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Reviewer: KB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2020 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 7

This was amazing, thank you for sharing

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2012 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

So, so good. Love wise, forthright Spike, saying what needs to be said. A really good exploration of the relationships and motivations, and the ways in which the characters are good and bad. Love the way you always have Spike and Buffy well matched, equal.

Author's Response: I’ve always thought of Spike and Buffy as equals. Their strengths match and so do their vulnerabilities. They make the perfect team. No one else in the Buffyverse truly fits with either of them. I’m so glad you like it!

Reviewer: sus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 7

I know it's an old one but I've only now found the courage to read it. The summary scared me, but it's a fantastic story. I hope we'll be hearing more from you. :-)

Author's Response: I'm a rabid Spuffy girl, so I'm not capable of writing a really mean Spike. *g* I love Spike and Buffy, so you will be seeing more stories from me. I'm so glad you liked this one - it's one of my favorites.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2010 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 7

loved reading this!! :D simple as that!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! It was so much fun to write.

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2010 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

From start to finish this was an amazing story. Skilled writing and storytelling that I had such a genuine pleasure reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I trying to learn how to write well and writing Spuffy is a fun way to do it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: -jay- Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2010 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

i luved it. i luved it so much because its different from most of the other fics ive read. great work

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried how people would react to a chip-on-the-shoulder Spike. :D

Reviewer: Mary C. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

First fanfic to ever make me cry. Loved it.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2009 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 7

I've taken a loooong break from reading any fic and decided to read this on a whim upon seeing it was complete and not too long (and Spuffy, of course) and am so glad I did!

Really satisfying tale. The mind/body switch has been done a zillion times but you've hit upon an iteration that really works. Bravo! Thanks so much for sharing.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! I love playing the different Spikes/Buffys against each other and their dynamic is always so fascinating. Thank you for enjoying it!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

So glad she and he managed to connect on a few levels. Actually, they pretty much hit them all by the end. A very happy ending indeed. Glad Spike finally gets to be loved. Thanks for this one. I loved the character development.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! The character development was what I was really after in this story. I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: romy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 7

Thank God they didn't claim each other. Don't get me wrong, I do believe that Buffy and Spike are meant to be forever and I want them to be mates but it takes more than a few days or weeks to really be ready, in my opinion at least ;)
With that said, is there a chance for a sequel? You wrapped it up perfectly and it is a great story on its own. But I would like to see how they move on :) Especially with your writing, it made me enjoy the story so much more!

Author's Response: That's what I thought too - that it was way too soon. Buffy had only just realized she loved him and Spike wouldn't want to take advantage. I hadn't intended a sequel and I've dealt with the possible changes in other stories, so didn't want to repeat myself. But so many people are asking for one that I'll see whether I can figure out a new twist. :) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 7

I loved your story. This is the Spike that I always wanted to see - 'deadly, dangerous and lethal'; one to be respected. The Spike in the series became so pathetic that there was no hint of what he supposedly once was - it was sad beyond anything. Now with Spike being true to himself, Buffy will have what she needs - a partner and Spike will finally have what he has always wanted as well - to be 'enfolded, cherished and loved'. Perfect!

Author's Response: Oh, I know! They didn't have to take away all his fangs. I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: betty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh, sigh. You always write such satisfying endings. I love your endings and this one is no exception. I think you were right not to get them to the claiming stage too quickly. Admitting that they love each other is quite enough at this stage. This makes me also hope (dare I say it?) that there might be a sequel. I can just imagine the trouble Buffy dating an unchipped untamed Spike might cause -- maybe not from Giles or Xander, but from Angel if he found out. He returned and gave Riley a hard time, so I could totally see him taking issue with Spike being in the picture.

Anyway, even if you don't write a sequel this was a real tour-de-force and I thoroughly enjoyed it. "Change partners and Dance" and "Her Way" both have versions of Untamed Spike that I absolutely adore, but this was an interesting new twist, which is why I definitely want more of it if you are so inclined. You remain one of my absolute favourite Spuffy authors. Thanks for a great story and please keep on writing (wherever your muse takes you)!

