fun to write.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 01:31 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

This story was really cute! I read it earlier in the week but just wanted to become the sort of reader who leaves a review so I thought I would stop back. I am going to read more of your great fanfics because your stories flow nicely.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you came back. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of them.

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2007 - 01:37 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

This is completely my new favorite story on here!! I am although really sad about the end here. Even thou Xander wasn't exactly my fav on the show, I felt really bad about him at the end here. I thought it was kinda hott that he was a vamp but she had to stake him. *tear* Still, I absolutly loved this story. : )

Author's Response: Hee. Thank you. I'm so glad you like it. Sorry for killing off Xander, but he was being an ass...

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 12:45 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Great story, the Xander vampire factor was very interesting

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Kristy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 03:52 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

The story was great. High on the naughtiness with just the right amount of angst. I also loved that it took place during the earlier seasons, there is far to few stories out there that focus on Season's 1 and 2.
And best of all, you made it believable, it fit well within the timeline and flowed so smoothly, you can almost believe this is how the show really went. (Don't I wish?)
I will admit the ending was a little choppy. It felt more like something that should have taken place in the middle of a story, if that makes any sense. It just leaves me expecting another chapter in a way.
But other then that it was great, i always love your stories, and I hope to see more Season 1 or 2 stories. *hint hint*

Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughtful review. I guess I'll have to take another look at that ending - although, I will warn you, most of my stories end as soon as I get Spike and Buffy safely together in a permanent way. I'm not sure why you feel staking Xander should have happened earlier - she really needed him to give her a good reason before she could do it. Perhaps I rushed through the time that Spike was away too quickly and did too much telling of what went on in his absence rather than showing it? Anyway, thanks for the comments and for reading.

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 - 06:15 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

That was beyond outstanding. I LOVED this story. The relationship between Buffy and young William was touching and brilliantly written and laid such a strong foundation for this story. Your descriptions of their reunion and relationship were moving and inspiring. I thought the ending was fitting and powerful. One thing to note is that the scenes where Spike attacked the school took place on 'Parent-Teacher night', not 'Back to school night.' Other than that - perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. And, you are the first one to call the incorrect name to my attention - thank you so much! I guess I was channeling what we call those evenings in my school system. lol I will fix it immediately! *hugs*

Reviewer: ZLB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 - 04:26 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Bloody Brilliant and then some! I loved it begining to end! I look forward to reading your other works!
~Jo

Author's Response: thank you. I hope you enjoy them, too.:)

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Simply beautiful! Little William and the relation he established with Buffy was wonderful to read and I really really loved how you managed to include so much canon stuff into the story. Oh... thanks for staking Xander at the end, that was just so satisfying to read. ; ) Thanks again for this incredible story!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

I realy like it its goood and what about an epilog? have you thought about it? not that it needs one. I'm just curious

Author's Response: LOL You're the second person to comment on the ending, so I guess I'll be taking a second look at it to see if I need to add something. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Jenx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Hey! Glad I'm able to read another of your fic :) Lovely story, got me hooked and stuck to my car for the whole day. Just a frank opinion tho, hope u don't count that as flaming, but the ending was a little weak.

I'm no good writer myself, but I think it simply didn't hit that 'poeticness' you aimed for.

Nonetheless, wonderful fic. Thank you for sharing!

Jen

Author's Response: No problem, hon. I would never consider a well-thought out comment or any other form of concrit to be a flame. I appreciate your opinion and will take another look at the ending. You may be quite right. The ending of a lot of my fics don't make me really happy; I don't recall right off the top of my head if this was one of them or not. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 - 02:56 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

What a great story, I just read thru the whole thing. I loved how they met, it was so sweet, and such a start of what would become a true love relationship. I thought that even in all those years, not only did he remember, but retained the "William" in him, and that Buffy brought it back. It was sad that she had to dust Xander, but it was necessary, her mate was threatened and quite frankly he deserved it.
Also it would a perfect setting for a sequel, (hint, hint) their life, their relationship with Joyce and Giles, and the the claim completed. anyway great story and thanks so much

Author's Response: LOL - no sequel planned ATM, but thanks for the lovely comments. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 07:45 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Really, really enjoyed reading that. Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Fabulous story. Thanks for sharing. Would love to read more if you ever decide on a sequel. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Author's Response: Thank you - I hope you enjoy the rest of them as well.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 03:33 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

I loved this story - you wrote the end but the story still shows unfinished - ? I hope you write more and continue the story of our heros.........Thanks for all the hard work and writing such a great story

Author's Response: I just forgot. It shows as finished now. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 12:58 am Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

Oh I love the story thank you for finishing it.

Author's Response: thanks for reading!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:51 pm Title: Twenty-three and Twenty-four

lovely ending. thankyou for a brilliant story

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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