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Date: 08/18/2014 - 03:32 am Title: Those 19 Days

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Date: 11/19/2013 - 08:53 pm Title: Those 19 Days

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Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2009 - 11:55 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Well, having never really watched Angel because i can't stand him as a character, so i'll gloss over the bits about him! But the Buffy/Willow dialogue was excellent. I'm glad you picked to emphasise that Spike had nothing to gain by looking after Dawn, except he was just keeping a promise to a woman whom he loved - obviously not scoring any brownie points from anyone for doing it either. And i also like how it made Willow think too. I wil continue to read this as i'd like to see where it goes!

Author's Response: Hey Andy,

Angel as himself in his show was ok. He was brooding a lot but it was his show. I preferred him away from Buffy's show than in Buffy. He was very annoying in Buffy for me.

Reason for me focusing on Season 5 was because of Spike's return from Hellmouth. I wanted Buffy to be there so I am writing this story. If you would like, I would be happy to put episode Summary so that you won't get confused as the story is written as inbetween scenes in the episodes. Atleast that's how it is for now.

Thanks for the review. I hope you will read on and keep commenting. Will update soon.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2009 - 08:14 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Definitely an interesting start, and I enjoyed Willow and Buffy's conversation. She needs someone to talk to.

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 - 09:54 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Looks good can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Those 19 Days

I downloaded the first 3 chapters, came to review and now there's only 1 chapter? Colour me puzzled. Anyway... I love where you're going with this. Buffy needs to get her act in gear and tell Spike she still loves him and isn't intending to get back with Angel! One small criticism... you appear to be using a lot of dialogue from the show. I'd prefer it if you minimised this (we all know what happened!) and just filled in the bits between except for the parts where it's radically changed by Buffy's or Dawn's presence... but that's just my own view. Feel free to ignore me.

Author's Response: Hi,

Like you, others felt the same way that I have used a lot of dialogues from the show. I thought it would be ok because I wanted to integrate the characters to the show. But I was wrong. So now I am rewriting chapters 2 and 3 again. Once finished, it will be as you suggested, I will upload in the next 2 days. Please kindly review the chapters after that.

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 02:36 am Title: Those 19 Days

Okay - here is my review...Domdomdom...I'm trying to go for effect - not working huh?

Anyway, let me get to the point. I am very analytical. What Jake might see well I take it a tad further. I read into it and also look at what just happened throughout the season 7. One I will tell you that it would be nice that Willow and Buffy had this much of an in depth convo in the show, but the sort of did albeit more accusative though. "Her why does everyone still think I'm in love with Spike" However you took it in depth which is good. However, I'm not feeling your Willow. She wasn't this closed minded to Spike. She was on the trip of acceptance that Xander was embarking on. She definitely wasn't on the up and up of Giles. But given that it is your story...I'm going with it.

Yes you do need a beta. I will be honest about that. But, and that is a big but you did very well considering. It was brave to post this and see how it did without the beta. There were places I felt there shouldn't be some sentences. Especially with the Angel part and not sensing the newly called Slayers from the spell on the Scythe. It felt like you the author was giving the reader an explanation.

I like that you gave Buffy that time to come to an epiphany of what Spike truly meant to her. It was a real realization rather than feelings for demise as some thank you to her and mankind. That was really good of you to point that out. What I didn't like was her listening to Willow on advice on how it is to lose someone you care for. They still might be friends and so on but the difference between their 'love' relationships were on a completely different level. I would have said what the hell do you know? You were truly in a good place with the woman you loved and then lost her! I had a few days to work past all the hurt between us. Then OMG then you tell me to try to get back with my ex...Uh this sounds like a Willow still pushing Buffy to do something she wants her to do rather than letting Buffy grieve. That sounds like Willow, but what didn't sound Willowish was the pushing of accepting and thinking Angel changed when they had heaps loads of history and then to top it all off saying it was possibly her destiny? Ok that part could be right but it sounded to me like WIllow was Angel matchmaking like she did with Riley. Ugh that infuriates me!

