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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2007 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Hmmm... very intriguing, I like this new mysterious twist. Great chapter!

Author's Response: thank you.~Noel

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2007 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

ooo very interesting:) i love it hehe....cant wait for you to update again soon

Author's Response: I will hopefully by wed. Im trying. :-) ~noel

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Wow! This story has taken quite an interesting turn. I like it.

Author's Response: thank you. :-) I am deathly afraid people arent going to like where Im taking it so thank you thank you thank you for the support.~noel

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Elizabeth is behaving weird. Instead of being Elizabeth Abigail Clarice Farnley she's telling Elizabeth Rayne? Sounds as if she was possessed. And after dropping that bomb fainting? So no normal behavior.
Mmmh her grandma had such an 'episode' too? I wonder if that's connected....

Author's Response: on the right track more will be revieled in the next chapter.~noel

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Alright not what I was expecting but ,I'm going to stick with you and see where she's going with this. I was hoping for lot's of groveling on his part because i'm still mad over the dress incident., but I guess theres a method to your madness. Update soon , or i'll whinge and whine some more , take care babes.

Author's Response: haha I wanted the groveling too but than a thought came to me........... when would a piarate captain ever grovel? He's going to do alot of not so nice things to her but I promise Ill try to make it all right in the end. ~Noel

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Mmmm. Please update and I loved it.

Author's Response: will soon. maybe by wed.....hopefully.~Noel

Reviewer: LuvsBitch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Oooh! Great chapter, I am once again on the edge of my seat :)

Keep up your excellent work! x

Charliex

Author's Response: I love twists ant tuns there my favorite~Noel

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Strange twist... chanelling greatgrandma?

And retired teacher here...Homecoming .. ah the rites of youth !!

Enjoying.

Author's Response: thank you for understanding and you are not supoesed to guess my now ovbious plot! lol thanks for reading~Noel

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

Noel it's Monday where's my update? Cooomme on Noel, (Whiny voice here) Update . Please, (now crying like a baby) Uppppdate.

Author's Response: I know I am so so so sorry I feel aweful I have really fallen behind! But a new update for Seasons is coming up next its almost finished. ~noel

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2007 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

I love this story! I thought I already reviewed last chapter, but it I missed out and I'm sorry! I just love the characterization and the developing relationship between both Giles and Buffy as well as Buffy and Spike. Can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: aw thanks! that brightens my day ;-) I think my favorite part of writing are the characters because people period are just so darn intriguing. Noel Darling

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2007 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

The Buffy/Giles interaction was fun, it's great to see their friendship growing. :D
I also really enjoyed reading Giles' thoughts throughout the chapter, and I loved the bit about Giles not caring what Spike thinks about taking Buffy outdoors... only Giles could get away with a move like that.
The Buffy/William scene was very intriguing, I can't wait to see where things go from here. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: I am getting mixed reviews, here and elsewhere, about the Buffy/William scene and I keep trying tp stress 'dont worry about it' because I have something a little differnt planned, you'll see! ~Noel D

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2007 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

Thanks babes, Who could say no to him??? What a beautiful chapter. No wonder you named it that. Nice piece of background on Giles and Joyce. Glad Buffy's wormed herself into the older man's heart. Can't wait to see what William does next? The ball's in his court! *hugs*

Author's Response: aw thanks hun! Im working on the next chapter all ready, this chapter was a little but of a cliff hanger. ~Noel Darling

Reviewer: kassie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

hate to b a pain but e moment totali broke with the typo....kheheh...i looooooove ur flow! its amazing...fast n slow n all gd as n when it should be...more more more pretty pls :D

Author's Response: awww thanks and Im fixing the typo I didnt proof read as I should have before I posted. Im killing myself for it and it will never happen again lol ~noel d

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

so after acting like a jerk over the Ho's dress he avoids her for 2 weeks? So where's the grovelling I was expecting ? Where's the denial of crumbs? and what was that reaction she had when she saw him , I think reading that journal's affecting her mind . She should be angry at him and showing him what for for being a jerk. I love this fic and need more soon.

Author's Response: lol be prepared for something you never expected to happen. shes acting crazy for a reason. ~Noel D

Reviewer: PJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

noy sure if Ive reviewed before but if not I should have. I love this story and cant wait to see where its going.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

PS. You've spelt William's name incorrectly on title chapter and the end of the chapter. Small thing but noticable.

