Reviews For After the Fall

Name: AgentKalGibbs (Signed) · Date: 04/04/2015 - 07:21 am · For: Chapter 73

But but but... Where's the rest of it...? :(



Name: Miranda (Signed) · Date: 03/05/2014 - 05:03 am · For: Chapter 73
Is that it? Good story


Name: ScarlettDuck (Signed) · Date: 06/13/2012 - 09:14 am · For: Chapter 73
Good story, but long... probably could have split it into 3 stories & you'd have a trilogy! Still lots of typos (which, in some cases, still spell a word, so you need to check the vocab); you might want to have someone check it (again).

Also, another nit-pick: there are many instances of incorrect negative/positive statements (like it says "he tried to kill her several times over the years, but he just could do it" when it clearly should be "could not do it")... I could still tell from context, but it was confusing at first. There were really a lot of those.

Beyond the simple mechanics, I did like the story. I like a happy Spuffy tale where they figure out how to love each other, and I especially like how you didn't have to resort to making any of the friends (Xander, Willow or Angel) a villian like some stories do, but you still realistically showed them as flawed and complex characters who had to struggle with the idea of Spuffy before making peace. Also like that you could redeem Faith while she remains ambivalent... it's nuanced, in character for her and is so much more realistic than if she were suddenly totally good/loyal/humble/etc.

All in all, I really liked it... will there be more?? Feels like we need to meet the baby and see how they manage, at least at first. I mean, we haven't even learned Bitty Buffy's name yet!


Name: ScarlettDuck (Signed) · Date: 06/13/2012 - 09:11 am · For: Chapter 73
Good story, but long... probably could have split it into 3 stories & you'd have a trilogy! Still lots of typos (which, in some cases, still spell a word, so you need to check the vocab); you might want to have someone check it (again).

Also, another nit-pick: there are many instances of incorrect negative/positive statements (like it says "he tried to kill her several times over the years, but he just could do it" when it clearly should be "could not do it")... I could still tell from context, but it was confusing at first. There were really a lot of those.

Beyond the simple mechanics, I did like the story. I like a happy Spuffy tale where they figure out how to love each other, and I especially like how you didn't have to resort to making any of the friends (Xander, Willow or Angel) a villian like some stories do, but you still realistically showed them as flawed and complex characters who had to struggle with the idea of Spuffy before making peace. Also like that you could redeem Faith while she remains ambivalent... it's nuanced, in character for her and is so much more realistic than if she were suddenly totally good/loyal/humble/etc.

All in all, I really liked it... will there be more?? Feels like we need to meet the baby and see how they manage, at least at first. I mean, we haven't even learned Bitty Buffy's name yet!


Name: ScarlettDuck (Signed) · Date: 06/11/2012 - 09:16 am · For: Ten Sharp
What a sweet first time for them!


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 01/18/2012 - 01:20 pm · For: Chapter 73
This was a wonderful story...but where's the rest?


Name: All4Spike (Signed) · Date: 01/03/2012 - 06:24 pm · For: Chapter 73
Came back for a re-read of this wonderful story. Still one of the best rewrites of season 6 out there. No updates for a year? I hope you haven't abandoned it......


Name: magnus374 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/20/2010 - 11:52 am · For: Chapter 73
Nice chapter.


Name: magnus374 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/20/2010 - 11:34 am · For: Chapter 69
I've read it on Elysian Fields before, guess I will read the rest here then. Anyway it's good to have more.


Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 12/19/2010 - 09:55 pm · For: Chapter 73
Uh-huh hope Buffy is really okay (because she said someone was at the door).
Looking forward to more.


Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 12/19/2010 - 09:39 pm · For: Chapter 72
Oh evil cliffhanger! Good I missed a chapter (or did you post two?)
*Off to the next one*


Name: AMI (Signed) · Date: 12/18/2010 - 01:12 am · For: Chapter 73
Thank God Buffy and Bitty Buffy are OK. Something fishys going on tho, Buffy heard something and then everything was blacK? Uh oh. That's worrisome.

I love caretaker daddy Spike...he's so adorable.:) I love their relationship, and can't wait for the birth.

Great chappie once again.:)


Name: AMI (Signed) · Date: 12/18/2010 - 01:04 am · For: Chapter 72
Eeeep...OMG what happened to Buffy? Evil cliffie!

I like that Hank was OK in this story, and that Faith and Buffy are getting along too.
On to the next chappie.


Name: nea (Anonymous) · Date: 12/17/2010 - 07:42 pm · For: Los Angeles
I'm really really enjoying this story so far and am only stopping to comment on this chapter because Spike somehow got into Hank's house without an invite. I just thought you might want to fix that. It's just a small mistake. The story really is fantastic.


Name: albie (Anonymous) · Date: 12/17/2010 - 11:28 am · For: Chapter 73
I was so excited to see that you updated that I had to reread the whole story. Yeah, that just took a couple days :)

Still just as fantastic as I remembered and I'm enjoying the new installments as well. I get the feeling that the "look within" prophecy hasn't exactly been squashed yet. Or that this is something new. Hm. Either way, looking forward to more!


Name: amayuscula (Signed) · Date: 12/15/2010 - 03:51 pm · For: Chapter 73
I like the chapter. Please update as soon as you can.


Name: All4Spike (Signed) · Date: 12/15/2010 - 03:49 pm · For: Chapter 73
So Buffy answered the door and everything just went black? Colour me suspicious... it's never that simple.


Name: amayuscula (Signed) · Date: 12/15/2010 - 11:01 am · For: Chapter 72
You are really evil leaving the story there. Please update as soon as you can, because I wat to know what happened.

Author's Response: I know...I gotta be evil sometimes, don't I? Haha...:) Thank you!


Name: All4Spike (Signed) · Date: 12/15/2010 - 10:49 am · For: Chapter 72
Oh, no! You evil cliffhanging person, you! More please... NOW!

Author's Response: :) Thanks All4Spike!


Name: yumimum (Signed) · Date: 12/15/2010 - 09:17 am · For: Chapter 72
OMG I really wasn't expecting that! Please update soon before I chew all my fingernails off! :)

Author's Response: :) Thank you!


Name: All4Spike (Signed) · Date: 12/13/2010 - 11:47 pm · For: Chapter 71
So glad to see this story being updated again. Love where you're going with it, although I would have preferred them to have had a more permanent solution to Travers! Hope Dana is going to be OK. Time for Buffy & Spike to find out about Connor and for Buffy to totally kick Angel's ass for the creepy stalker carousel and double standards re: vampires' babies. Can't wait.....

Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, a few chapters back, Buffy and Angel talked about Connor over the phone. It was one of the chapters in the 60s...67 or so, maybe? It's been over a year since I went over that part. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story though! Thanks!


Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 12/13/2010 - 12:25 am · For: Chapter 71
It's good to see Buffy so happy :)
And a new update for the story.


Name: SpikesGirl (Signed) · Date: 12/12/2010 - 01:34 am · For: Chapter 71
Wonderful story. So glad you started writing about it again. Please finish it. I am patiently awaiting your update.


Name: yumimum (Signed) · Date: 12/11/2010 - 08:22 am · For: Chapter 71
Buffy, believe me, by the time she’s old
enough to date, the boys will be so terrified of us.

LOL Loved that line. Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic.


Name: AMI (Anonymous) · Date: 12/11/2010 - 05:39 am · For: Chapter 71
I'm so happy to see a quick update. :)

Good to see Travers gone and Dana taken care of too.And that was some nicc, hot Spuffy loving. So glad that they're happy. I hope it lasts.

Hope you have more soon. Great chappie. :)


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