Up until now I've enjoyed this. But that chapter really ought to have had a warning. That was disgusting.

Author's Response: Hi, I put what I felt was a pretty strong warning at the top in the author's notes and also gave a link to see a less graphic version of the chapter. I'm sorry that you were offended. I can assure you that there is a reason for the horrible treatment of Buffy; something pretty bad had to happen to her in order for her behavior going forward in the story to be understood. Here's the warning that is in the author's notes. Sorry you don't feel that was sufficient: WARNING!! PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE YOU READ THIS CHAPTER!! This chapter contains rape of a main character by not very nice creatures! Although it's part of the plot, this chapter is violent, disturbing and may be upsetting to some people. If you would rather read a version that is less graphic with regard to the rape scene follow the link below (it will take you to my web site where the alternate version is posted): (link provided in notes). **~** -Passion4Spike 2010.04.22

Author's Response: I hope you'll continue to read to see how the events of this chapter shape the rest of the story. Although there are some dark chapters ahead, none are like this one - B&S will have their love and relationship tested . .. . but I think you'll like the end result. Thanks for posting your opinion. I appreciate your input. -Passion4Spike 2010.04.22

So in that dimension the FE already has Spike under its control. As you say, hard to read.

Author's Response: Yes, it's gonna be a rough road for a while now . . .The First Evil is really gonna mess with our heroes. . . . Thanks for reading and posting your thoughts! I truly appreciate it! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.22