Author's Response: Rabid Spuffy girl here. :D I'll always have them in love and equals. I hadn't planned a sequel, but so many people are asking that I'm considering it now. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I love Evil-Spike, so he'll turn up again for sure.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

Buffy really does something about knowing things now. It's still early enough to change things for Willow and Giles. Hopefully for Xander too.
I like the way you describe it: She folded Angel away fondly into a compartment in her heart, the same way one ties a pink ribbon around old love letters and puts them away affectionately but with finality into some desk drawer.
Spike is still helping. And he's right, so hard it is: Killing Ben will save people.
And Buffy decided that she wanted Spike :) She made his day and more.
Spike is willing to be a partner for her. He will be by her side.
It sounds right to wait for the claim; find their way on its own first.
Partners now.
Good way to end the story. :D

Author's Response: It felt too early for a claim. Buffy had only just realized she loves Spike and Spike wouldn't want to take advantage. I'm so glad you liked it! Some people had problems and were too angry to wait and see that everything would turn around.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hi
I thought this was going to be a 'Spike is God and can do no wrong and Buffy is to blame for everything' type of fic but happily it wasn't. Really enjoyed it

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I'd never do a 'Spike is God' :D I like having them equals and partners.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 10:31 am Title: Chapter 7

&m totally in awe of how you brought Spuffiness without being schmoopy. You knocked this fic right out of the park. Reading this has totally made my crappy week-sore throat and insomnia-better. This is my new favorite fic. Thank you for writing this wonderfully compelling story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you! Trying to keep the romance from going over the top is always hard - I'm so glad you think I succeeded!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 06:52 am Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!
A wonderful ending.. with a better future ahead for all of them.
And I liked that they didn't claim each other yet.. too soon.. believe in each others love first and not taking a short cut by simply claiming one another.
I just loved it, the whole story. Thank you! it made my week :)

Author's Response: I too thought it was too soon. Buffy had only just realized that she was in love and Spike wouldn't want to take advantage. I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!
A wonderful ending.. with a better future ahead for all of them.
And I liked that they didn't claim each other yet.. too soon.. believe in each others love first and not taking a short cut by simply claiming one another.
I just loved it, the whole story. Thank you! it made my week :)

Author's Response: I too thought it was too soon. Buffy had only just realized that she was in love and Spike wouldn't want to take advantage. I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: sonja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter 7

Another great story, I loved it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Spuffygirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter 7

Aww that was a great ending. I can't wait for your next story. That was totally wonderful to read before bed. lol



Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I'm working on the next right now.

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 7

This was an amazing story! I loved how her memories all merged and she realized she loved Spike, and that he loved her and was the perfect partner for her.

The end was beautiful....and with the promise of a claim in the near future! YAY!!
LOVED this story. It was Brilliant!

Thanx for sharing it, hope you have a new one up soon! ^_^

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm working on the next one right now.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 7

Kudos to you! I liked how you showed her thinking about all the future Spike moments and how she could see what he was longing for. Getting help for Willow was good, too. I was a little disappointed at first with not giving Xander his due, but when I thought about it, you were right. He can't be fixed in just a few paragraphs. There is no quick fix there.
I enjoyed this a whole lot, so I hope you're working on more fic soon (not necessarily a sequel) I just love your ideas and style of writing...Well Done!

Author's Response: Fixing Xander is really a long term proposition. :D I'm working on a new one right now - not a sequel, because this one somehow feels finished. I'm so glad you liked it and hope you enjoy the next!

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter 7

So good. I have been looking forward to each chapter and it was a perfect story. I'm just a whore because I always want more. Despite the sweet ending.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 7

I love this story. This chapter was beautifully written. You captured their thoughts and emotions perfectly. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! The last chapter is always the hardest to write for me, tying all the threads together. I'm so glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: menolly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter 7

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
sequel?

Author's Response: Buffy and Spike will be changing so many things that it would really be a new story. So I'm working on a whole new one, not a sequel.

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