Reviews For Last Dance
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2012 - 05:16 pm Title: One

Would love a sequel... a nice start!

Reviewer: Blond Goth Girl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2010 - 03:15 am Title: One

Very nice little interlude

Reviewer: nettan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 10:21 pm Title: One

Please do a sequel, can´t wait to see what happens next ^^

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 - 03:55 am Title: One

This was really great, and I'd love to see it expanded into a larger fic.

Reviewer: Shiloh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 01:33 pm Title: One

Yeah, sequel would be kinda cool!!!

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 - 03:15 am Title: One

Yes, I want more...I love this!

Reviewer: sc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2009 - 09:45 am Title: One

I think that this is a great start and a sequel would be awesome!

Reviewer: BlackFire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 - 04:46 am Title: One

Nice! I loved it! I normally hate one-shots (no offense) because I really prefer more depth and detail, but yours was short, yet it still had so much power and emotion. Great job!

Sequel please? =D?

Author's Response: *blushes* Wow, what a great review! I'm like you, I don't normally do one-shots `cause they're not meaty enough. But if I write anything, I have to have PLOT or else it's not worth it to me. So hopefully, even my one-shots have depth. Thanks, BlackFire, and I'll probably do a sequel, just later on down the line.

Reviewer: buffyconvert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 - 05:25 pm Title: One

Loveed the part about Spike listening to conversation between Angelus & Xander. Please finish this soon!!

Author's Response: Sorry, dearest, this IS finished. It was a one-shot for a prompt. I may do a sequel on down the line, so keep an eye out. Thank you, Buffy convert for the review

Reviewer: Madame Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 01:06 am Title: One

I love the Spuffy take on the episode! Really really sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks, Madame! Going back to watch this, I could see so much, even back then that was overtly Spuffy. I was blessed to have buffy_the_vamp6 make me a banner that compliments the fic so well! Yes, it was fluff, something I indulge in rarely, but I needed this. Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 08:23 pm Title: One

Loved it! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks, PN! It was really an afirmation for me, doing fluff. Just wanted to make I could still do it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 04:00 pm Title: One

I love the dialog you wrote between Buffy and Spike. Yes, please make a sequel or continue this. Would love to see what you have Spike say or do to Dru and what Angel(us) will do. Great story.

Author's Response: I loved the banter between Buffy and Spike, it was so easy to write. I'll have to kick around the idea for a bit, but I'm sure I'll come back to this in time. Thank you so much SJ, I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: JOI liked it ! it was a nice little story Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 03:35 pm Title: One

I liked it .It was a nice little story , love the big bad.p

Author's Response: LOL, yeah, I think everyone loves the Big Bad! I know I do! Thanks for the review Joi!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 01:04 pm Title: One

This story featured such great dialogue between Spike and Buffy. I wouldn't mind reading more if you decided to continue. ;-) Thanks for the entertaining read Carrie!

Author's Response: Thank you Mary! The dialogue between Spike and Buffy was so fun to write, it was almost like an everyday conversation with my husband! LOL. I might continue it down the road, just not right now. Thanks again, hun!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 12:58 pm Title: One

Heh - fun to read :) I am the Big Bad... just, you know... on hiatus.
And you're asking? Yes please, I'd like to read a sequel :D

Author's Response: LMAO! I loved that line, Cordy! hehehhe I just might do a sequel on down the road. Thank you so much Cordy!

Reviewer: mscotstar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 05:44 am Title: One

I enjoyed this immensely.

“No! My arse won’t be flappin’ in the breeze for you knob-jockey’s to be takin’ a gander at!”


I use the term knob-Jockey all the time, especially when I'm driving. When I read it in your story it made me laugh. This was a fab story, loved all Spike's dialogue. Really hope there will be a sequel. Thanks for sharing x

Author's Response: LMAO! Isn't that like the funniest term you've ever heard or used? I snickered while writing it! I'm glad you laughed, for that was one of the main points. I'll probably do a sequel down the road. Thank you so much, MsCotstar!

Reviewer: olinka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 04:23 am Title: One

That's awesome :) Wanna sequel!!!

Author's Response: Hehehhe, thanks Olinka! I'll do one down the line! Thanks for reading and leaving a review, it helps!

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 03:34 am Title: One

I'd love more of this if you don't delay by weeks, months, even years like other writers. Thanks!

Author's Response: Ahh.. the old delay, eh? I promise to not take YEARS. Anything else is up for grabs because I have several WIPS in progress. Sorry. But thank for the review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: OKDeanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 03:12 am Title: One

Okay, so I already reviewed this on spuffy_wonder, but it's just too good not to read here and review again. I truly loved every word of this story. Although, I have to say, I'm a big fan of action tags with heartfelt dialogue and this story was spot full of them.

My favorite moments from this:

“As long as I know it’ll be you and me at the end, I can wait,” he assured her, squeezing her fingers.

“You and I will always dance,” she murmured, drifting in and out of sleep, curling her hand in his.

“That we will,” he promised, gently brushing away a stray hair on her forehead. “

And this one...

“Promise me the last dance, Buffy?”

She inhaled sharply at the tenderness of his actions and the sound of her name on his lips. “Try and keep me from it.”

Grinning from ear to ear, he winked at her and backed away. “That’s my Slayer.”


And of course that ending... it was so perfect! I could totally see Spike busting out of those doors and yelling that. Perfect character voice for Spike.

Excellent job!

*squishes*

Deanna



Author's Response: *bounces* YAY!!!!!! I'm so glad you liked it - I hope I did the prompt justice, even though there wasn't any smut. I can do comedy and heartfelt sentiments out the whazoo (just what IS a whazoo anyway?) but this just didn't call for any smuttage. It was too early in the season for it and she wouldn't have been ready for it. This just gives a hint at what's already there. You picked some of my favorite lines! *SQUEE* I hear Spike's voice in my head (yeah, I'm psycho and he talks to me) more than Buffy. And oddly enough, Xander's in there too. *shakes head* Thankee so much for reviewing both places! I need to catch up on my reading/reviewing because I've been VERY lax lately. *huggle squishes you!*

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