Now see ask Callmekitten - I analyze everything to bits!!!! It's by no means to be harsh but it is to help you dig deeper and me the reader to get angsty to then feeling tons of joy for the awesome ending of Spuffy! I am also a bit leery of the Angel/Buffy possible theme. Not my thing like most human stories aren't either, but I usually bear it. I read some but I come to Spuffy land for the supernatural and yumminess of those two or maybe Spuffy and Tara or Anya...But Angel bleh ewwww and god I would take even Dru over Angel...Please don't go that route! Cuz you will lose me...I'm getting asked to read a story featuring Angel Buffy and Spike - I just shudder...I think the closest I accept them is if it's in the form of Angelus. Angel is a lie to me. Ok done ranting but in all fairness this was a fab start! A few mistakes and author explaining, but overall good. Make sure you stay in characterization. I know you can change them to fit your story, but keep in mind you just came from Season 7 Willow wasn't in the band of not accepting of Spike and she new darn well Spike was of the soul variety. Hmmmm. Going on to read the next but know this I will not lie and give you a full head on review. But if I don't always review straight away it's cuz I either put it up on word or printed it out so I could read...I so read at work lol.

So it's a heads up my reviews tend to be lengthy and really get to the heart of the story! I hope this wasn't taken the wrong way! Good story.

Author's Response: Hi Lissa,

It is good if you are analytical. I want to know my mistakes so that I can improve on. Please share your opinion freely.

As for Willow and Buffy, Willow does not know the depth of Buffy's relationship with Spike. She was going dark in Season 6 and Buffy didn't confess to anyone about her feelings in Season 7. Willow do know Buffy had more than friendly feelings but her awareness was more about Buffy's relationship with Angel. So now that Spike is dead and Buffy is not loaded with responsibilities, she wants Buffy to move on. In her eyes, Angel is the one Buffy had always been in love with and she is preventing her friend from grieving and make her move on. In summary, Willow is trying to fix things for Buffy.

I am not a fan of Angel/Buffy either but for angsty purposes, I might create scenes where it may appear it is Angel/Buffy. But I can assure you that nothing concrete will happen. Atleast not between Angel and Buffy. ;)

Please keep reviewing. Your honest review helps me assess myself. I got myself a good beta now (Xaph) and I have updated the chapters.

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2009 - 06:16 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Good start, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2009 - 07:55 am Title: Those 19 Days

Cool idea for a story! Wish I'd thought of it first! lol I really liked the convo between Buffy and Willow. It's a shame that we didn't get something like that on the show *sigh*

Author's Response: Thanks PB. I hope I can keep up to your expectations in my next chapters.

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2009 - 02:34 am Title: Those 19 Days

Loved it, I really did. keep going, and remind us when updates are posted. Well done >^.^< Plague

Author's Response: I will certainly do. Have the story added in your favourites and you will get an immediate update. Probably somewhere this weekend.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2009 - 09:55 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Hey I'm loving your story, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Won't have to wait long. Have me added in your favourites and you will receive an update.

Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2009 - 09:15 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Oh man, I cannot wait to see where you go from here!

Author's Response: Thanks bro. Been a while. Hope you will follow the whole story.

Reviewer: _3xy_ Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2009 - 04:23 pm Title: Those 19 Days

This is pretty interesting and I would like to see where this goes.

Author's Response: I have the idea of how to go through the whole season with Buffy involved. Just putting them into words. Keep me in alert and please review after each chapter. I'm sure you won't be disappointed.

Reviewer: lilashannah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2009 - 02:48 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Great chappy.I can't wait to see where you take this.
I wonder what Buffy is going to do when Spike pops out of the ugly gem.hee.

Author's Response: Don't have to wait long. Next chapter will be up by the weekend. Keep me in your alert and please review after each chapter. Will motivate me more to write faster.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2009 - 09:04 pm Title: Those 19 Days

Interesting. I like the beginning of this. Hope you'll post more soon.

Author's Response: Will be posting regularly. Atleast twice a week. Each episode seems to be splitted into two chapters. Should I post each chapter seperately or together on the same day? Open for suggestions.

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