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Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2010 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Two

*feeds your muse some yummy pizza rolls* Spike sure did make it sound good - damn he's hot! lol It obviously intrigued Buffy; I likey the direction this is heading in :D I was hoping for a scene with her telling Riley to go to hell, instead of the ending of the episode as it aired (cos man, that pissed me off!) lol But I did enjoy the chapter! Love those quiet Spuffy moments :) *huggs*

Author's Response: Yes...she loves pizza in any form! Ya I know most wanted Riley to get a verbal ass kicking, I wanted to focus on behind the scenes. Keep that butthead out of it!

Reviewer: Akela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Two

OMG this is sooo good I cant wait for the next update.

Author's Response: thanks! more will be coming soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter Two

I love, love the fact that Buffy vetoed being a nun because they wear all black and she associates that look better suiting bad ass Spike. Just love the idea that a nun all in black is at all bad ass. And that girl does rock quite a bit of black herself. And the erotic, "show me" talk. Fantastic. Can't wait to be shown. :) Update soon.

Author's Response: More will be shown soon...I promise!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 - 07:46 am Title: Chapter Two

It's good that they could talk to each other. But I dont agree with Spike about men wanting to change their partners, thats what the wimmen do. This story is is emotionel, interesting and funny.

Author's Response: Thanks for your prospective. I think what Spike said could be done by either sex. I'm glad that my multiple facets that I'm trying to portray are coming through

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 - 01:36 am Title: Chapter Two

Cliffhanger! More, please!

Author's Response: More is coming!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter Two

Heh ... the scene was a bit too much for Spike, loosing contact to reality. ;))
Oh Buffy really asked Spike that question. I think she'll be surprised.

Author's Response: A person that stimulates all your desires brings up something that you find hot and you don't have a flashes of naughtyness...then you must not be alive! You bet she'll be really surprised!

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Two

I like the conversations about the nunnery the lesbian possibility and the fantasies that came along with that last one. I am surprised that the fact that she has experienced three vampire bites was not brought up as an example so the show me would be more of his explaining the different types of bites. But I do look forward to him showing her the bite he just tried to describe.

Author's Response: I felt that Spike wouldn't bring up those other 'wankers'. Plus Buffy already knows about a bite to kill...Master, a bite due to being out of their mind and needs to feed...Angel and being under a thrall during a bite...Dracula. Spike doesn't want to explain all the types of bites...only passionate ones.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Two

Now that was a pretty good description for being "indescribable"! Buffy doesn't seem to quite know what she's getting herself into. Loved this chapter, I just thought the interaction between the two was great! also love how Spike describes the problem of men. My male cousin once said to me that men, in technical terms, were "Projecty pants". They like to project the best possible virtues on a woman they find attractive but once they actually get to "know" the women, they wonder why she changed when she didn't change at all.

Can't wait to see Spike's reaction!

Author's Response: Spike's reaction will be...ah ah...you just have to read. (enter evil laugh here!) Nice to hear from you again demona!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Two

Great Buffy/Spike interaction - love that he could make her laugh and that she didn't automatically 'blame the messenger' as she did on the show. Hope she didn't go running after the helicopter...
Looking forward to her 'being shown'...

Author's Response: Unfortunately she did go after the helicopter. This story is based mainly behind the scenes or between episodes. So what had happened in that episode still happened. But since Spike, in my story, went after her instead of letting her go alone, has now changed the story.

Reviewer: Eternal Love Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Two

Eeep! Can't wait for more! Now... off to work... 5 min late lol

Author's Response: Sorry EL, that I made you late! Thanks for your review!

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