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Reviewer: Bec Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2011 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Six

I really enjoyed the first few chapters of this fic! It was great and I think you captured Spike and Buffy really well :) Unfortunately one of my pet hates in fics is when Spike turns human and makes everyone call him William :( But great writing I really enjoyed it!!! Loved having Clint as an evil mind controlling demon (we all know that Buffy would never willingly marry anyone other than Spike!)
Bec

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter Six

she's just such a bitch sometimes, . . . why the hell can't seh admit that she loves him and stop tortoring the guy?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Six

What a wonderful chapter bringing back some old friends and inner demons, so to speak, and one of the most eloquent descriptions of their relationship that I've ever heard---er, read. "Being without you is never better. Yeah, it hurts like hell being with you, but I'd rather ache in your arms than ache alone." Or maybe that's a good mantra for most relationships. Fabulous chapter.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter Six

Addie that was incredible. I was not sure I could deal with human Spike/William but you do a fantastic job. The emotions he is going through and feeling everything. I like how you are taking this and I am anxious to read the rest. Loved how he still loved bloom'n onions...can't say I blame him they are good *laughs*.. I enjoyed the tenderness of the sex scene, William losing his "virginity" so to speak..how funny,but you painted a nice picture of the scene...great job

Reviewer: demona424 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2004 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Six

I just found this story today. This chapter made my heart hurt. Poor Spike/Wiliam. I'm glad I have a few more chapters after this one, or I would have been biting my nails!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2004 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter Six

Mmh - Spike is still strong? Than he can take a pissed off Slayer if they argue/Fight. Oh ! And Dawn is very insightfull. Sigh - And I thought now Spike and Buffy could get together again. Buf now Spike ...? Second thought? I can understand, though. He don't have eterny left to wait for Buffy to come to her senses. I wonder how long she'll stay before she fled again. I forgot which chapter I'm reviewing. 6? 5? I send this one and we'll see.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2004 - 02:44 am Title: Chapter Six

Wow. I really like this story--even if Buffy had a husband called *Clint*... I'm sure William's predicament has more meaning than you've let on, so please update soon!

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