Author's Response: woops! ahaha thanks for letting me know. i didnt proof read (as I should have) before I posted it. I was in a hurry lol I had school to teach today. blah Thanks luff the updates will keep comin! ~noel d

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

So Giles saw Spike growing up, is his stepfather. Then his wrath won't be too much when he notices that Giles let Buffy take a stroll on the ship :) Jenny is still alive then, just back home, not on the ship with them.
Looking forward to more. PS: Is there a reason that Buffy called Spike Willaim? (Like the chapter title.) She sound as if she never really saw him or remembers something.

Author's Response: She didnt know his name before for one but...there is a twist and that is all I'll say. ~Noel D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 9: His Name is William

Bold girl... would be wrong to make him look bad in front of the me...

Enjoying.

Author's Response: I wish I could go straight into the spuffyness but you know our buffy, she runs hot then cold. `Noel d

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 8: Red Dress

His wife? No wonder he was so upset. I love the way William sees her, when he's not been pissed at her, that is. They both have a lot of "demons" to deal with, don't they. This is really coming along. thanks for the update.

Author's Response: aw thanks! Yes they both have alot to suss out. The darkness that they both seem to hide things away in is never ending so it seems. Im pulling out all the stops. ~noel d

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Poor kid, living that kind of hell. Her hero is here after all. great chapter, really enjoying this, thanks.

Author's Response: Abuse is a hard subject to write about but i feel like its going to add so much depth and insight to her and her character~Noel D

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

Hi Noel, The thing that through me about him being a vamp, was when Giles asked him if he was amongest the living and he said "No, once your dead you never go back. Besides living isn't all it's cracked up to be." That's when I thought he IS a vamp. Back on track now, sorry about that. On to enjoy the rest of your story.

Author's Response: lol its okay dont even worry about that. I can see where the confusion took place. I was trying to be funny. haha ~Noel D

Reviewer: nicky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter 8: Red Dress

Really enjoying this story, update again soon.

Author's Response: will do thank you so much!~noel

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 8: Red Dress

When I read that Buffy found the dusty dress in the chest I thought there was a reason that it was there, hidden and that Spike wouldn't like it if it was taken. Sadly I'm right. Spike overreacted even if he had a reason (he thinks).

Author's Response: Spike isnt methodical, thats for sure. He doesnt sit there and think about what he's going to say, and if he does it usually flys out the window anyway. He runs purely on instint and emotion. Buffy however is the oppiste. She over thinks, she over analyzes and in the end niether one of them can be happy alone because they need the other to balance each other out. The dress (sigh) although it wasnt that big of a deal can you imagine what a shock it would be to walk into a room and there standing in the middle of it is a person you hardly know wearing your exs cloths....I think I can see who he would overreact. heck I might too, not saying its right though. Okay as always thank you for your thoughts, luv! ~Noel

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 8: Red Dress

Another fab chapter. Poor Buffy having to bear the brunt of William's anger when I think he is actually angry at himself that someone is beginning to take the place of his wife. This must really be a hard thing for anyone who has lost a partner to come to terms with - moving on. Love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you understand what Im trying to do here Im glad that my point is coming across. This isnt just about him acting like a jerk its about these feelings, that he's never had for anyone before, that are starting to take over his very being. Hey! I like that. Maybe I'll put it in my story lol. Oh we still have such a long way to go I cant wait till i can reveal all and have a sit down with yall and chat! lol ~Noel

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 8: Red Dress

Poor Buffy, she just can´t get a moment of peace, can she. What an asshole, how was she supposed to know what the dress meant to him. Seems he´s just another male in her life who treats her like shit and can´t be trusted.
Can´t wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Hey dont beat up on spike to much I know he's being a jerk right now but still! He's our most beloved character ever even when he is an asshole. Yup is def. time that Buffy starts stepping it up! Cant wait till the next chapter! ~noel

Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter 8: Red Dress

Just caught up with last two chapters. Both their back stories are really intriguing. I can't wait to find out the answer to why that man want's Buffy dead? Now that William has reneged on the deal will he send someone else to try and kill her? Then, there's William himself who seems to be living under the delusion that Drusilla was paragan of virtue! It's obvious from Giles that she was not. Looking forward to your next chapter already!

Author's Response: Oh poor drusilla shes just never good! I cant wait till this stories finished! Until I can reveal all to you guys but I guess the journeys the best part. Thanks for embarking with me! lol ;-) ~noel

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