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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh, you big tease, ending the epilogue before the big finish! Oh well, I loved this story. An excellent job balancing the tension, angst, sappy stuff and smut.

Could use a good editing; plenty of grammar errors, typos, etc. (Example, at the top of this chapter, I'm pretty sure Buffy's wearing Spike's button-up shirt, not shorts, with her purple boy shorts!).

Author's Response: HA! I just did a read through and fixed some issues that were previously unnoticed. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2008 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 22

*applause*

Author's Response: Aw, thank you, Em! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Adrianna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 22

That was a great story. Would be awesome to see what happens after the proposal if you are up for a sequal!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Adrianna! I'm pleased as punch that you enjoyed the story, it's been done for a while and it's very exciting to get a review now! Sadly, I have too many other story ideas so I don't think I will ever consider doing a sequel, but you never know. Thanks again and I do hope that you check out some of my other stories, you might find something else you like.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter 22

::drops popcorn and runs out the door for a ciggy:: THAT WAS SOO AWESOME!!!! i was kind of "ummmm" in the middle of the story but THANK GOD it ended the way it did. and you never brought Willow back. that kind of bummed me. and i kind of did wonder what happened with Riley. but just this as an ending chapter was so great and heartfelt! i loved that you ended it with her dancing and getting caught. LMAO GREAT JOB SERENITY!!! A+!

::runs back out before brother catches ciggy smell::

Author's Response: Glad you approve! After finishing the story, I realized I had forgotten about Willow and Riley; however, I was really really really ready to mark this as complete. Since you read it all at once, you didn't have to suffer from the long bouts of nothingness and dealing with my lack of muse. It just needed to be done with. Thanks again for all the wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2008 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 22



Author's Response: Ok?

Reviewer: flyingnicole Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2008 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 22

this is my first time reading this fic and I absolutely loved it
are you going to do a sequel with the engagement??

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Glad to have drawn you in at the last minute! :) No, I do not intend on adding an engagement sequel, but you never know what the muse might decide on down the road. Thanks again!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2008 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter 22

nawww sweet ending....i loved it:)

Author's Response: Thanks ever so much! :)

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2008 - 08:13 am Title: Chapter 22

Sweetie, when I saw that you had completed your story, I felt a little bit sad, but you did an excellent job, as always! :) I liked the ending! First I thought they were going to their own wedding, but the fact that he is going to propose to her on the beach after the rehearsal, made up for that :) Thanks for writing!
/ Ariadne

Author's Response: I was a little sad that this one ended, too. I really enjoyed not only writing, but hearing the response from my readers. It was awesome! But, alas...it had to end sometime. Not to worry though, there will be much more in the future. Thanks!

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2008 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter 22

Absolutely beautiful story. Couldn't put it down (figuratively speaking of course). I wish you many more tales as wonderful as this one.

Author's Response: Hey thanks! Glad you liked it so much! I do intend on writting many more stories, so I hope to see you around. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 22

Perfect ending to a wonderful story. Absolutely loved it!

Author's Response: Awww....thank you so much! I am so happy that you guys loved this as much as you did. I honestly didn't expect this to get this much attention! Thanks again!

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent story.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved writing it and am sad to see it go!

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 22

Awww that was so sweet! Great ending to an awesome story, that i'm a little sad to see go, but you did an amazing job! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: I really did sap it up in the final chapter, huh? Just couldn't help myself, but those two had such a bumpy road I would have been a huge BITCA (!) not to make their ending fluffy. Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 22

Beautiful ending to a truly amazing story. I loved it from the beginning to the end. Well done! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pet. I never imagined that this little fic would get so much attention and am amazed by all the wonderful feedback I have received. Hearing from you guys makes all the stress from writers block worth it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lilladybug Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 22

Awww!!! :') I'm so sad it's over but it was awesome!!

Author's Response: I'm a bit sad myself, but it had to end sometime. Plus, there are many other story ideas just dying to get a chance. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 22

AWWW THAT WAS THE BEST ENDING EVER!!! IT WAS SOOO INCREDIBLY SWEET, I LOVED IT!!! i LOVED reading this story sooo much and am so glad that i began reading it in the first place. this chapter was absolutely incredible, i dont think i better ending could have been written. youre an amazing writer and i really enjoyed reading this story. im sad to see it come to an end, but loved how it all played out. THANK U soo much for writing this fic and i CANT wait to read more of your work.

Author's Response: WOW! You always leave the most enthusiastic reviews, always make me smile! Thank you so much for sticking around to the end and I am so happy to hear that you really enjoyed the ending!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh I love it.

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 22

Just lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks, Sam!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 22

Yay, Yay . Yay , Wonderful ending to a great story , loved it , loved it, loved it. Thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: Well, Jo, you are more than welcome. I truly enjoyed writting this story and will miss these characters. Hope to hear more from you in the future, I have many more tales weaving in my brain!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 22

Love the ending... thank you..





Author's Response: Loved your reviews...thank you! LOL!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter 22

Oooooh! Great ending to a great story! Thank you for sharing, I loved every chapter!!!

XXX

Author's Response: Thanks! I was a bit nervous about the ending since it took me so long to write it. Worried that muse had lost her edge, but judging from the response she did a good job. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Minna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter 22

Come on!! Now you got to keep writing on an other story so that we'll/I'll find out what happens after this!! Please? :P
Love the story and how you wrote it, even though I loudly protested a lot in the start when he left but now I'm stuck in it!!

Love, Minna

Author's Response: Well, Minna, I am glad that you decided to stick around even though Spike was a bit of a dolt in the begining. Thanks so much for the review!

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