Date: 01/06/2008 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
This was another tight, entertaining chapter. Spike is forceful and sexy on the outside, but I love that he's riddled with the same insecurities as anyone. Worried that he's pushing too hard, being too open with his emotions. It's delightful.
Date: 12/23/2007 - 05:30 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Well this should be interesting, I can't wait for more update soon please.
Date: 12/21/2007 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Just read the entire story so far, I really liked it. Looking forward to more.
Date: 12/19/2007 - 06:53 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Riley should just leave! Or he might get into trouble... *grins*
Date: 12/18/2007 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Certainly not a fun interuption, but a necessary evil given the situation. Can only imagine what Spike will do to that wanker. Gotta say I'm looking forward to it. Great chapter.
Date: 12/18/2007 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Excellent chapter! There was a bit of everything in this one: some of Spike's history with Drusilla, still some mystery surrounding Spike's feeding habits, a yummy make out scene and a totally sweet Harmony shout out! And I was so hoping Riley was gonna show up. I can't wait to see what happens with that conversation! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Date: 12/17/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Hmm, what gonna happen now? *Hope that Spike will end up kicking Riley's ass!! :D* :P
Goddie, goodie, now give me more of these goodies(the chapters)!
More, please soon?! :D
Love, Minna
Date: 12/17/2007 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
please PLEASE tell me that spike is gonna knock riley off of his ass???!!!! lol. great job. loved it bunches. more soon.
Date: 12/17/2007 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
oooo i cant wait till the next chapter lol spike and riley finaly meet lol
hope you update again soon:)
Date: 12/17/2007 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Damn! This is gonna be good! Can't wait for Spike to put Riley in his place. Great chapter! Loved seein' things from Spike's pov for a change.
Date: 12/17/2007 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Loved the chapter. You write so well! It just draws me inn, and I'm loving every minute. Good dialogue, good take on the explanation of a turning. They're so cute. Please make Riley go away fast (Spike must be hungry by now...) - so we can have more of the two of them : )
Date: 12/17/2007 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Comments? Yes, I think there will be comments. Like how could you interrupt that lovely snogging soon-to-be shagging moment with RF???!!! Just kidding, love the sudden drop!
Sd
Date: 12/17/2007 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Riley couldn't just wait till the fun part was over could he? So typical. ;) lookin' forward to seeing how big a fool Riley is.
Date: 12/17/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Yes! I knew Riley would show up! And I wonder how long Spike can keep Buffy in the dark about his feeding. Seems she doesn't realize that "dinner" usually ends up dead, and that it almost happened to her. Great chapter!
Date: 12/16/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
WOW, that's a lot of high emotions running for Spike and I understand his reluctance to talk to her about certain issues, but respect the fact he does - and with good reason. He understands that if Buffy is ever going to 'understand' just what she'd gotten herself into then, all the cards have to be laid on the table. And I don't blame Bufy for not saying those 3 little words back. Poor thing has a lot to take in on such a short amount of time - but I have confidence she will when its appropriate. And oh boy, Riley. All I can think is that Spike will try and let her handle it on her own first, but if Riley does or says the wrong, well, Spike is a very possessive vamp and will make it perfectly clear to Riley to 'piss-off' so to speak. Can't wait for the next chapter - have a feeling it's going to be the most interesting one. Bravo on a chapter well done darling - cliffy was delicious.
Date: 12/16/2007 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
OH so no Spike gets to meet the ex. I love it.
Date: 12/16/2007 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Too cute for words!! Loved this chapter - got really pissed when they were interrupted by the door and even more so when I realised it was butt-munch Finn!! Get him away so they can get on with the good stuff!!! Who deos he think he is anyway - geez take a hint!
Can't wait for more
Sarah
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Date: 12/16/2007 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Oh, I love the story! Wanna, wanna, wanna know how Finn is going to be scared away! BTW I'm wondering if Giles is a retired watcher in your story and if he steps into play later too??
Date: 12/16/2007 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Good chapter, nice stopping point. You know Spike was a bit hungry and Riley is there like a delivered Happy Meal. You could take care of two problems at once. No divorce, no splitting bank accounts, material items and she is still gets his insurance. Riley can have a nice tombstone.
Date: 12/16/2007 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Ooo, that's going to be interesting...Riley, take a hint!!
Date: 12/16/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
What's Riley going to think of Spike I wonder.... Great chapter!
Date: 12/16/2007 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Loved the update - could Riley be Spike's dinner? That way Buffy will realise that Spike kills people to feed. Really looking forward to more.
Date: 12/16/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Oooh... this is gonna be fun!
Date: 12/16/2007 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Glad that Spike's declaration went well, Buffy isn't running. Spike feared the worst in vain. Loved Spike being so thoughtful to explain things. ~ Uh-huh, an unwelcome visitor. Now I'm looking forward to more, what will happen next.