Date: 01/18/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: part 27
OH MY GOD, I absolutley love this story, iv'e like read aleast ten times and i still can't seem to get enough of it. update a your lesuire, but please know that i look forward to more of your story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01/16/2005 - 10:43 am Title: part 27
Very very very good! i read this is one go and barely found any mistakes, and i love the storyline, and melanie sounds so cute and i love spike so much in this story!! how do you do it? Seriously....how do you do it? i loved it when Spike went into the school and when he brought all the pool toys for Melanie, and when him and Buffy read all the fanfictions...it's the little things like that that make it so good. please keep going coz you're a really good writer! i love how you portray buffy and spike in this. Angel is such an asshole! can't wait for spike to beat him up! poor melanie...my heart broke when they got home and she was there with that byatch!! HATE angel, love spike and buffy and melanie and the story's so good! wow this is the longest review I have ever written....VERY GOOD!!! i give this story a ten all the way...i read this for lyk 2 hours and didn't get bored...that shows what a good writer you are! if you ever got a bad reveiw, well, they don't know anything, lol!! KEEP GOING PLZ...i like this one!!! :):):)
Date: 01/12/2005 - 04:00 am Title: part 27
please please please update soon. i love this story so much. I hope Angel stays out of thier lives...i hate him. Spike is so sweet and Melanie is so cute! i am completely in love with this story and need more...soon.
Date: 12/21/2004 - 09:41 pm Title: part 27
A great homeage to the lost art of dry humping... ah, to be sixteen again... Please update again soon! I love your stories.
Date: 12/17/2004 - 02:23 am Title: part 27
Great story so far. I'v been enjoying keeping up with it. Thanks a lot for writing.
Date: 12/12/2004 - 10:52 pm Title: part 27
oh i am so glad that you had buffy chew out angel :) please hurry and update again soon, i could care less about spelling errors just as long as you update.
Date: 12/12/2004 - 09:07 pm Title: part 27
This just made my day so much better. The cute-ness of Melanie mixed with the smut at the end, it can't get any better than this. Keep up the excellent work and update soon!
Date: 12/12/2004 - 08:10 pm Title: part 27
Loved the update! I never went to Disneyland, but it sounds very lovely, especially with children. :) I love this story very much! Blue eyed devil too *smile*
Date: 12/12/2004 - 01:50 pm Title: part 27
oh my! That was hotter than most of the sex scnese I've read and they didn't even take off any clothes! Love it.
Date: 12/12/2004 - 02:46 am Title: part 27
I know I've said this before. I may have even said it to you before, I but I really think that that "almost" sex is even better than actual sex. Anyway, hope Santa brings you a new computer for Christmas. Take care.
Date: 12/12/2004 - 01:54 am Title: part 27
absolutely loved it so much
Date: 12/11/2004 - 11:54 pm Title: part 27
I can relate with the computer crashing. I hope you get it fixed soon because I absolutely love this story! This was such a sweet chapter (and I love angst, so for me to not only keep reading, but to have this be one of my favorites I hope you take it as a compliment). Good luck with your computer and I will be on the edge of my seat waiting for updates :-)
Date: 12/11/2004 - 11:46 pm Title: part 27
GREAT CHAPTER! PLEASE DON'T KEEP US WAITING LONG FOR THEN NEXT UPDATE.
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