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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2013 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter 10

Loving this story (love high school fics), but wanted to let you know that you've called William "Spike" in the 4th paragraph of this chapter, but have only given that nickname to the guitar so far (I think).

Author's Response: Thank you! I will fix that

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

OMG how could u do that and why the fuck is she in the house! omg someone get the Raid lol.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 10

Dun dun dun (or something like that, not sure how it's written) - Dru?
Seems even if WIlliam isn't 'into Dru', Dru is 'into' William?
Surprising. Do they know each other after all?
*reads on*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 10

Well, we've got Buffy's side of the story, and she knows that William was never into Dru, but it seems that Dru is gonna get her claws into him somehow. Through breaking and entering, no less. highly interesting. Looking forward to what happens next. And I hope Buffy really hears what he confessed to when he said he wasn't into Dru. Loving it. Please, update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 10

now looking at the ending again, i realize they're not in his room, but still, the only obvious answer i have is that dru saw buffy with william, and now she wants to steal him away from her. after everything buffy told him about the bitch, i really don't see that happening.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 10

okay, i don't get any of this. why are you making it like dru is an ex who came back to him? they don't know each other here, so how is she suddenly in his room? i get giles being protective, but he was completely out of line, and i hate that buffy is always running away, but really, this story is just confusing me right now. i might give one more chapter a chance.

Author's Response: In hopes that you may continue to read, I want to clear some things up that you mentioned. Firstly, they weren't in his room, they were on his front lawn. William fell asleep on the grass outside. When he wakes up, Dru is standing there. As far as giles is concerned, there is an entire backstory that will explain their father/son relationship and why they act the way they do. Thirdly, Buffy is always running away because she never really had a parental figure to guide her. When faced with a problem she feels she can't handle, she attempts to escape it. Notice that in her past, Dru seriously damages Buffy's mental state because it is easy to. Buffy may be sweet, but she is completely oblivious to what is going on in her life as it happens. With that said, I hope I cleared everything up enough to keep you reading.

Reviewer: coalitiongirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 10

Ooh, I love conflict in my Spuffy! So glad you've decided to put Dru in the mix again! And William's honesty hopefully won't scare Buffy off, not when someone else has suddenly set her sights on him...and speaking of which, I'm willing to bet that this Dru is only after William because Buffy wants him...if she's even after him at all! Love the frequent updates, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 10

Getting better and better....Love the fact that William was so honest about his feelings to Buffy even if Buffy did her usual running away! Keep it coming :-).

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