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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Battle and Its Rewards

A good story, I like the interaction between Buffy and Spike.

Reviewer: buffyconverrt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Battle and Its Rewards

I really enjoyed this wonder-novel. Except for a little bit of odd grammar, it is an excellent piece. Buffy was at her heroic best, unlike some of the dopey things she "really" did during the Glory days.
Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope you enjoy some of my other stories. I'm working with a beta now so hopefully things have a bit less of the odd grammar. Thanks so much for the review. It's encouraging to see someone enjoying my stories :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2009 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Battle and Its Rewards

What Giles did was necessary - the only way to prevent Glory from coming back.
I liked Buffy's decision (at the end) to share the orbs with Spike - this way he can get into the sun without hurting.

Author's Response: I realy liked that to. She could have kept them and been all powerful but instead she allowed Spike to be free to walk in the sun and to be her equal. It was actually one of my favorite parts of the story.

Reviewer: darlaslilgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2009 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Battle and Its Rewards

great story, i loved it, it made me smile a lot in every chapter

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! I was posting something because my other stories were being beta-ed and I wanted to make sure you guys have something fun to read. I'm glad I made you smile. Thanks for the compliment!

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2009 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Battle and Its Rewards

The story itself is really sweet. :) I echo what the others said about the editing and the quick pace of it. But I just want to tell you that I think it's great that you wrote this. A lot of people don't even attempt to write, and with a little polishing up in the spelling/revision department, this would be a little easier to read. I enjoyed it!


Author's Response: Thanks, I didn't mean to be mean in my last review to the no-namer. I guess I'm just a tad frustrated in the troubles of finding a beta. Thanks for the compliment. I enjoy writing. I'm mostly new to it. I only started writing fanficiton a few months ago and I wasn't actually planning to publish anything. I was mostly doing it for myself but I figured if someone else enjoys it, I should share. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully one of the two betas I'm working with now, will turn out to have time and be a great help so I can belt out the stories I have in waiting. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: uri6 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2009 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter 7: The Battle and Its Rewards

Really nice plot, but you some parts of the story went too quickly (like the battle scenes).

BTW, the part with Buffy and Spike eating each others' food was really cute!



Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. Yeah i was making the story today pretty much because I'm waiting for stuff to eventually someday to be beta-ed. Unfortunately since I have to find a beta and then wait on them, it takes a while. So I sat today and wrote up the story just to be able to post something and because I was having fun with the idea of Buffy really seeing what Riley was like. Sorry about the quick battle scenes. Usually I give an attempt at them but this time I didn't. Glad you still liked it though.

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